MG FF- Riyasat- Part 19-Page 66-29/05/2018 - Page 24

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Posted: 9 years ago

WOW!! fantastic updates...

loved it dear

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Edited by misty_drastifan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update 👍🏼
Geet too good... She analyzed situation so correctly
15 days before maan's dad was fit n fine suddenly what happened to him?
Geet encouraged Maan not to leave the estate its his parents hard work
Maan feels something is stopping him from going away...
Maan offered geet job as his assistant 😃
Hope she agrees
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Posted: 9 years ago

RIYASAT


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Recap

Maan: koi baat nahi Geet...par mujhe tum par pura barosa hai...I know you will come back to me..kuch toh hai hamara beech...warna tum mujhe dund kar haya nahi aati...did you ever went to any of your friend's house Geet till now?

To which Geet nodded her head saying no then Maan continued saying...wai mein kheh raha hoon Geet...may be you will find answer for this soon...after our discussion only I decided about giving job to you and taking care of Avantika...you are right Geet (he opened his arms wide and said) it's my place Geet, Mera mom and Dad ka sapno ka aashiyana hai...I will take care of that if you are with me

He put his hand in front of her and asked "kya tum mera saath doagi?"

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Part-8



Here Tej called Dr. Navin and said "koi ladki yahan hayee hai...she is introduced herself has Maan's friend...bahut chalaki hai...tum ek kaam karo jaldi AE ajao"


Dr.Navin: tum pagal ho gaye wo kya? Yahan patients hai...I cant come in the middle...I am busy...shayad woh Maan ka GF hogi?


Tej: aisa kuch nahi hai, she is his friend, pata nahi Maan usko kaise janta hai? Tumara kaam ke barien mein janta hoon...you better come now they have gone out once they come you can also meet them and then we decide


Navin agreed to Tej that he is starting now and then informed his juniors to take care of patients and started towards AE


Geet: Maan atleast give me a week's time...let me go back and talk to my PG aunty and then I will decide about that...there is a small problem


Maan: what is that Geet? Tell me lets deicde


Geet: Agar mien PG chodungi toh PG anuty will not allow me to keep my luggage toh mein kaise wo sab yahan lekar avoon?


Maan: you can bring it here I will come to receive you to station so there will be no problem


Geet: I dunno what it contains Maan...let me check, if I can bring I will or else I should make arrangement to keep safely somewhere else


Maan: ok...just call me if you have any problem so that I will make some arrangement


Geet shook her head and said "tum kuch bhi kar sakte wo taqee mein tumara saat kaam karoon?"


To which Maan nodded his head...Geet smiled at him and said "itna pagalpan acha nahi hai...lets see I will call you"


Maan: hai pagalpan nahi hai Geet...I lost my parents now atleast I can make their dreams come true for that I need support, I don't have much friends with whom I can ask help. And if I go ahead and appoint new people also I dunno how I am going to handle, the way people react here he will run away from here. But after talking to you I strongly feeling that you are the one who can help me, uss ke liye mein kuch bhi kar sakta hoon...so it's a request from me pls think about it and give me positive response


To which Geet nodded her head


Maan: come let's go towards that's side


Cardamom plants


It smelled heavenly... Maan looked at Geet and said "be careful Geet, there are snakes here"


Geet: Kya??


Maan: not always sometime we see snakes so be careful


Cardamom flower


Geet went towards that and hold flower in her hand then looked at Maan and said "it so cute to look this...I never seen such a lovely place"


Maan: it's my Dad who took care of this, when I see this I miss him Geet


Cardamom Seeds


After that they went towards Pepper plantations- there were workers working on that



Geet took some bunch of peppers in her hand smelled it...then plucked after asking permission from Maan



Dr Navin came to AE and met Tej who was looking disturbed and asked "why are you so much disturbed Tej? Sab kuch teek hoga don't worry...where are they?


Tej: ghume gaye hai...abi taq nahi laute


Dr Navin: young age guys leave it don't worry after they feel satisfaction they will come back


Tej; no way Navin...it should not happen? Agar Maan uss ladki ko pasand kiya toh wo idar rahega which is not good


Dr Navin: you are thinking unnecessarily Tej, Maan will not stay back...jo ladka city life ko adjust ho gaya ho wo kaise iss village mein rahega? Hey sab tumara bramh hai


Tej: you are not understandingmy problem...Maan has changed there are lot of difference in his behavior now...earlier if I say anything he never used to ask questions about that but now he started questioning me and the person who never met workers went in search of workers to talk to them and ask their problems...mujhe toh darr lag raha hai


Navin: ok ok don't think much about that we will talk to Maan once he comes and I am eager to see that girl also


Tej looked at him irritatingly and went towards his room then Navin followed him


Here Maan looked at Geet and said "let's go back Geet...its evening now and its not safe to be here alone"


Geet looking at Maan questioningly asked "what is this Maan? Its your place and you are saying its not safe here how is it possible? Why are you saying like this?"


Maan: after dad's there are so many mysterious thing happening here and we dunno about this place so its better to be safe


To which Geet agreed and they both started to go back to home and then Geet asked "Maan your Dad did not like animals or what?"


Maan: why are you asking like that?


Geet: when I went to Diamond estates I saw big dogs there...there were lot of pet animals there...par haya kuch bhi nahi dikha...you said only about snake and not about other animals? So I was curious


Maan pushed back his hair from his palm and said "OMG how can I forget about this? Shit Maan ...why did'nt you think about this before?


Geet: what happened Maan? Why are you looking so tensed?


Maan sat on the grass and said "mein aise kaise usko baat bhool sakta hoon Geet?


Geet: kisko Maan?


Maan: Hunter ko...


Geet: Hunter???


Maan: haan jiske bina Dad kahi nahi jathe the...they never used to leave each other side. He used to be with him always...wo hamara kutta tha...jabse yahan hayee hoon usko kahi nahi dekha miene...I did not ask about his with anyone...


Hunter


Hold your heart beats guys

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update dear Mann is showing Geet the farms and talking about when she is going to join Geet asked there are no animals here at that time Mann remember of hunter his father dog tej call dr Naina and told about Mann behaviour and the girl
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
loved Tej and doc conversation...
Maan is such a fool...
he forgotten his Family Dog...
specially d one his Dad loved...
looking forward for next part...
continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago


wow lovely update..te way my maan taking his geet to his farms and showing te beauty of it and geet too mesmerised in te beauty of te farms was lovely.. te way my maan ki words at any cost he wants his geet with him bit for tat his explanation was emotional..te way geet asking abt dog and my maan remember his hunter..so tej was scared and calling dr navin so is two is te culprit..i love te update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Can't wait more suspense
Now plzzz tell little bit of it
Thanks for PM
Update soon

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