Hey,
it's so sweet and lovely..initially i was like,omg was she engaged to anyone before meeting him and had doubts about the settings and time..but by reading it i imagined a beautiful village..the falls and the village reminded me the movie"bahubaali"😆but after reading it, i realised it's not in the era..
frowning face Arnav and sweet and cute Adi stole my heart in first chapter itself..adi is so cute😳
loved how you developed the feelings between them and the story..i too believed that Vijay initially..disgusting he was..Avni was a lovely mother and Akash looked like a bro more than a buddy..i was afraid of the truth revelation..but you did it perfectly..the hurt,betrayed feeling,anger,tears,explanation,realization,acceptance everything was awesome👏👏
more than it,i loved how khushi indicated Arnav's faults to him,how she made him realize his rough approach hurt others..i had a small verbal fight with my friend..and fuming inside..but when i read it, i realized that i should make her realize how her approach hurts others,instead of fight with her..i don't know it makes any sense to you..but Thank you❤️
one thing disturbed me from the flashback..but you surprised me by revealing Khushi's father..superb suspense..Arnav came a long way from being a moody and short tempered man to a lovely father..Khushi was so lovely and kind..when she caught by the men i was afraid that they might harm her..but you made our Arnav's entry at perfect timing and the blows to the man who harassed Khushi was highlight..
absolutely,it's a good treat to me..thank you
Itti Si Khushi Sab TV
O Humnava Tum Dena Saath Mera
Anupamaa
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