Drabble: Fanaah... Part 5B (LAST) Page 19

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Arjuhi_dreamer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: navk
superb update
loved it
ending was quite unexpected
and i think it was rushed
loved it anyhow

thank u so mcuh😊

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Arjuhi_dreamer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: MyshaAlvi007
offfooo ek toh ittey dino baad update dia or oopar se yeh 😡
u know how much i hate this marne maarne type wali ending🤢
m a sucker of happy endings but no ...tum koi magic nahi kar sakti thi after ol u'r a gr8 writer

Hahah...Mysha it was their Happy-Ending..a twisted one!

as the tag line say Pyar Dharti Pr Farishton se kia nhi jata..

Afterall all that matters is last me Arjuhi are together...😳😃

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Arjuhi_dreamer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: Arjuhi_kk
Zameem pe na sahi...toh aasmaan m aa mil..
tere bina hai guzaara...aae Dil hai mushkil ❤️

That's all I can say...even though it seemed rushed..
(totally understand ur view) ..but u gave justice to this story 😃

Thank you completing it ❤️

u perfectly summed it Di😃

I know nd i am truly sorry for rushing it like that.

Thank u so much Di..ur comments are always special😳

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Arjuhi_dreamer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: shalbi
I really liked the aay you kept it close tor eak, i mean he was dead and couldnt live, he had to go and they could only be together in some other world.
Liked it

Thank u so much...there was no point in making Arjun miraculously alive. Thanks for understanding and support😊

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Arjuhi_dreamer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty
Part 5b
Beautiful update sneha
Such a heart touching ending
So sorry for being so late
But seriously you always reminds me I love your writing for a reason
Thanks for pm
Can we get an epilogue???

Thank u so much...

U are missing for quite some time...hope everything's fine!

that's so generous of u...I know many writers who are better than me...it's just i update more oftenly than them...so I get brownie points here😎😆

about epilogue...as of now i am sorry there is nothing i could do to this story...but if in future i get some idea i will update😊