FF: Dill Mill Gayye 5th November 2009 NEW NOTE!!!

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Hey guys!

I have finally plucked up the courage to start my own "Dill Mill Gayye" fanfiction. Reading all the amazing fanfictions on india-forums has insprired me to try one for myself. But first i am going to write an introduction to see where this could go because i am not sure myself what storyline this fanfiction will take. But if you guys have any suggestions please do post or message me your ideas and i will gladly take them into consideration, seeing as this is my first ever fanfiction and i don't really know how it will turn out. anyways i will stop blabbering on. Here goes nothing...

Introducing the characters (Part 1):

Riddhima Gupta 21 years old ' She doesn't know she's adopted, her real mum passed away after giving birth to her and her biological father, being a shrewd businessman doesn't acknowledge her existence. Her adoptive father is a world-famous surgeon and the dean of Sanjeevani. She hopes to follow in his footsteps fulfill his dreams. An intelligent, simple, caring girl, Riddhima, nick-named Ridz, has all the positive traits you can think of: she's loyal, honest, modest, hardworking, has a strong conscious and strong values. Her child-like innocence makes her believe everything her older sister says. She is amazing with children sympathetic and empathetic. She enjoys playing sports, dancing and jogging. She is an ideal daughter. She's petite, pretty and usually wears Indian churidars to work, but at home and outside of work she dresses in a more relaxed fashion. She can't lie without feeling extremely guilty and her conscious doesn't stop bugging her and she ends up having a stomach cramp. She sometimes has to cover up for her sister's absence feels guilty about having to lie to her father. She strongly believes in love and is waiting to meet her dream guy. She's a new intern at Sanjeevani.

Anjali Gupta 22 years old ' she turns heads wherever she goes: she's tall, slim, stunning. She is completely westernised, wears skinny jeans and fitted tops. She is independent but relies on her little sister to get her out of trouble and allow her to lead her independent lifestyle. She's charming and usually gets exactly what she wants. She knows that Riddhima is not her blood-related sister, but she never lets Riddhima find out, although Anjali seems insensitive and cold on the outside, deep down she cares dearly for her sister, and Ridz too knows this, although doesn't let on because she knows that Anjali doesn't want to be seen as emotional because she thinks it's a weakness. Anjali wants to be extremely successful and rich like her father. Guys are always falling for her, and she takes advantage of this fact. She has an endless history of boyfriends but she doesn't believe in love. She teases Ridz a lot and gets her to do things for her all the time. Not particularly fond of children ' finds them annoying, and becomes impatient easily. She too is a new intern at Sanjeevani.

Sapna Shah 21 years old ' she's a typical gujju girl ' as per her character in the real serial. She's and Ridz have been best friends since childhood and her father and Shashank are best friends. She is a bit wary about how Ridz is easily manipulated by Anjali. She and Ridz share all their secrets. She doesn't want to get married, want to pursue her career first. She, like Ridz, believes in love hopes she will find true love before her family makes her marry. Guess what, she's also a new intern at Sanjeevani.

Atul Joshi 22 years old ' fun loving ' as per his character in the real serial. New intern at Sanjeevani.

Armaan Malik 22 years old ' tall, handsome, flirtatious, charming, lovable, sporty: loves basketball, good with children, good-natured, can sometimes be full of himself, loves playing pranks on other people, intelligent, knows what he wants from life and usually gets it. Has had many girlfriends but hasn't found his true love yet. Lives by himself with a servant Baba ' who treats him like his own son. Armaan used to live with Nikhil but then he moved into his own flat when they went to college. Armaan's parents passed away 10 years ago, in a train crash. He's a new intern at Sanjeevani.

Nikhil Garewal 22 years old ' been like a brother to Armaan since childhood, his parents treat Armaan like their own son. Charming, much like Armaan, and the two share all their secrets. The two help each other out all the time, especially in times of need. He's a new intern at Sanjeevani.

Wow that was a long post! lol

Thanks for reading! Please please please do post your thoughts and ideas on this. I want as much feedback as possible from you guys, whether it be criticism, ideas, encouragement or even questions, your input would be much appreciated. What do you think about the new character?

Another task for you readers: Please could you also suggest a title for my fanfiction as well...maybe that will help influence the path the story will take? I know I'm asking for a lot of favours...sorry guys.


