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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: neel11

Now what nice update waiting for next update


Thanks for commenting and I promise there is some interesting updates coming soon but I will try my best to update by tomorrow and I will try to not to make so many errors like I did in this chapter. I really appreciate you.😊👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
get me a pm please... it's interesting... thank you
. waiting eagerly
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Posted: 8 years ago
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waiting eagerly... updatesoon


damn interesting.. looking forward for more...
pm me please
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24

It is going little to fast and can't understand..

Make it like paragraph..

lot to explain clearly
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
to find khushi brave and smart is good

kids and moved on with life after arnav betrayal

I can accept that
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Don't rush the story.. give importance to

each scene... story is good

if you only can do update that way

story will be more intriguing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Note:
Hey everyone I really appreciate your comments and your PM's. I am sorry if I make mistakes but you got to understand this is my first story that I am writing so I won't be professional writer with just writing like 6 chapters it will take time, and thanks for sticking around and I try to write better and yeah I have been rushing because of my schedule and I don't want you beautiful people to wait too long but I promise I won't rush to much and try harder. Some of you guys asked about my self so I will give you some information about myself and feel free to share yours too.
My real name: Jaskamal Kaur, but everyone calls me Jaz or jazzy
Age: 18
Favorite color: Black, and Grey
Favorite movie: I have many,but some of them are all of Fast and Furious, Bad Santa 2, Fifty shades of grey, Moana, La la land, Trolls, the girl on the train I think they are all recent but I have many more...
Favorite Actors: Dwayne Johnson, Jennifer Larence and etc...
Favorite Songs: Bad things, Shape of you, Kiss me, Everyday, Man in the mirror, I dont want to live forever and many more...
Best Advice I got: Treat others like you wanted to be treated
Religion: My parents are Sikh but I am like atheists
Siblings: I have one brother he is 13 years old
Birth place: Punjab, India yeah I am born in Punjab but I was raised in America
One Interesting thing about me: I cannot read or write in Punjabi and that is what I have been trying to learn the only language I could read and write in is English and my first language was English and Punjabi. I could speak 5 different languages and I cannot cook or clean. I try so hard to cook but I always end up burning the food its like I totally forget about it but my mom she is like the best cook ever so I just stick with cooking like Sandwiches, Pizzas you know the ones that are already made and all you have to do is like put them in the oven. Please do comment if you don't know how to cook and for those who knows how to cook please don't leave a comment in fact leave a comment about something you don't know how to do or what you are best at and I hope this will help you learn little bit about me and I will love to learn about you guys too

Buddy me if you want me to PM you the next update and I think I could post today but I am not sure at what time maybe after 10.

HAPPY EASTER EVERYONE


Edited by superwomanjazz - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
Chapter 7:

When I opened my eyes, I saw that the cars were moving, and I was alone with Arnav I couldn't believe the nerves of this man, and I wanted to hurt him as much as he hurted me, but deep down in my heart I knew I could never see him heart, and that was because a little part of my heart was beating for him. I saw him driving without worrying about anything and the nerve of this man he was smiling I so wanted to take that smile away, but he always looks cute when he smiles. I knew he was going to turn and look at me, so I closed my eyes quickly. When I didn't feel his eyes on my then I opened my eyes, and I tried to move and I couldn't believe this man just tied me am I some type animal that needs to be tied down. Arnav said "No Khushi you are not some animal that needs to be tied down." Shocked from his voice I almost fell but these beautiful ropes saved me. Arnav said, "Unbelievable just like a minute ago you were cursing the ropes and all of sudden they are beautiful you are just one of a kind Khushi but you are just made for me." I looked at him and said, "What the." He laughed and said "Wow Khushi stealing my lines beautiful what happened to your Hey Devi Maiya." I just looked at another direction and said nothing to him. Then it hit where were my children where they alright. Arnav was watching me carefully and then it was suddenly he knew what I was thinking about and he smiled "The kids are fine Khushi but me and you have a lot to talk about." I knew that the problems were just about to begin, and I said, "Shut up and drive Mr. Raizada." I don't know when but I fell asleep in the car.

