New FF: Har Sanson mein tum hi ho; PART 19 UPDATED PG 28

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey ! Guys I'm not a very active writer or participant in the Kasam forum, rather a mere silent reader. Very often I make posts. I am thorough lover of Krasha and Tanshi and above all KASAM... Ssharad and Kratika are just fab in their part and I like Ssharad may be a bit more than Kratika.

Now coming to the point, I thought of writing a FF on our lovely couple Tanshi. I'm planning for an intense story with both happy and tragic situations combined. I used to write FFs during Kitani Mohabbat Hai time. Now after KMH , I'm again going to start a new Fanfiction four Tanshi, so it's a long time and that is why may be the story would be not as cherishable and lovely as the other beautiful FFs.

Anyways as for now I'll focus on 4 main characters in the story:-

1. Rishi Singh Bedi ( The same character traits as we in Kasam)

2.Tanuja Sikand Bedi ( same character traits as in Kasam)

3. Mr. Manav Saxena( An upcoming business tycoon . He is suave and hansome, very ambitious with grey shades. I'm imaganing Mohit Malik for this character.
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4. Sonia Mittal ( Daughter of Mr Mohan Mittal, New business friend of the BEDIS. She is classy and beautiful and lusts for Rishi from the very first day she saw him. She had one previous failed marriage but she is not at all bothered about it and here her character is of mixed types like sometimes positive and sometives negative so u can call it as a bit grey shade. I'm thinking of Aada Khan as Sonia.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nyccc intro. W8ing for d next update. 😊
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good intro waiting for the updates 😊
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PART 1:

PLOT:

Here the story starts from the point where both Rishi and Tanuja have deceided to part their ways after Tanuja's suicide attempt the same sequence we saw in Kasam. Tanuja is firm in her decesion of going away from Rishi as she thinks that she is a curse for him according to Katyani Ji's words.
Rishi on the other hand though agrees to Tanuja's decesion but is very much determined to convice Tanuja somehow by forcing her for a sceond marraige.
Both Rishi and Tanuja are totally broken from inside. They want to stay together for lifetime but their KISMAT is not allowing them. Rishi is also unaware of Katayani ji's words to Tanuja nd also of Tanuja being his Tanu. He just knows that Tanuja wants him to be good son for his mother and family.( The same reason cited by Tanuja to Rishi.)
Now with Rano's insistence both Tanuja and Rishi have signed their divorce papers and submitted to the lawyer.
My story starts from the point where Rishi has arranged a party for Tanuja inorder to to let her choose life partner from the party. Tanuja is really upset and frustated after meeting Arjun Malhotra in the party just as we saw in the serial.
Now after that Tanshi have an arguement and Rishi further forces her to choose someone else. Unable to control her sorrow Tanuja ran from there and came out of the Bedi mansion and she was running on the road without any attention. Rishi was also following her from behind and trying to stop her but Tanuja is adamant and she continues her run. After a while Tanuja reach to the same spot where she tried to commit suicide, Rishi was aa little behind him. Rishi was trying to stop her but she was just unaware. Suddenly a huge truck came from Tanuja's front and hit her from the side and she straight aways fell in the flowing stream under the bridge. Rishi shouted Tanuja! but couldn't do anytthing, as within a wink of an eye Tanuja fell in the mamoth stream and just vanished from his sight. He just couldn't urter a single word, turned numb. Rishi was also about to jump in the water to find Tanuja but the passers by on the road stopped him nd he fell unconcious.


Well frnds this is my plot of the story after which my actual story would start.
Plss tell me if u guys like the plot or not, only if u like and think that the story has some potential then I'll continue my story.

So plss let me know ur views...

Edited by Lornab - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG maza aagaya šŸ‘ā­ļøPlease do continue.. The first update just gets me excited and looking for more! Can't wait to read next part!😳
Update soon! ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice story I am waiting for another update
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That's gr8. Plzzz update d next part soon
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Superb...fr on our tanshi...damn excited ...eagerly waiting fr next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Cant wait for next

Could you please increase the font size..its very small..Hope don't mind
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AniSweety

Cant wait for next

Could you please increase the font size..its very small..Hope don't mind


Thanx.. Ya surely I will increase the font size...

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