So, the story starts with the scene when after showing the DNA reports, Ishita went and Raman realized his mistakes and decided to say a "Thank You" to Ishita but when she returned, she scolded him. So, my twist starts from here. Here they will have a different talk.
The tracks which were shown in the show, my story will also have the same tracks but with a different angle. And I will end this story at a certain point.
Hope you all will like it.
So, below given is a list of the tracks which were shown in the show. If any edittig or omitting is required do tell me.
1. Iyers Anniversary
2. Drunk Ishita
3. Raman defending her
4. Ishita apologising him
5. Mising Ishita
6. Adi's bday
7. Param entry
8. Holi - Ishdi introduction
9. Raman convincing Adi
10. IshRaRu dinner 11. Adi and Shagun insulting Ishita (my take)
12. Ruhi angry Raman and then him convincing her
13. Ruhi convinced IshRa hug
14. Some nice scenes
15. Param mess (my take)
16. Mimi engagement preparation
17. Cocktail party
18. Engagement night
19. Accident track (my take)
20. IshRa spoilt date
21. Adi coming to bhalla house
22. Param re-entry
23. Bathroom scene
24. Newspaper sequence
25. Ishita bringing Shagun home
26. Court marriage drama
27. Shagun Mihir truth revealed
28. Shagun coming Mihir's home
29. Adi bonding with IshRa
30. Navratri celebrations
31. IshRa blooming relationship
32. Mani entry
33. Raman jealous
34. Party night
35. IshRa blooming relationship yet again
36. Ashgun wedding sequence (my take which includes everything from cocktail party to wedding night)
37. Shagun coming bhalla house - whole sequence
38. Shagun out
39. Happy family
40. Ending
In this story, Raman won't be rough tough rude crude man. He will be simple and silent man craving for love and happiness. And Ishita will be supporting him all through.
This story will be written with hindi and english, both dialogues.
Hope you all like it!
Edited by ...Forever... - 8 years ago
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