ShraMan SS: Together We Stand [DISCONTINUED]

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ressi res!!!!
Me first...🥳
Happpy!⭐️


Oye..do do post...Wow jii😃
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Unress


FINALLY!!!!
Tinker Bell agae!🤗

Mjhy tu laga intezar mein baal safaid ho jaein gay meray😕😆

Chalo without wasting a sec..coming to ur update...😃


Woah..man..Intriguing one!⭐️
Suman's pov was hell beautifully penned!👏👏👏

He is the perfect friend , perfect lover, perfect husband n all mine"...❤️

Ohh..was a exceptionally amazing one!...We fight, we bikker but at the end of the day we are ShraMan...I so loved this part❤️

So thy both are together and been 3 years...wow...n now shez Pregnant..😳😃

Shez having complications.....i can very well imagine the freaked out Shravan..he wud look like a edible cupcake😳

Awwh..Shravan caring for his wife and unborn child..imaging tht was a bliss😳
His love and care...was❤️

WHAT???
She exceeded her due date!!!😲😲
But i like the way thy both stood strong beside eachother just to comfort eachother and not to scare eachother..this shows and proves their intensity with which thy love and care for one another.

I know he'll try to look strong infront of me but who knows him better than me.My Shravan is still a child when it comes to me, a scared child.

@boldBeautiful!!!
and the entire one was amazing!

Thts really really true...expressing ur emotions ur anxiety towards a situation doesnt makes you weak but it helps you calm down a bit..sharing ur thoughts with one can help you relax and calm down and dosent burdens ur unconscious sense.Or else if u hide thoz thoughts some where in coner of ur mind thn thy will onoly haunt you...every now and thn.
So this part was also really really amaazing!⭐️

She has so much faith on him..."Kyunki I have my Chashmish with me n his love wont let anything happen to us both"...❤️
She knows him inside out...and hez also aware of tht and never tries to hide his emotion from her..awwh😳


"Meri zindagi mein khushiyan zyaada time tak nahi tikti Sumo.Main hamesha unhe kho deta hu jinko main bohot pyaar karta hu.Ab jab mere paas sab kuch hai,tum ho or hamaara baby bhi aane waala hai, to dar lagta hai Sumo.Main tumhe or baby ko nahi khona chahta..I wont be able to survive if anything happened to you both"...Rola dea yar😭😭...Brilliantly penned!

And the way she soothed him..hay...tht part was really beautiful!

srsly thy both are eachothers pillars..ek gira tu dosra bhi gira!...Really like the way you narrated their bond..it was really splendid one!⭐️

Plus it justifies ur tittle..really loved it!.."Together we stand!"...❤️..i must say u did justice with ur tittle...and concept ki tu baat hi kya karein..ek dum udham!👏

The ending was a sad one but was well written!
I told you na mjhy thora thora idea hogaya hai..tu i was expecting such a thing...mjhy laga hi tha she might be having complications during delivery aur dekho ho gae...ab tension yehhai k operation successful hoga??..I hope hojaay!

Ohh Tinker bell..kahan meri curiosity level kay sath khel rhi ho..plz yar jaldi updte dena warna tu yakeen mano..encounter paka hai...Curiosity apny hath saaf kar jaay gi mjh par aur kissi ko pata bhi nhi chalay ga😛😆

Tinker Bell..Wow..this one is really really Aamazing!
And the way u penned it ws terrific!

Tinker bell you did a splendid job dear!👏👏👏

Love ya🤗

and han i agree with Swaru...i also want Shravan's pov!😳😉
Maza ajaay ga😃



Cheers
Nainu❤️




Edited by Sunain - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res! But won't unres it anytime soon.
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Nikku🤗 amazing work dea..👏
I love that I idea so much that I always wished someone to write on this for me.
A caring Shravan, oops a over-caring Shravan taking care of a pregnant Sumo!
Want a Shravan pov too in the next one.
Hell scared of the next day. She used to be afraid of needles and has to go all these! Hope everything goes good. According to the title I'm sure he'll be her support. Looking forward to it.

Seeing you playing our favourite game! Wished I could join.
And jab se demotion hua hai, I'm reminded of how irritating the 10 posts a day rule can be.



Edited by Swarnima283 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@Nainu Aaja mera tamatar... 🤗
N yup do do 😉

@Swaru Okiee dokiee
But zyaada late mat karna...I'll wait!! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res.
Kya aane wala hai nikster rather diskhter??

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Nikka sa Nik nahi ho tum bhai badi badi baatein kar raha hai yaha koi.

And kya amazing baatein. I loved part 1. ❤️

Could picture her sitting on a bench thinking of all this.. you are able to create a scene so beautifully with your words 👏👏

Meri zindagi mein khushiyan zyaada time tak nahi tikti Sumo.Main hamesha unhe kho deta hu jinko main bohot pyaar karta hu

the line killed me.😭

Kitna insecure ho jaata hai insaan after bearing a hurt of a lifetime. every happy moment also also scares the next moment after it comes thinking that it will come to an abrupt end...

poor guy kitna tensed hoga ye he feel ho raha hai mujhe.

suman is also tensed, but has to stay strong knowing him.

In spite of a house full of people, these two live in a world of their own. which is beautiful on occasion as if they have eyes only for each other, at the same time its also scary how much they are dependent on each others physical existence.Ki dusra na ho to pehla khatam ho jaye...

Jaldi se part 2 update kar de please. sumo and baby ke tension me mera bhi din ab Shravan ke jaisa sad sad jayega. 😭

I ll wind up my own mini drabble here 😆



Edited by deltadawn - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@Nikku Late se yaad aaya, madam apne ab tak Winter's.. FF pe unress nhi kiya hai😎
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@Tinkerbell...Lo agae Tamatar tumhari😃...🤗


@Dino...Dino!..Dino!...Dino!...mjhy pata hai! mjhy pata hai!😃
Clever me😛
😈😆😆
Edited by Sunain - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swarnima283

@Nikku Late se yaad aaya, madam apne ab tak Winter's.. FF pe unress nhi kiya hai😎

Mera tu iss say bhi bura haal hai...Meiny tu res bhi nhi kiya😕😆😆
SOOORRRIII!!!!😛😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@Deepti Socho socho deep deepti... 😉
N dikshter!!... 😳

@Swaru Oopseii!! 😲
Pata nahi or kaha kaha pade hai mere res ...uff!!
Koi na I'll unres SOON!! 😆

@Nainu Aaja mere Nainu🤗
N sach mein pata hai k kya aane waala hai???!! 😉 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@Tinker Bell ka mera wala haal hoa hai😆😆
mjhy bhi nhi pata...par jagh jagh say ress's niklay ja rhy hain😛😕😆
Lagay raho!

Han thora idea tu hai..kyun tum ny kuch karbar ki hai??😃

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