Once again thank you so much for reading my FanFic!😃

Lots of Love❤️

*~Radz~*

Index:

page 1 - part 1

page 2 - part 2

page 3 - part 3

page 5 - part 4

page 7 - part 5

page 8 - part 6

page 10 - part 7

page 12 - part 8

page 13 - part 9

page 14 - part 10

page 16 - part 11

page 20 - part 12!!! (02/11/09) 😊

Edited by *believeinlove* - 16 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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HEY WOW DAT WAS GUD PLZZZZZZZ UPDATE PART 1 SOON ILL B WAITIN N SOZ I M BLANK AT DE MOMENT N CNT THINK OF A TITLE BUT IM SURE ODER PPL ON DIS FORUM WILL HELP

N PLZZZZ CONT SOON

LOTS OF LUV *FARESHTA*
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Posted: 18 years ago
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luved it so far.. crnt wait for the first part!! 😃.. gd luck! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey
plz continue
😊 swansea 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i am already lovin it! lol! y do u need a title? dill mil gayye is perfect!!!!!!!! 😃 i cnt w8 till ure nxt prt! contd soon! 😃
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soudin very nce
i fink dis
will b a great ff
gd job
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Thanks so much for all your comments!!! 😃
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Here is the first proper part of my fanfic....Enjoy!


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<em>An alarm clock rings at 7:00am and a girl walks into the room while towel-drying her hair. She nudges another girl lying in her bed tucked under the covers.


Riddhima: Di uttho! We're gonna be late…it's our first day after all aur hum Dad ko disappoint kaise kar sakte hai? Iska izzat ka jo sawaal hai. Come on Di! Jaldi!


Anjali moans and throws the covers off and drags herself into the bathroom.


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Meanwhile in a messy bedroom with clothes strewn all over the place…a sleepy bed-head guy with tousled hair slams down the snooze button on his alarm clock. He's only wearing pyjama trousers and his chiselled bare-chest is on show. Then after a few seconds he bolts up in bed…


Guy: Oh shit!


The servant comes hurriedly into the room.


Servant: Armaan beta, kya hua?


Armaan: Mein pehli din par late ho jaounga. It'll make such a bad impression! Baba aaj mein breakfast nahin kaunga…time nahin mere paas. (He says this while throwing on whatever he can find)


Baba: Lekin…


Armaan: Baba aaj nahin…please…I promise kal mein zaroor kaunga.


Baba: Theek hai, jaise aap ki marzi.



<h1>At the same time in another house, a lady is rapidly opening the curtains in a bedroom and sunlight comes flooding in.</h1>

Muffled voice from under the covers: Ma! Yeh aap kya kar rahi hai? Mujhe sone do na!


Ma: Theek hai…tum so jao, phir mein Armaan beta ko abhi abhi phone karke bataathi hoon ke aaj usse koi zaroorat nahin tumhe pick karne ki.


Muffled voice (now not so muffled as he had shot out of bed immediately after his mum had said that): Oh sh…sugar. Mein abhi tayaar ho kar jaa rahaa hoon.


Ma: Ok Nikhil beta.



A girl's mum is doing aarti on the girl who is ready and raring to go for her first day at work...


Girl: Ma abhi bas karo. Mujhe jaana hai.


Girl's mum: Bas ek minute aur Sapna beta.


Sapna: Mummy please…mein late ho jaoungi.


Mum: Oh haan mein to bhool hi gayi thi…ek aur thasveer aayi hai…voh ek bahut aacha ladka hai –


Sapna: Mummy meine kahaan na ke mujhe abhi shaadi nahin karni hai to phir yeh sab…anyways I'm getting aur mujhe Ridz se milna hai so bye.


Mum: Arre…rukho tho…


Sapna: Bye Mummy


Mum: Bye Sapna beta.



<h2><font size="3"><font color="#00ff00">In his flat, a young man can be seen whistling and watering some plants…</font></font></h2>
<p>Atul: Mujhe aaj kaam jaana hai…make sure you all behave ok? Mujhe zyaada miss maat karna. Love you all. Bye bye. (He blows his plants a kiss before leaving)

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I know this part wasn't very exciting but i am trying to create a background for my fanfiction while i decide what kind of line this story will take. Please let me know what you think, what you like and don't like and also any suggestions about how you want the story to go.



Thanks so much!



Lots of Love



<b>*~Radz~*

Edited by *believeinlove* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nce start! contd soon! cnt w8 till AR meet! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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love ur ff so far....plz continu soon

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