ss: wadeverrrrr!!! epilogue pg 25

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Hiiii everyone,

Today I was getting really bored so I decided to write after a looong time…wat with ks n everything I really dint feel like writin anything but well I did today but this one's gonna be a a short story n I'll end it in either one or t more prts….that is if u ppl want to read it.

One more thing this ss is called wadeverrrrr bcoz I couldn't come up with any other title so I used my fav. Word instead hehehehe plus u can call it wadeverrrrrr u like 😆😆

Hope u like my effort, plzzzz do give me ur replies.

Luv ya

mahima

Wadeverrrrrr- prt one

Eight year old jai woke up in the morning with the sound of voices coming from outside his room, he walked out toward the direction of the voices to find a woman talking to her mother and a three year old girl standing by the woman almost hugging her legs….jai went up to his mother the big socialworker Krishna walia and stood by her, krishna saw jai and said in an affectionate voice "oh!! U woke up dear, gud morning baby!!" and kissed his head affectionately and further added "here meet ur new nanny mrs kiran dixit, she'll be staying with us from now on along wid her daughter" jai looked up at the woman and liked wat he saw she seemed nice to him and then he looked at the woman's daughter who hid her face shyly in her mother's sari as soon as she saw jai seeing her.

Kiran came upto jai and said affectionately "hello dear!!" and thrust her hand forward to shake with his, jai decided that he quite liked the woman she hadn't smothered him with kisses like some other people did and which he thought was gross. Jai shook hands with her and said "hello!!" and then curiously asked "wat is her name??" indicating towards the girl who was still clinging to kiran, she looked down her daughter and said affectionately to the lil girl "sweetheart, jai is askin ur name answer him" the girl looked up at her mother and she smiled at her encouragingly so the lil girl looked towards jai and said "I am aani" jai looked puzzled at the strange name, Krishna lafed and said "her name is bani but she still finds it difficult to pronounce her b's" jai smiled at the little shy creature and thrust his hand forward for her to shake "hiiii "aani" I am jai" bani giggled at being called aani and decided that she liked jai and so she shook hands with him and thus began a life long frndship betw jai and bani.

The two of them became inseparable, they played together, ate together, studied together, jai always helped bani in her studies being the older of the two, he had gotten bani enrolled in his own skool after begging to Krishna for the same and finally Krishna had given in coz she too had gotten attached to lil bani and luved her as her own daughter. Jai always looked out for her at skool and saved her from bullies and as time grew by their frndship became more and more strong, they knew each other inside out, shared all their secrets with each other, helped each other out if one or the other was in some kind of a mess and one more thing that made them bond with each other so well was the luv of the two mothers which they both shared equally and the fact that both of them dint have a father.

Time flew by jai went to USA to get his mba degree, he then came back to India and started his own business venture and became a big business tycoon……bani to finished her education n joined jai's business to help him out n slowly started making progress and soon became one of the directors of the company, both of them really fought it out with each other if they dint like each others decisions in some matters but d fact remained that both were inseparable even so.

Bani also knew all bout jai's affairs n also knew he was never ever serious bout any of his long strings of girlfrnds until recently but now ever since he had met up with the super model pia shukla…..bani had seen a change in jai like never b4, he was really acting like a luv sick puppy and somehow bani dint like this, for she dint have a very god opinion about pia, infact she loathed her n one look at her n bani had put her into the category of wat she called "gold diggers"…..but of course jai was too blinded by his "love" to see this although bani tried her best to show him light by dropping lots of hints to him bout hw really pia was but she failed miserably…….n then one day bani was going up her room in walia mansion when she overheard pia talking over her cell…..she was laughing and talking to someone and telling him\her bout hw she had wrapped jai around her fingers n jai was soooo much in luv with her that he'd do anything for her and so as soon as she finds a chance she'll fleece jai off all his money.

That was all bani had to hear and she was so seethed with anger that she dint think twice and went straight upto pia n gave her tight slap n started shouting at her…..pia was first shocked and then outraged by bani slapping her, n soon jai came running hearing all the commotion, n b4 bani could speak pia spoke up n told jai a fib bout hw bani was always after her n that she dint like her n thought she was a gold digger n is always asking me to keep away from u n when I refused today, she slapped me…..i know u wont believe me after all bani is ur childhood frnd that's y I dint say anything until now but today she slapped me n I cant take it anymore…I luv u that doesn't means that I will have to tolerate this kind of a behavior……I think its best that we don't meet from now onwards…….and she made as if to go out of walia mansion but b4 she could even take a step, jai stopped her.

And he did something that he had never done b4 he started shouting at bani " hw dare u bani….hw dare u slap pia….n hw dare u blame her of such outrageous things…we both luv each other n u r always trying to make trouble, don't think I haven't notice that how u'v always tried to make me go against pia but I always choose to ignore it bcoz I thought one day u'd realize hw wrong u r bout pia but noooo I was wrong u just wont change but I wont have anyone showing any disrespect to d person whom I am going to marry so bani if u want to remain my frnd u better apologize to pia otherwise…….."

