rosid ff : Rosid's Titanic ( completed )

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Here goes my 6th ff ...Not to be worry at all ..i wont kill titanic movie in anyways ..this ff is a different story line everything is different no way related to titanic ...but as it was ship concept I kept this title ...hmmm how their love story bloom in the ship and travels...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1

Mumbai harbor

A biggest cruise ship was standing

Many people were getting down

Many people just came to see the ship from long distances

Small children were blinking and looking at the ship

Everybody whoever stands there or moves that side this ship will make them to freeze in sec by looking at it

There in the ship a handsome tall boy came with a white shirt half tucked in his white pant and the stars in his shoulders show he is working in a big position in the ship...he removed his cap and his style will make everybody nub...the badge in his shirt pocket written as caption sidhant barathwaj... he smiled looking at a old lady and middle aged lady and a man who was standing and waiting for him

Sidhant:- what a surprise mataji all came here ...I might be coming home only right

Mataji:- I am not ur mom sujatha only

Sujatha widened her eyes

Sujatha:- no no iam not u r papa only

Sidhant gave a sharp look at them

Sidhant:- papa say me what is happening??

Mataji:-( signaling not to say ) rajendar say him

Rajendar gulped his saliva

Rajendar:- oh sidhant just like that came ...Mm to seeing the ship and just like a outing

Sidhant was not satisfied on his explanation but he did not ask more

Sidhant ,his mom ,dad and mataji moved towards airport in a taxi

They went to Delhi from Mumbai in airplane

Then again they got into a cab

The cab stopped in front of a mall

Rajendar:- sidhant change ur dress and come na

Sidhant buried his eyebrows and gave a confused look

Sidhant:- why??

Mataji:- oh sidhant u are in uniform ..how will come home like this

Sidhant now raised his eyebrows

Sidhant:- but before and all I used to come home in uniform only

Sujatha:- not that sidhant ...our neighborhood verma aunty sister has came ..if she see u in this dress she will make a bad evil eye on u

Sidhant :- mom but

Sujatha:- no sidhant I cant leave my son to fall for any bad evil eyes,.. so go

Sidhant took his mouth to one side as he was not ok ...but doing

Sidhant went into the mall ...

His family members took a deep breath

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2

Sidhant came back with a formal dress slightly tucked in his pant

He was feeling something fishy

He saw they are going in some other route

Sidhant;- where are we going??

Mataji;- woh sidhant my friend is in vrinthavan will meet her and go ...I saw her long ago so

Sidhant:- oh

After some travel

The cab stopped in front of a house not to too big not too small

Sidhant looked at the house

They got down

A lady and a man welcomed them

Sidhant was literally confused on their humble welcome

They sat on sofa

Mataji:- sidhant she is meena and his husband jamanlal

Sidhant smiled at them

They too smiled

Sidhant now understood something

Sidhant looked at sujatha

Sujatha downed her face

Mataji:- where is roli

Meena went and brought a beautiful girl in traditional saree

Sidhant looked at her a sec

He now totally understood why they have came here

Sidhant:- mataji what s happening ...without my accept how can u do this

Mataji:- sidhant her name is roli ..she is good and beautiful look at her and say

Sidhant:- no she is not ...i don't like her nor iam interested in this marriage

Sidhant got up and went out

Roli was giving a angry look on sidhant who was moving out

Mataji;- sorry for the mistake ...will call u and say our opinion

They did not face them...they just got up and rushed from there

Sidhant was sitting in cab angrily ...sujatha mataji rajendar got in and the cab started from there

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3

In roli house

Roli was shouting literally

Roli:- what the hell ...how dare he ..is they thought me innocent or what ...I might have killed them

Meena and jamanlal took a deep breath as they were hearing this for long time

Roli:- how stupid idiot he is and saying iam not interested ...how he was putting scene ...I know iam beautiful he should put spects on his eyes ..

Meena;- roli

Roli:- and u both don't talk ...I said u both I will marry whom u both show but did not say to show me whoever wants ...that family and their stupid son...

