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Hey Sapna
as promised i even read this
and all i will say is CVs you got to read this
CVs create a mess and this is how we all clean it by writing fictions
you wrote this fiction beautifully to make us all feel better for what CVs showed and ruined brutally
even just like you story should have ended at the second last part with the marriage being over
i thought part 5 will be an insult to the wife but the way you wrote it made me feel NOTHING can separate Ishra
they are just meant to be
no matter how big mistakes they make ( Raman in surrogacy and now Ishita in this bhoot drama ) but they are meant to be forgiven by each other
Ishra are just magical and you spread that magic brilliantly through your words
just loved this story too much
and i am sulking for the fact that we can never see something logical like this on the show
I have learned that sometimes "sorry" is not enough. Sometimes you actually have to change
i loved this quote and i thought this was the lesson to be taken from the story
but then you wrote another quote which changed my view again
" Forgiveness is the final form of love."
so true...forgiveness is surely the final form of love and glad Ishra moved ahead in life making a new beginning
well the pregnancy thing was an endearing surprise 😊😊
and the epilogue...so dreamy
Sapna ne ek khoobsurat Sapna likh daala epilogue mein toh
loved the names Ansh and Khushi
and the most beautiful lines of this whole story
My heart to you is given:
Oh, do give yours to me;
We'll lock them up together,
And throw away the key.
Oh, do give yours to me;
We'll lock them up together,
And throw away the key.
When I am with you, the only place I want to be is closer.
this i am surely copying 😉
thank you Sapna for writing this beautiful story
loved it totally
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