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Arnav Point of View:

It been over 7 years since she left me, but I never gave up hope. One month ago, I started to become suspicious of Payal I knew she was hiding something so I tapped her phone. I know it was not a good idea but what can I do I needed to find my Khushi and I was desperate. Who ever said that desperate times make you do things that you could never think of is a true statement. The people that I trusted played me. I know it was my own mistake that I lost Khushi but at that time I was being stupid and whatever they told her were lies but all the things that I did were confirming what those liars said. I hated being wrong. I am ASR how can I be wrong, but know everything is going to change forever, and this time ASR won't be played he will teach every person who separated him from his Khushi. I was lost and I knew I am going to die soon if I don't find my Khushi. I waited for weeks for Payal or Khushi to call but nothing happened. It was yesterday when Payal got a called and I heard her voice it was Khushi she said, "Jeji can you please look for a house for us in India." She was coming to India I knew what to do. I saw Payal and she immediately said, "I am sorry this is a wrong number." I knew why she said that because Dadi and others were there. I immediately called my security and said locate her location before she breaks the phone and get her, and I sent some of my security men to get Khushi. I was so excited I couldn't wait. I told them to kidnap her and bring her here. When they located her information, they said, "Well she is London right now and she just quitted her job we got all her information but if we take a plane it will take some time, but if we could take one of your private planes then it would be easier. I sended them in my private plan, so they could bring my Khushi immediately to me. I waited for their calls when Raman the head of the security said, "Sir we went to her apartment but some guys were there with guns and some of them were following her when she left and there were some kids with her do you know who they could be." I was scared and said, "Please make sure nothing happens to my Khushi and they are my kids please make sure nothing happens to them." I didn't hear her mention about kids to Payal maybe because if I listen her carefully instead of being horny it would help Arnav I mocked myself. I was scared, Nervous, Happy and sad to know about my kids. Why didn't Khushi tell me that she was pregnant did I really break her heart that bad that she didn't even trust me enough to tell me about our kids, and why the heck did she send me divorce papers didn't she how much I starved for my parents love why did she wanted our kids to go through what we went through. Be ready Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada you have some explaining to do.

Precap Chapter 8: Arnav's point of view continues

Total words: 903

Note: Well I actually started to count the words and don't forget to read the Note that I posted before this chapter it just has my personal information, my name, and my liking. It does not include everything that I like it was just some of you guys asked what I liked and I answered those question. Anyways I really try to fix the mistakes and I apologize if there were still some mistakes that I couldn't fix. I tried not to just skip the whole thing like some of you guys said and tell me if you saw any difference and your comments mean a lot I don't care if it is a rude comment because I am still learning and I will try to get better and your comments helps a lot it tells me if I did something right or not. I really appreciate all of you guys for reading my story even though it is kind of boring and I am thinking of giving out like shout out to some of you guys who have liked my story and commented from the beginning tell me if you guys would like that.

Advice: Image result for quote shoot for the moon

That was a advice that my teacher gave me and I hope it will help someone and I would also like to say don't ever listen to negative people and if someone tell you that you are not pretty, not good enough, or you don't have a certain skin color, or some auntie is taunting you for not being able to cook or something please don't listen to those people because that is because they are jealous of you and you would be shocked to know how many white people like to put tan makeup on themselves because they like that color and some of us that have that color we are ashamed and please don't be because you are beautiful as you are and don't try to copy some actress and be like her you should be just yourself because you are unique. I am sorry if I do hurt someones feelings and if you are white you love it I am fine with it. I hope I didn't hurt anyone's feeling but I did have a Indian friend and she always said she wanted to be have a fair skin color we should know no ones is perfect and be proud of ourselves. well have a great day hope you guys enjoy.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome Loved it
did he know that khushi had married again and had a child with him
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
looks like arnav dont know about her second marriage...
not the complete story

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