In car

Mataji:- sidhant what's ur problem

Sidhant:- I already said I don't want marriage and u all know my job very well ...from my childhood I wished to become a ship caption

Rajendar:- I know sidhant that why leaving business leaving heir for our company and industries ... I made u to study navy

Sidhant:- then I am the one who got caption post in this young age

Rajendar:- yes sidhant many articles too came about this " a young ship caption" but what ur problem in marriage??

Sidhant:- papa maa if I marry her I cannot be normal husband to her ..u say me mom when will I come home and go to work

Sujatha;- that is what iam saying to leave ur job from first

Sidhant:- I cant mom this my dream

Sujatha:- sidhant u were in ship for 1 month then comes house for 2 weeks then again goes back according to ur travel distance u have works and leaves ...don't know whether sometime there will be working days more and leave less sometime working less leave more...cant I feel that I want my son daily in front of me like others who go in morning to work and comes back in evening...sidhant we have many company u can take charge as md and sit in ac cabin and lead ur life smoothly...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 4

Sidhant took a deep breath

Sidhant :- mom this is what I am saying ..i cant make another girl to feel the same about my job...already I am just convincing u till my best ...

Sujatha;- so u don't want to marry at all

Sidhant:- yes mom

All went upset

Sidhant :- pls mom ,dad, mataji don't do like this again ...already I said being caption on ship was my dream...I cant leave the job

Sujatha;- but sidhant we said about this to her and talked already ...she was ok with ur job

Sidhant;- mom all will be ok at first...but think as the life moves she will to think how u were feeling now and say me to leave my job ...and that time I sure I will not leave my job and I cannot spoil her life...I hope u understand what I am trying to tell

Mataji;- sidhant she

Sidhant;- mataji she is beautiful I accept and I wish let her have a husband who will be near her daily

Sujatha:- I don't know sidhant whether I should feel proud on u or feel pity on u

Sidhant hugged her and smiled

Sidhant:- don't worry mom pls...iam happy if am happy

Sujatha:- we are also happy

Mataji;- that and all ok ...u know what u did in her house

Sidhant byte his tongue

Sidhant:- oh I shouted right ...but I did for her good..i think she will not curse me

In roli house

She is still shouting

Roli:- i will curse him ... If he is ship caption he is thinking he is owner of ship or sea...i will kill him and throw in the sea itself

Meena and jamanlal were hearing keeping their hands in their head thinking when she will stop

In car

Sidhant:- she was beautiful only

In house

Roli:- I am iam not beautiful ...he is looking like beggar

In car:-

Sidhant:- I wish she gets a good husband

In house

Roli;- I am praying god that he should not get marry at all...he should not get any wife

In car

Sidhant:- if I marry her she cannot be always near me

In house

Roli;- no girl should go near him

In car

Sidhant;- let her live her life smoothly

In house

Roli;- he should not get a peaceful life

In car

Sidhant:- I cannot spoil her life...I don't want too

In house

Roli;- if he come again in front of me I will spoil his life

In car

Sidhant:- let her be happy

In house

Roli:- he should not be happy at all

Edited by anjana.s - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats dear for ur 6th ff...awesome start...interesting...wow sid as ship caption...i loved the concept...eagerly waiting for next...yeayyy i am the first comment of your story...😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey congrats for ur new ff 👏 initially when I read the title I was like oh god original story itself is like a big tragedy n how will I bear titanic wala tragedy...but thank god my assumptions proved wrong...coming to the story im just loving the navy officer...like the first scene like when they say him to change I remembered thupakki...n that meeting...omg...how could he say that... n roli unlike a silly girl started firing her parents...im loving it...ladki ho tho aisa hi hona chaahiye...sid's style...his workaholic nature are all impressive..but I laughed like crazy on "i will curse him ... If he is ship caption he is thinking he is owner of ship or sea...i will kill him and throw in the sea itself" baaprey...this violent...Amma...I was like laughing crazily n people who knows me know its impossible to stop my laughter...n so u did the work...anyway im sure the cursing girl n the dedicated boy will fall im love soon...then lemme see if they say the same...waiting for ur updates
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow interesting concept. Sid as ship captain Amazing. First meeting mein hi fight .aghe kya hoga. Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow once again different concept roli dialogs ha ha lu d it eagerly waiting for nxt dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg Roli hehehe really cant wait.m

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