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Posted: 9 years ago
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So, I am back. I don't know if you guys remember me though... hell I don't even know if any of my old readers even visit this forum anymore.
I took a long break. Not going to lie, it was indeed a break.
A break to think about writing and what I plan to do with it. And I have come to a conclusion: I want to be a published author. I am serious about writing.
So can you guys please help me? Just help me by reading what I write and giving some feedbacks that will improve my skills and give me some self confidence? Can I ask for that? I know, I tend to disappear a lot.. especially for a realllyyy long time. But I won't do that this time.
Because this time, I am serious.
So please vote on which story of mine you would like for me to continue first. I also have a new story plot that I don't mind writing, because I already started it. So pleasee take some time and read these <3 thank you so much <3 Vote as many as you can. Thank you, again.

P.S. My name is Sanaya, in case you don't know me or forgot me.

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Married To Mr. Arrogant

Thread One

Thread Two

(Arrange Marriage - 2 threads)

"Lillian Grayson, I don't care what you think of this. You are getting married, that is it. No ifs no buts and you're getting married to someone who I will pick!" My lovely mother semi yelled at me during our family dinner. Oh how much I love her.
Oh great Lil, you're getting married.
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I am Lillian Grayson, your typical average girl living her life not based on her own terms but her parents. But hey feel free to pity me because I deserve all the pithiness one can have.
I am 22, just finished my last year of college however that doesn't mean I am done with my studies. I still have to go to Medical school, since I am becoming a registered nurse.
People ask me why registered nurse not a doctor?
And I tell all of them the same answer "I am too lazy to study for 12 effen years. I rather spend 7 years in hell than 12."
Basically I am from a Nuclear family that consists of a crazy mother, a strict father, an over-protective elder brother and of course the Queen of Laziness aka Lillian Grayson.
Life has been all over the place for me. It's been good and bad throughout these years. I am finally out of college and I can't wait to start a new chapter of my life. However the chapter took a twist, no a major twist. I am getting married.
Yes MARRIED and I am only 22 for heaven's sake! And guess who I am getting married to.
Blake Aspen-'The Blake Aspen', CEO of the Aspen Corp.
He is the biggest jerk, asshole, player, conceited, and arrogant bas***d one will ever meet.
Thanks a lot Mom because of you I am getting Married to Mr. Arrogant!

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Fire & Ice

People always wish for something exciting to happen to them. Me? Nope. I was quite content with mynormal yet boring life. Too bad, all hell broke loose on the night of my prom.

Tension was brewing between The U.S. & Russia, yet again. It wasn't a cold war this time; it's a nuclear war. It's the same war that put an end to the cold war. But this time there is no stopping to it; on that very night was the first attack. The attack had caused thousands of deaths, and to my misfortune, we were nearby the attack. My school, home, and pretty much everything I ever cared for was gone in a blink of an eye.

All I wanted was for it to be a night to be remembered and sure as hell it was. It sent me right off to another world, a world NASA couldn't even lay finger on let alone send astronauts.

Why? Because it's a magical world, out of sights for any mundane. How did I get there? Apparently,I'm magical and my fate was for me to live and not to rot in a nuclear invasion.

I don't know what the future brings, all I know is that I have a second chance at life and mark my words I'm living it.

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The Queen's Keeper

(A typical Prankster - Bad boy sotry - wattpad inspired)

Aubree is known as the prankster of Mayville High. She's a ball of energy and her actions cause her to get in trouble at times. Adrian may be new but he's got quite a reputation. As a professional player, he's not new to the game. This bad boy's got a mouth. So what happens when Mr. Arrogant is stuck in detention with The Queen of Jokes? Will love blossom or will all hell break loose?

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The Karma Cafe

"Welcome to the Karma Cafe. There's no menus, you will get served what you deserve." Is the slogan for Xavier High's infamous club - Karma Cafe.

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Karma Cafe is the most feared club in the small little town of Heatherfield. It is a high school club that deals with stupidity done by students who are no less than an idiot. You can call them the Justice League who meets up in room 311B every Thursdays and Fridays after school to show what a bitch Karma can really be. The club consists of four members as of now.

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Keira O'Connell, also known as the most violent girl of Xavier High, feared by many. She is not afraid to speak her mind nor is she afraid to use to her hand to pound those who deserves it.

Halie Hathaway, founder of Karma Cafe. She is a role model of Xavier High - being a top student while maintaining a club that does a job equivalent to the Police. She was once Keira's enemy but now they're partners in crime.

