Jai Gatha- Saga of a King Pt-IV, Pg-14 - Page 12

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Posted: 18 years ago
Pri brill update, now shouldn't Tarun be called a son since Bani is rajmata to all her subjects.

So our amourous king abandoned his kingdom for days and nights of passion with his queen and then end up losing her. Am wondering how the rajmata will take the marriage of her hubby to her sister Sonali...

Pri one question, how come all this women King Jai makes love to don't end up pregnant. What form of contraception did they use in those times? In a way its a good thing...otherwise we would have all these women blackmailing the poor King... 🤢
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great update di, loved it. I love your writing style. 😉

Continue soon.

Cheers,
Meena
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Posted: 18 years ago
Brilliant update Pri, I don't know how I missed it!

Ranveer needs to stop breaking into the Antahpur and catching King Jai in amorous activities.... 😉 😉

The romantic air and water seem to agree with our JB, I don't blame them at all...Couldn't help but laugh at the "Pran Nath"..

😆 😆 😆

I feel bad for Rosh, Pia and Sarlaben!! 😭 😭 😭

Can't wait for your next update.

I love your humor!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Awesome part Pri....so JB were in the world of passsions and experimenting their kama sutra lessons....."Pran Nath" just brought a huge smile on my face.....and this Tarundas uncle...hahahahahaaha..... nothing could be better than this......

Felt bad for the trio - Roshni, Sarlaben and P**

Waiting to see how Sonali is going to get married to Jai....

Wondering how JB are going to meet as well as how Jai is going to manage his two wives in terms of passions.......god save him and his kingship and kingdom as well 😳 😳 😳

Edited by khushboo2006 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
I want to see the answer to Shoba's question..

So Daksh in his wisdom decides to send Bani off to be close to her hubby 😆 All Tarun's brilliant scheming to get Bani into some forest almost coming to naught 😆 very interesting scenarios coming up..
Loved it!
👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
Divan,

(What form of contraception did they use in those times? )

Dunno.

(In a way its a good thing...otherwise we would have all these women blackmailing the poor King... )

Not necessarily, it was common for kings to have broods of illegitimate kids those days.

Khushboo,

(god save him and his kingship and kingdom as well )

Hopefully by the time JW would have recovered his kingdom he would have learnt from his past follies.

Rgds,

Pri

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Posted: 18 years ago
Playing veena and practising noble art of kamasutra??? Pri, you are just too bad, I am ROFL now.😆

(And matters were not made any better by the Queen's ill-advised interference in state matters. Being rather fond of snooping herself she would often sally out on her own with no one but young Pushkar (with whom she had developed a sisterly bond) for company to solve the growing crimes in Vatsa in the process distracting the official law and order machinery and letting the criminals go scotfree.)

And I knew this was so coming from you. And the remaining part too. 😡

And what explanation for Khajuraho? I will die one day. 🤣



Yaar, yeha pe bhi separation??? Seems like life is turning into one big separationist angle.
Edited by sangitadas - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
🤣

Pri, you had me in stitches!!
Great update!!!
Was waiting a long time --Next time don't make us wait so long pleaseeeeeeeeeeee!!

Nina
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Posted: 18 years ago
For Part III

Pri I just loved this part so much. "Pran Priya " 🤣

I love this colorful JW and the oh so tongue in cheeck Munni. You had me in stiches about Bani and AD and the whole courtship bit also.

So which history class has been teaching you Kamasutra 🤣

Our upright Bani Rani such a eager pupil and all. Pri, I just loved how you intricately have woven history into this FF and such interesting references. The places, the people, the whole FF is just superb.

Ok will be back with part 4 soon.

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