AarYa OS: Pyar ki Kahani

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb os
Yash did the jealousy game to make Aarti confidence but Aarti really punished him very well,loved Aarti confident in Yash birthday party.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is so beautiful tessie, you always bring out the best out of a very complicated situation, yash married her because he loved her, but he wanted her to be confident because he realised that she was talented and he wanted her to realise that, and at the end she loved him because he was her biggest inspiration and her life, he loved her because she was everything he wanted in a women, talented, passionate and good hearted...such a beautiful story...thank you tessie poo
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful os
loved it
enjoyed reading it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sweet OS a shy Aarti marries a powerful Yash and she doesn't feel confident, Yash tries to help but and makes a mess of things and makes Aarti feel worse but after a talk with G3 MA Aarti gets the confidence to become her true self with everyone and not be shy then at the birthday party Yash confess his love publicly and thing just grt better from then on cause they now know how the other feels, job well done on there s is Tessa
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yuhu... I am too happy because it's another OS from you plus I have commented first after so long for someone( a res though😆).
A PURE HINDI Title...Wow... interesting start.
The OS queen must deserve a pat first for bringing up a very commonly found issue when two people from divergent backgrounds and status marry each other. The one to struggle more is always the woman under such circumstances. Hence, naive and simpleton Aarti is no exception. Marrying the YASH SINDHIA is such a giant leap for her and adjust to that style and standard of living wouldn't have been a smooth sail, given the lifestyle and the society that she was accustomed to.
Her inferiority complex is obvious and natural, no matter how intelligent and talented she is.This realism in the characterization and their reactions is what makes this os so endearing and undoubtedly is the soul of the story.

Being Yash means to always choose the wrong way of solving things and this man never fails to disappoint me in that regard. His frustration is very much valid that his wife couldn't even brave up to answer such a silly question about her saree, but one can't ignore the fact he had been unwittingly been a significant factor for the way she is. I just don't see what did it gain him by hiding his feelings for her since the start and what would he lose if he atleast gives some indication of his love to her. His intent was to wait until she grows up enough to open up to him and face the world as Mrs.Yash with pride, only for his wife to misconstrue his apparent aloofness to be his regret for having married her, thus deepening her complex and causing her to take a drastic step of deciding to divorce him for his own good.

That was his wake up call and needless to say, he staked his claim on what is rightfully his and made sure her brain has well absorbed his love for her.
But how will this bond reach its destination when the husband has promoted her only as his wife on grounds of physical intimacy? His acceptance of her real self- a woman who has everything- beauty, talent, intellect and immense love and care is yet to happen as the very factor that could resurface it all- her SELF CONFIDENCE is still pending to be re-instilled into her.
He, therefore resorts to provoking her, only to pay up bad for it by being devoid of her closeness, her touch, her taste until his birthday. Not even a birthday wish on grounds of punishment?? She now perhaps has mastered the art of punishing him too well that nothing made sense without her by his side and he chose to walk out of his own birthday party after the confession.

What best way to show what she is capable of than her designing of her in-laws attires, venue decoration,etc.?? Hence, MISSION CONFIDENT AARTI ACCOMPLISHED finally!!!!!!

A small glimpse of our like thinking yet again. Leaving whether their baby(ies) are boys or girls upto the readers imagination just like how Nikki Di and I did in TNTCE and Rhythm respectively.
Woahh... I hope I have almost covered everything and I must, for this realistic story deserves a big comment to love and comment upon every line of the story.
Edited by Jodhu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tessa a beautiful OS. Light and very enjoyable read and yet explores complex issue of disparity of two different people who are from very different backgrounds. I loved how you showed Arti's insecurities and Yash messing things up when he thought he was giving her time to grow her confidence and mold her into what the world would want his wife to be. Really well executed. Thank you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful OS
wow yash fall in love with aarti at first sight & aarya got married😉
but poor aarti was lacked of confident 😭
yash gave aarti time to make herself comfortable 😊
wow aarya love making was so wild passionate 😳 ❤️
yash tried to make jealous aarti so she can be confident
but poor boy got punishment as aarti didn't let him touch her 🤣
but that's really worked on aarti as she make herself confident 🤗
yash parents were really understanding loving caring they helped aarti a lot 🤗
wow yash confessed what he feel abt aarti in front of everyone ❤️
wow aarya dance part was really lovely 😉
yippee everyone liked aarti's designed clothes decoration & painting 😃
the most happiest news of aarya's life was their baby 😃
aarti got pregnant 🥳
awe both aarya were cutely fighting as aarti want son & yash want daughter 😆
hey dear can u update second part so we can know what aarya got son or daughter? 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful OS Tess 👏
Before I comment I have to say something, since last year, out of the millions of story ideas in my mind, there is one with a similar concept. But yet it's still big different. I don't think I'll ever work on it so I'm happy to read something on the lines of that concept 😳

Now coming to my comment...


Aarti came from a small town. Her insecurities were justified as her family asked her to get married and she too ended up saying yes as Yash had said yes. She never got chance to talk to him and find out what was in his heart and mind. Like every other girl she expected her future husband to take that initiative but he never did.


What I feel that Yash sensed her shyness and her insecurities. Yet he didn't even talk to her when they met for the first time. He gave her space thinking she will open up to him and come to him. But he couldn't understand a simple fact that when a person is this insecure and have complexities then they need encouragement and little push and needs to be motivated.


He didn't even come to her support when she couldn't answer who designed her outfit. Yes he wanted her to answer for herself but then they were in public place and not standing with her would only make her lose her confidence (whatever was left in her).

Here I missed "Prissy Love" cause in that Yash was similar but still so different. (Btw, "Prissy Love" is my favorite OS along with "Artpiece" I hope that's the one)


I feel, had Yash given her even a slightest of inclination that he liked her when he saw her for rhe first time, it would have boost her confidence. His being quite and giving her space is what increased her insecurities and decreased her self confidence,

When she talked about divorce that showed a glimpse of confidence in her. He staked his rights that night and made her forget about the divorce. But once again he didn't talk to her about his feelings. Ah! If only he had.

But you know what, despite all this I still liked Yash's character as for me he had different perspectives and outlooks at the situations. I found him flawed but then that is what made him a human being.

Tess another thing that I strongly believe is fhat no two persons Looks at a situation the same way. Everyone has their own outlook and perspectives. So yes even though I don't like the way Yash behaved but I stil like this OS as it gave different perspectives, different outlooks on a certain situation ⭐️










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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry for the late reply and about the its far too amazing

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