PAIN- shraman os - Page 5

Originally posted by: Sunain

Dollyy!!!🤗🤗

sunii🤗

Lag ja gale behna🤗🤗🤗

le lag gayi🤗🤗🤗

You have nooo idea how much i loved this OS of urz...it was Tremendously Penned sweetheart!👏👏

I so so soo loved it!

Was hell emotional and so was heart touching...was totally into it!

The way you narrated their predicaments...Shravan's pain...Sumo's confessions...their longings...everything was hell hell hell brilliant!⭐️

awiiee thank you...your comments are so beautiful

The best one among all ur OS's⭐️...My favorite one!❤️

oh my gaawwwddd!!!...dhanya ho gayi me😆

Shravan's agony was heart-aching one!..and u penned it brilliantly!👏

When Shravan asked her to leave him and after tht Sumo's outburst...tht part was outstanding!👏

that part was my fav😉

He didnt wanted her in his ;ife just coz he didnt wanted her to suffer coz of his darkness wht he thinks but he didnt knew how much his Sumo loves him tht she will easily brushaway all his darkness merely by her love and care for him.

Their promise to eachother was..❤️

he always cared for her😆

"And he engulfs her in a bone crushing hug melting into each others touch...absorbing the pain in their heart's...pouring love and promising to take care of each other"...❤️❤️❤️

Their moment was beautiful!..i loved it!

thank u😃

"Baat ye nahi h sumo...bas dikkat ye h ki jisse hum sabse zyada pyaar karte h...bura bhi sabse zyada uski kadwi baato ka lagta h"...so so so true!

it is

Dolly yeh tumhara Shravan bari cheesy dialogues marta hai!😆😆..but jo bhi ho hez adorable😳

i always wanted him to do that😆😆

the ending was super cute!😃

All in all was hell beautifully penned!

You indeed did a mind blasting job!👏

Love you dearo🤗

love u too jaani

Take Care!

Sunii❤️