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HalleNJ thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
Dear Mahima,

Take your time to update....you are going to end this soon??? 😭. I'm not happy 😭 ....but I have no right to force you.....I understand that you are busy......eagerly waiting for the next & the final part.....
Posted: 18 years ago
very nice ff.but so sad u r ending it.
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Posted: 18 years ago
chammuuu!! im veryyyyy impatiently waiting for the next part!! now before i get a heart attack in my old age! i wanna readddddddddddddd it! 😆 😆

but take ur time... 😆 😳
Edited by bollycrazy - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Hiiii everyone,

Here is prt 5…..well I know I said dat this one is gonna be d last one and u'll think kiya drama karti rehti hain but guys I dint get the time to type anymore today and I don't think I'll be able to write anymore today and I had to post this prt coz I promised toh isley buttttttttttttttttttt the nxt one is gonna be the lasttttttt (keeping my fingers crossed)

One more thing read this prt at ur onw risk although I don't think there is anything inappropriate in it but still I am better off sayin it lol and dooooooooooo give me ur replies.

This prt is for sweetu (I still rem. Our pact dear lol) and also its for davia thanxxx for NOT asking me for d update lol…..and davia plzz no more blackmailing for d nxt prt of my ff main update kardungi asap okkkk so plzzzzzzz don't ask me to update like tom. Okkkkkk.

Luv ya lods

Mahima

Ps: thanxxxx for all ur sweet replies….i know I am missing out on replyin back to some of u but trust me I don't have that kind of a time rite now……so plzzz forgive me

Wadeverrrrr – prt 5.

Their eyes met… and it started to rain and thunder loudly (arre har filmy story mai hota hain toh yaha bhi hona zarrori hain lol now lets see its effect on our hero n heroine hehehehe)

Their eyes remained locked both were oblivious to the sound of thunders and were totally lost in each other's eyes (oh!!! Man this bani na….. naam dubo diya saari heroines ka, she was supposed to get scared n all, that's wat happens when it thunders ufffff abb main kiya karu??? lol)

At that precise moment it became clear to both of them that they luved each other mind body and soul coz both could see the immense luv that they both had for each other reflected in their eyes… both of them did not need to say it with their lips coz they always could read each others eyes with shocking ease…so the msg was send and received through eyes and was locked in their hearts forever.

A strange tension seemed to shimmer in the air between them, and she found herself drawn closer and closer to him… both their hearts were pounding inexorably…. slowly- slowly his head bend towards hers, and their lips mingled… her lips parted beneath his demanding ones… she could hardly believe it was happening, bat as his mouth melted over hers she surrendered herself to the magic he was making… no she dint care whether it was a dream or reality… all she cared bout was wat he was makin her feel. His strong arms were around here, curving her closer and closer to himself and doing things to her that she never imagined… his lips were moving over hers, intoxicatingly, and his tongue was plundering deep into the sweetness of her mouth in an exploration that was earth shattering, stirring a helpless response inside her…….and she wanted to become his totally and well…….(ok I am leaving rest of it to ur imagination…I don't have the courage to stray behind this lol although I tried but I guess I am a coward lol oh yeah as it was raining and thundering the lights went out heheeheh so well couldn't see anything else lol)

Bani woke up after a few hrs when she heard jai mumble smthin……and when she woke up she realized the full enormity of wat they had done but nope she wasn't feeling guilty or anything in fact it felt just right…. bani had always known that she had loved jai from the time she began to understand the meaning of luv but she never had the courage to confess the same to him bcoz of the fear of loosing him but today she had seen the same luv reflected in his eyes and knew that they belonged to each other for now and forever…….

She was brought back from her musing when jai mumbled again and it brought a huge smile on her face when she heard wat he was mumbling in his sleep "I luv you…..i luv u veryyyyy much…….don't ever leave me" and she stilled and the smile on her face froze when after a few moments he mumbles again and this time he said just one word "PIA" and bani just felt like everything in her life was over and she dint wait around for another second and got up and ran to her room…..if she had waited around she would have heard jai mumbling again "pia….i hate u pia…..u made me say such harsh things to my love….my life…..my aani…..i'll never forgive u…..neverrrrrrr"

Bani of course dint hear all this….. she was so totally shattered….she had lost her best frnd and her love…..her everything in the same night and she decided that she couldn't live with jai in the same house any longer and decided to leave while jai was still sleeping coz she wouldn't have known how to face him coz he had not been in his senses but she had done wat they had done in her full sense….and she felt jai would regret it and blame her for wat happened or worst still, take pity on her and force himself to live with her throughout his life… and she could not bear the mere thought of it and so decided to leave, she packed her bag and sat down to write jai a letter……….

Jai woke up with the sound of earsplitting thunder ( I couldn't insult rain and thunder could I?? lol So I gave it the most imp task of waking jai up hehehehe) and all dat had happened betw him and bani came back to him…..and he looked around for bani in his room but she was no where to be seen… a sense of dread filled him and he got up and dressed quickly and searched for bani throughout the house and………to be cont.

Edited by minks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

prroove kardi na tum ek monkey ho.. 😡

me first..😆

kya ajroorat hai bani ko adda sunnegi .. why u ditn make bani ehar full think like when she nears the door jai sayign it i hate u pia.. 😆

not fair minkey the monkey/// tuje mein nahi choodoonig.. yes u have to give an update woo be soon varna nahii akroongi mein apni ff ki update..

lekin wo startign romantic thi.. muje laga tum puri likoogi😉

tum bhi na bilkul monkey hoo.. ab bani chaligayi.. what will ahppen to her? abb woo pregnnat bhi hojayegi nto fair haan.. she will ebs suffering all alone.. just elft as u r title what ever...

not fair atlall wo bhi itni hsort udpate😭 updar se ye kehthi hoo mein blaickmail kar rahi hoon?

poochon meri readers se i give thme updates most of the time kabhi kbahi do-do..😳

lekin tum.. 😡

javo,,,

for this part i am really angry milkar thye got seperated.. sab ek upar ekta mahi ka asar hogaya hai ...

pls contiue soon

aur haan dotn u dare think of stoppign it varna😡

davo (shayd meri pet name hai that what my friend call me sometimes not all time.. )😭

davia

Edited by davia389 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Please continue soon. My mom is very eager in reading the next part so am I. Wonderful story.
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Posted: 18 years ago
GR88APRT
PLZ CONT SOON
NO BANI U CANT LEAVE JAI LIKE THIS
PLZ COME BACK
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Posted: 18 years ago
mahima dear, u really deserve lots of EB for creating misunderstandings between love birds and now coming to my main point i am 😡 ur JW why he was so slow in his speech 😆 bechari bani ne ulta samajh liya, only if ur munna may not have been brain deficient sharabi he must have said bani i love u instead of doing that rambling (i am at peace after bashing ur munna) 😆

loved the part, do continue soon

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago

i just want to say one thing... U SMELL!!!! 😡

how meannn!!! creating such a meannnnn misunderstanding between JB! what was the neeeeeeddddd for stupid Jai to talk in his sleep! i mean... who does that! 😡 (cept me 😆😆)

and i think for this... im going to join forces with swati and... u no what 😆😆😆

update soooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnn 😃 xxx

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Posted: 18 years ago
Oh no.....another misunderstanding 😭 .........you can't stop there.....

Who told Jai to mumble in his sleep 😡 .....Bani another one 😡 ...couldn't she wait for him to complete his sentence.....

Mahima, you better bring back Jai's Aani soon....or I will never let you end this SS 😉.


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