Maaneet Rosid FF - Love Forever - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice update...👍🏼...Maaneet cares for Siddhanth......Geet helps him in his homework...😎...Maan loves his brother a lot...👏👏👏...Siddhanth grows up and gets admission in a college......waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks 4 da pm! terrific update! well written
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update dear loved maneet & sid bonding they care for him so much maan reply to watchman was fab he bought cricket field for him sid got ragged by the seniors & he cried awww me too will cry can't see him crying my cutie pie roli is also in the same college & tortured by pammi waiting for Rosid meet eagerly update next soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A new story. Maneet and Rosie mix. I am a fan of Maneet so will find this interesting.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A Beautiful Start

Maaneet looking after Maan's little brother Sid and he wants to be just like his bhayia when he grows up
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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats for new story dear.
my maaneet with lovely rosid pair combo..great..
maan is elder to sid and he have lovely wife geet.maaneet take care of sid.sid want grow like his bro.rosid first meet in college.some senior raggind sid and after that they become friends.pammi torturing roli so sad..
thanks for pm and continue soon 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2
Roli is on her way to the college. Sid is speeding the bike towards his college. He accidentally bumps to Roli who falls behind the bushes. Sid stops the bike and gives the bag to Roli. He said, "I'm extremely sorry. I could not control the break and when my bike stopped, it had dashed you."
Roli: It is ok.
Sid: I will drop you till the premises.
Roli: No thanks. I will go on my own.
Sid gets on to his bike and is nearing towards the college. Roli reaches the college. The senior students surround her and start ragging her.
Roli: What kind of behavior is this. Do you people tease girls if they are alone?
One of the boys named Raghu said, "I don't go after any girl but as soon as I saw you, I have got the crush on you."
Roli tries to escape but Raghu's friends surround her. Raghu comes forward but she goes backward. Sid is parking his bike. He sees the boys ragging Roli and comes to her rescue.

Raghu: Stay away from this. I'm telling it for your good.
Sid: And it will be good for you if you leave her.
Raghu: What does that girl mean to you? Is she your girlfriend? What will you do if I don't?
Sid: At the most, I can give you a kick.
Sid kicks Raghu. All the boys begin to fight. Sid is now getting beaten up. His friends too join the fight. Sid and his friends fight Raghu and his friends and drive them away.
Roli: Thanks for saving me.
Sid: It is my pleasure. you are always welcome. May I know your name?
Roli: My name is Roli.
Sid: Nice name. I am Sid.
Roli: Nice meeting you.
Both of them go to the class. Sid and Roli are surprised to see each other in the same class. The lecturer gives an assignment to the students. All of them are supposed to do the assignment with their partner. Sid and Roli sit together as partners for their project. At home,

The college bell rings. The students go in for the break. Roli & Siddhanth are the computer students. They get the assignments from different lecturers. Rosid become partners in projects for all the computer subjects. They discuss their ideas & become friends.

Roli begins to find more peace in the college than the orphanage as Pammi is a terror for her.

After Pammi goes home, Sid & his friends start playing cards in a friendly way. One of his friends asked Sid, "You are so handsome. Do you have any girlfriend?"

Sid thinks about Roli & blushes: No I don't have.
Roni: Hey, I am the senior don't lie.
Sid: I like one girl. You know her. She is with me in my project
Roni: That is great. rab ne bana di jodi.

At the orphanage, Pammi makes all the children do the household chores. She is also a callgirl agent who supplies the girls to different people.

Pammi: Roli, sweep & mop the floor. The clients will be coming here.
While sweeping the floor, Roli drops the vase on the ground accidentally. The vase breaks. Pammi drags Roli to the room & hits her hard with the stick. Roli shouts in pain.

Sid & the boys go to the disco and dance on the song

Ghume galiyo mein ghume
Jhume masti mein jhume
Ghume galiyo mein ghume
Jhume masti mein jhume
Apun ka raz hai kisi ka dar nahi
Duniya naraj hai koi fikar nahi
Aaju bachu aane wale
Daye baye jaane wale
Sare kahte hai hame
Tapori tap tap tapori
Tapori tap tap tapori

Bori bali kandi bali donbi bali
Chandi bali kahi bhi ja
Hame pahchane yaaro
Sara bombay jane
Apna naam pata
Bori bali kandi bali donbi bali
Chandi bali kahi bhi ja
Hame pahchane yaaro
Sara bombay jane
Apna naam pata
Dil ke hai bhale bande nek hai
Duniya bach gayi hum to ek hai
Aaju bachu aane wale
Daye baye jane wale
Sare kahte hai hame
Tapori tap tap tapori
Tapori tap tap tapori

They see a girl and did chechish chechish chechish.

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Gore Gore gaalo wali

Kale kale balo wali ruk jara

Dil dhadkane wali hame
Tadpane wali aise na ja
Gore gore galo wali
Kale kale balo wali ruk jara
Dil dhadkane wali hame
Tadpane wali aise na ja
Rashte mein yaha tu hai kyu khadi
Denge dil tujhe aaja gul jhadi
Aaju bachu aane wale
Daye baye jane wale
Sare kahte hai hame
Tapori tap tap tapori
Ae bori tap tap tapori
Tapori tap tap tapori
Tapori tap tap tapori.


