Doubts: A shraman three shot part 3, pg 14 (09/3/17) - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: priety.priti

thank god finally you have updated thank you

aww so cute
confession ans so cute amazing 👏

Thank you...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumodreamer05

What a marvellous update 👏 really so much intensity... only Shravan and sumo can go this far..
Shravan and sumo's conversation is really needed to get their frustrating, anger, emotion out..
Shravan is successful in confessing her love.. ..
Finally sumo spoke her heart out..
"Sumo...Tum mujhse ladogi nahin ye to 10 janam mein bhi possible nahin hai..." it is actually impossible that sumo Shravan se jhagda na kare 😉 😃..
So finally they found Peace in each other's arm...

Love
Shrujani


Thanks a lot dear..😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: girlgunjan

I don't know how I missed reading the two parts...nevertheless, thanks a lot for the special mention in part 2 😃 The name 'Doubts' really suits to this story. Loved it totally!! Keep writing more on ShraMan.

You r welcome dear...M glad that u loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Perfect ending.. 👏
How can Shravan says she loves Aditya that's why she went to meet him after marriage idiot Kahin ka.. 😡 can't he see she loves him only.. but Sumo confessed him & clear his doubts she never loved anyone in her life, she loved one and only him..

But romance ki kami thi they confessed and they didn't even kiss. Shraman's story and no romance aise Kaise ho sakta hai.. 😉

Vinu

Hey Vinu!!!
M happy that u found it perfect...
I get your point about romance...But my thinking was that ki physical intimacy cannot happen so suddenly...
There were a lot of issues...They were angry...confused..Insecure...Even after the confession i did not felt like they could kiss...And in drunken stupor ...No way...Their kiss will be special ...When both of them would be in their senses...This was the reason why there were no kisses
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But m happy that u put across your point ...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ReebaS

Perfect ending dear Such an amazing story..

Thank you dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi dear...
Hope yr hand is better nw...
Ek confusion hai...Ws the 3rd part da last part ???
Beautiful story...Wud hv loved to read more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ek epilogue to banta hai..

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