Bani was shocked to hear all this but she tried to explain to jai bout y she reacted the way she did and recounted to him pia's phone conversation but jai refused to believe her and shouted at her "bani hw dare u say such lies….don't u have any shame or wat?? U just don't want to see my happy or wat??……wat were u until u came into walia mansion it was me who made u wat u r n this is hw u repay me???…..i should have known better then to make a servant my frnd……but that's wat ur bani u r my employ n its better I show u ur correct place right now n a servant doesn't have right to interfere in his employers life, do u get ittttttttttttttttttttt"

Bani just dint know hw to react to this she couldn't believe that jai was saying this to her that too for that fallen woman but she knew after wat jai had said there was no use of tell him anything but one thing and she said it "I am sorry for interfering in ur life sir(she always called him jai but now….), I should have known better, I should have known my place b4 saying something about ur fiance sir….but I assure u it wont happen again….."

With that bani turned and left, and as she was leaving pia (when jai wasn't looking) winked and gave bani an evil smile which said see wat happens if u try to stand up against piaaa, bani dint even give pia a 2nd look she was still shaken by wat jai said to her…….she had always thought of him as her best frnd and knew that jai had always thought d same but today wat he said was like a blow to her, in those words jai had broken their lifelong frndship n had reminded her wat she really was to him….smthing she had forgotten long ago but now……..bani thought "I'v always thought of u as my frnd jai and that's y I tried to make u see wat pia really is…… n yesss u r absolutely right whatever I am today its bcoz of u, n I can never repay u back for wat u'v done for me and my mom but now I think it will be a lot better for us if I moved away from here n start to make a life that doesn't revolve around u……I wont move away from here bcoz of wat u said to me but bcoz I cant see u ruining ur life like this without interfering n that would be just too painful so I think It would be better I move away from ur life…..i'll do it as soon as mom and aunty come back from their yatra…I'll take my mom with me and find some other place to live that will be good for everyone………to be cont.

INDEX.

chapter 2 -pg 4

" 3- " 10

" 4- " 14

" 5- " 19

" 6- " 22

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davia389 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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pls cotnineu soon..
how dare jai say that ebcause of pia 😡
pls cotninue soon.. hope jai realizes his mistake..

davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great start....continue soon.....



BTW, I liked the name.......😆😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part!!!!!!!!

it was really cute

please cont soon
thanks
sanju
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh my god what have you done jai...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow my EB really works na. so sweet of u mahima dear to start a new ff and i must say what a start with bani slapping pia 👏 hope pia will many more from JW too 😉

great story and really i want to beat ur JW for behaving in such way with my sweet innocent bani. he is a duffer or awaal number 😡 hope he will get his punishment for behaving in such a way.


please continue soon

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
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davia- thanxx so much for replyin and yeahhh dont worry jai will realize his mistake that is a soon as i write d nxt prt 😆 😆


the_rain- hiii, thanxx for replyin and hehehe glad u liked the name of my ss afterall its my fav, word. 😆 😆 😆

basket- hiii sanju....thanxx for replyin dear...glad u like my effort....do keep givin ur replies.

heartbreak- oh!! dont worry dear wadeverrr he has done he is going to regret it very soon.

luv ya all
mahima

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: swatinarang

wow my EB really works na. so sweet of u mahima dear to start a new ff i had to write a new one n its ur fault only but i wrote this not bcoz i afraid of ur ebs(they no longer scare me coz the dont scare u hahahahaha) but bcoz i got bored coz u dint update mahabarat oaoaoaoaoa aab toh kar do yaar plzzzzzzzzz and i must say what a start with bani slapping pia 👏 hope pia will many more from JW too 😉 hehehehe i dint even notice bani slapped pia mainey toh bus likh diya as for jai slappin pia thanxxx for d idea hehehehehehe

great story and really i want to beat ur JW for behaving in such way with my sweet innocent bani when do u ever not want to beat jw??😆😆. he is a duffer or awaal number 😡 hey dont call my sweetie pie a duffer😡😆😆 hope he will get his punishment for behaving in such a way. y do u always want to punish my poor baby😭 😆ok fine he acted badly n he will be punished 😭😭


please continue soon phele u update mahabharaaaaaaaat, then i'll think bout it😆

swati

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Posted: 18 years ago
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mahima dear i will try to update tomorrow was really busy today but will try but for sure u will get update in this week.

dear u know me well when i am not after ur JW baby with my weapons 😆 hope both pia and JW will get punishment 😆 and good that u were bored else we may not have got this ff, thanks a billion for starting this dear.

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start mahima
loved the title of your story
i say that a lot also,

i hope jai doesnt get married to pia, like one of them gets into an accident, it will stop them from the marriage.

I hope krishna comes and defends bani

please post the first part soon

take care
mamta

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