The boys reach the place not knowing Roli lives there.


Pammi: So it is because of these books, you are not doing your work properly. I am sending you to the college because you are interested in studies but it does not meet my needs. You will ultimately do what I want and that is to please my clients.

Pammi has been beating Roli more because of her resistance. She destroys Roli's notes which she had penned down for her project implementation.


Sid & the boys enter there. Everyone except Sid sits in the hall.

Pammi: Are you coming here for the first time?

Sid: Yes. I have come to give company to them.

Pammi: No problem. Once you come, you will always come here.

She shows him, different girls, and asks, "Do you like this girl?"

Sid: No

Pammi takes him to Roli's room: what about this one?

Sid is shocked to see Roli. He said, "Yes."

Pammi: Have a nice time.

Sid sees Roli crying. He sees lots of fears in her eyes. Sid fills the glass with water & gives it to her to drink. Roli takes the glass. Her hands are shivering. Sid makes her drink water. He also sees her notes getting destroyed. Roli is groaning with pain. Sid cups her face & hugs her. Roli too hugs him.


Sid is angry: Who has done this to you?

Roli: It is Pammi aunty. A lot of things happen here. I am getting beaten up because I refuse for the advances from her clients.

Sid: Is that lady a human being. I will call the cops & get her arrested.

Roli: It is of no use as she has got lots of contacts with the police. I had complained once but she has beaten me even for that & threatened to burn me alive if I complain. That is my fate.

Sid: No, it is not your fate. There is the world outside this hell. I will show you the world. From now on, don't ever think that you are alone. I am always with you, not only as your project partner. But also for life. I love you.

Roli: I love you too.

Sid's friends leave.

Sid approaches Pammi and asked, "I want to take Roli with me."

Pammi: For how many days?

Sid: For 2 days.

Pammi: Sure, you can but you have to pay.

Sid: How much do you want?

Pammi: I want Rs. 5000/- Since you are a college student, and are coming for the first time, I am taking less from you. I charge more from others.

Sid: I am ready to pay any amount but I want her at any cost.

He writes the check and takes Roli with him.

Pammi: You take her but bring her back on time. And yes, if you teach her the crooked ways or intend to take her elsewhere or keep her with you forever, it is not going to be good for you and your family. It seems that you are from a rich family. Not to mistake, Maan Khurana's brother. I've heard a lot about him.

Sid: Fine.

He takes Roli. Both get on the bike and go towards Bharadwaj Mansion. This is the park where I find peace. Both go to the park.

Sid: You seem to be upset. Are you upset that I gave her money to take you?

Roli: No, I am not upset for that but I am thinking how will you take me forever? Will your brother and sister-in-law accept me? I am very much nervous.

Sid: Why not? They will accept you. My brother is a wonderful person. He has brought me up like his own son and has always been a support system to me. He gave me what I wanted not as a father or brother but as a friend. He will definitely accept. Anything else you want to ask?

Roli: No.

Sid: But I want to ask. How did you get entangled to this place?

Roli: Actually, Pammi is our relative. She has been very much close to my parents. However, they never knew that she is running a kotha in the name of the orphanage. My parents died in a car accident. Pammi was very much there. They told her to take care of me. Since that time, I am here. I have tried to kill myself after knowing her real face but I was saved. I want to live but not in this hell. Not in this darkness.

Sid is moved. Tears roll from his eyes. He wipes his tears and extends his arms. Both hug each other tightly.

Sid: From today onwards, no need of staying there. You will be staying with us.

He brings Roli home. Maan & Geet welcome Roli.

Maan: So she is your project partner?

Sid: Yes, she is the one. Do you love me?

Maan + Geet: Of course! Is this the thing to be asked?

Sid: I am in love. Will you love the one I love?

Maan + Geet: Yes, why not?

Sid: Roli is the girl I love. I want to marry her at the earliest.

Maan + Geet: Fine.

Geet: Roli, may I know who are your parents and siblings?

Roli: I am the only daughter of my parents. I have lost their parents at a very young age.

Geet: Then with whom you are staying?

Sid: She is staying with her aunt who is running an orphanage. She is staying there.

Maan: What she has a home and she is keeping her in that place?

Sid: She is definitely her aunt but she tortures her day and night. She tortures all the children and makes them do all the dirty work. She gets beaten only because she stands for what is right. We are the only ones there for her. If we leave her, she will break down. Please don't say no.

Tears begin to stream out of their eyes.

Maan: I have never refused you for whatever right thing you have done and even now I won't say no. I like the girl.So the deal is final.

Geet: So dulhe raja, make preparations for the wedding.

Sid: I want the wedding to be simple as her aunt is a dangerous lady. If she goes back, she won't be safe there.

Maan + Geet: If that is the case then, earlier the better.

Maan & Geet take Sid & Roli to the registration office

where Rosid get married.

Edited by kavsy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Rosid meet awesome sid save from ragging..
Rosid became friends awww...
Roli feeling peace on sid company..
Hate pammi beating roli...
Sid found roli in that conditions
Hope he tought good lessons to pammi ...rosid in park is so good... Maneet is so lovely yeye rosid married can't wait for next update soom
Edited by arisharosid20 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Very nice update
N Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
amazing update dear👏👏

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