Shivika SS : 'The Raven And The Rambler.' Epilogue.

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EuphoricDamsel

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Posted: 8 years ago

Prelude.

"Maybe she had it wrong all this time and her empty heart could never be filled by his ingenious broken spirit. Maybe this yearning had nothing to do with him, and everything to do with her."

' He'd held me captive , within his peculiar aura. His acts all perturbing me making me go all weak in the knees. It wasn't like before it was a beginning to the story which was beautifully labelled to be incomplete '

I got up from the desk , cold zephyr making my teeth clatter and a shiver made its way to my spine. The chill of Darjeeling had an atmospheric lustre maintained all throughout the year. It didn't stop me from 'going out in the garden anyway and I lay there , flat ,on the ground looking at the horizon over me.

Life gave you all sorts of situations to deal with. I was given two such really horrible situations one which tortured me , and another which turned me into a crumbling mess. You don't have any choices in real life it's all in the flick of a minute. Isn't it horrendous that the thing which is wrong feels atrociously right to you in your own unique way ?

This story is all about that wrong which felt incredibly right and the right which was in truth extremely wrong. It had to end it did. It could have happened in lots of ways. But this is the way it happened. This is the path we took. This is our story.

It was destiny. Me getting married. His death. I'm happy that for once god took a thing away from me that I detested the most.

My husband.

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EuphoricDamsel

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello Fellas !!

I'm so happy to be writing again after a break of one year. It's so excellent to be back. For all of you amazing people out here who don't know me i'm Ritzy. I used to write regularly on QH forum and i do right now too ,but i wanted to give shivika a try so here i am. I'm an eighteen year old and loves the appreciation. This is a sad story. Yeah, sorry but ultimately i know you people are going to love it. It is a unique way of loving someone. Thank you for reading.

INDEX.

Prelude: Above 😃

Chapter One : Page 8 . 😃

Chapter Two : Page 14. 😃

Chapter Three : Page 20. 😃

Chapter Four: Page 24😃

Chapter Five: Page 28😃

Chapter Six : Page 31😃

Chapter Seven : Page 35😃

Chapter Eight : Page 35😃

Chapter Nine : Page 39😃

Chapter Ten : Page 39😃

Chapter Eleven: Page 45😃

Epilogue: Page 54😃

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EuphoricDamsel

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Posted: 8 years ago

Rules for my readers .

{I know i'm knew and all but i always play clear sorry if you find it rude. 😳 }

1: Please people do comment. I know what it feels when you keep sending pms to certain people and they don't comment , the writer generally starts loosing interest in the story and it is never completed . I don't want that to happen.

2: Please scrap me or tell me in the comments if you want to be added in the pm list.😃

3: People ONLY in the pm list will get the pms regularly. 😊

4: People who comment regularly or once in two updates are good but if you aren't reading this stuff and still receiving pms please inform me. It will save me time. 😆

5: Criticism and anything is welcomed as long as it isn't on my writing skills. Yeah people i am just a kid and still learning to write i don't want to be disheartened, I am still very baby at heart. 😳

6: I LOVE LONG COMMENTS. I love long expressive comments like hell if you give me long comments well i'll pm you first. I can't do much 🥱 But i do love long comments and who doesn't people who are here from QH forum do know that.

I am sorry if this is too much to take in. 😕

I really am,but i love being honest and not to lie. I feel a writer should be extremely open about his or her feelings to readers it establishes a great connect. Let's embrace to this beautiful journey together.

Thanks to everyone who is about to become my fan. 😆🤣

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EuphoricDamsel

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Posted: 8 years ago

So Here Is the PM list !!.

pritzz

SanyaEterna

coolhi1988

-Ishqbaaz-

itzanya32

Gotohelldil

AnikaPatel

LoveToWrite

lakshmi32

PriyaSweety-Anu

angel_writer

Annika_Ishqbaaz

meetaa_13

KashiTessa

AYUSHIVISHU

YeHoKyaRahaHai

bworm

MysticRiver

pri12

Madhu3628

rarefan

Linsie

EnasZ

Mystery1234

MariaRebecca

water9786

rainbowveins

Sakkiyah

smileyallora

aditi27

Billubhayankar5

jeness

FlashI123

adventure_gurl

mahalaxmik

priety_D

-Rhea-

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PenguinBaby

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Posted: 8 years ago

Thanks for the PM!

Coming to the story, it sounds intriguing, a mystery waiting to be unfolded!

This woman above seems like Annika and her late husband is Shivaay I think? If it is so and to see that she is happy without him, no matter she detested him or not, gives me immense satisfaction!

Continue soon! PM me soon!

Ps. The banner is awesome!

-Sanu

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EuphoricDamsel

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AdyaXoxo
Loved it(:

Thanks so much.

😃

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

Dear Ritzy,

I am very sorry. This is your first story here and I do want to encourage you by reviewing your work. But forgive me, I don't think I'll be able to do it, for this one.

I do not read 'first person' dear. I actually cannot relate much there. I prefer 'third person', be it in terms of writing or reading...

I am sorry again.

PS: I loved the banner. Its really beautiful.

Love

-Harshada

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EuphoricDamsel

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
Thanks for the PM!
Coming to the story, it sounds intriguing, a mystery waiting to be unfolded!

This woman above seems like Annika and her late husband is Shivaay I think? If it is so and to see that she is happy without him, no matter she detested him or not, gives me immense satisfaction!

Continue soon! PM me soon!

Ps. The banner is awesome!

-Sanu

Thank you so much for the lovely comment. 😊

It will all be revealed in the next part which is written already. 😃😳

She detests her husband. And he deserved it.

She will be happy in the end.

It is a sad story. I hope you still like it. :)

it isn't necessary that the lovers be together happily ever after isn't always true.

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EuphoricDamsel

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite
Dear Ritzy,
I am very sorry. This is your first story here and I do want to encourage you by reviewing your work. But forgive me, I don't think I'll be able to do it, for this one.
I do not read 'first person' dear. I actually cannot relate much there. I prefer 'third person', be it in terms of writing or reading...
I am sorry again.

PS: I loved the banner. Its really beautiful.

Love
-Harshada

Hey Hey Hey ! Woah Don't go !

The prelude is just in the first person the whole story is in third person.

Don't give up on this Harshada dee 😭

I really want to get comments from your side.

I love your works.

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Hey Hey Hey ! Woah Don't go !
The prelude is just in the first person the whole story is in third person.
Don't give up on this Harshada dee 😭
I really want to get comments from your side.
I love your works.

Is it so?

Alright then. Let me know whenever you start this story.

I'll be here😊

Thats so sweet of you.

Love

-Harshada