Keith O'Connell, Keira's not so violent twin. A quiet yet brilliant guy who sees the best in everyone. The only sanity which keeps the club from getting disband.

Elliot Briar, the loud mouth with a British accent. He believes he's a player who plays with every girl's heart but the cold truth is... he's a fudging sweetheart.

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Weird bunch, aren't they? So what happens when Cole Jensen - a delinquent who could care less about school and often gets into fights - is forced to join this club of weird bunch?


The answer is quite simple: drama, fights, lying, laughing, crying, parties, detention, pranks, heart-breaks, and last but not least... romance.

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Of the Stars

Athea is a kingdom divided, and tension between the two halves has been rising. While both the Argonians and the Callisto disagree on almost everything there is one universal truth they both know; magic is rare.

When a young Callisto servant, with no magical upbringing, Caeli, begins to have prophetic dreams, she is told she has been born with the magic of the stars. The first to be born with magic in years, Caeli has no idea what to do, or how to control her powers. When the royal family catches wind of this rare and powerful girl, they become determined to add this gem to their wealth, and Caeli must go on the run.

With a prince, noble, and an assassin for company, Caeli is unsure if she will make it out alive and escape the royal families, or let alone make it out with her heart intact.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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New Story

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(haven't thought of a title yet.. but if you guys liked the concept and think have a nice title then please do share <3)

It's about a girl Prajna. Her first year of college just ended and for summer vacation she along with her family decided to visit India. She goes to her grandmother's village and reminisces her childhood spent there. Especially when her grandmother would tell her folk stories. However, now an adult she no longer believes in those sweet fairy tales.. until she witnesses it herself. An abandoned boat which takes her to a medieval India, where people are barely people. She meets a mysterious man, whom she makes a deal with - To Sell Her Soul to an Empire & Become it's Empress.
Now, an empress desperate to go back to her own world she must do anything and everything in her possession to survive from the neighboring kingdoms who's eyes lays upon her new kingdom.

BASICALLY, A 21st century girl trapped in one of the fairy tales her grandma told her except in reality its nothing like a fairy tale. Now she has to go back home but can't because her soul is no longer hers. It's different yet interesting in my point of view. So what do you guys think? Want me to start it?

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Poems
I have a small collection. I suck actually but its not that bad according to the people who has read it thus far. So shall I post em here?

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WELL THIS IS IT. PLEASE VOTE AND LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU GUYS THINK SO FAR <3 THANK YOU <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice concept... n n y not post the poem too it'll be good...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nidhiheart

nice concept... n n y not post the poem too it'll be good...

thanks, I think I will.
If i see enough readers are willing to read <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omigosh, yes bae!!! Welcome the eff back! And listen to me, like, read these words carefully: all writers take long breaks, all writers need long breaks. It helps them put things into perspective and improve on their writing. I took a break from writing because the stories I wrote at ages 12-13 had great concepts, but my writing sucked ass. I finished grade nine, and then I came back to writing because sometimes a crucial point in your life helps you grow up a little, and then you have a different outlook on life, and that can be a good thing for your writing. I mean, you're in your freshman year at college, and that's a crucial point in your life, so coming back to writing now is a good thing.

Now coming to your stories, I think that you should really continue Married to Mr. Arrogant first since you're already so far along and you've worked really hard on it, so I think that should really be your main priority.

Of The Stars should be next because fantasy is an interesting genre to play around with, but it's also a lot of work if you keep getting comments like, "but in this book." Those comments aren't fun, but I'd love love love to read Of The Stars because one, fantasy. Two, band of misfits. And do I really need a third point, it's 11PM.

After that, The Queen's Keeper. I don't know about other people, but I actually like the concept of this one because to me, Aubree does seem a little bit like a lot of your previous main characters, but she has this fun, spirited element to her, and pranksters rule so YAAASSS!

Then you might as well continue Fire & Ice and The Karma Cafe. Ooo, and your new story concept is really nice too!

Yes! You post those poems on here! Trust me, posting small things like poems and drabbles and stuff, especially when you have writer's block or you don't feel like updating, it's actually such a great stress reliever, and you're much more into the writing zone after that.

Anyways... I'm so effing happy you're back! I will be reading everything you post, and I will not be gentle with criticism. Girl, don't ever take creative writing, it's my worst and hardest class like... HOW?!

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Originally posted by: foreverlazy

Omigosh, yes bae!!! Welcome the eff back! And listen to me, like, read these words carefully: all writers take long breaks, all writers need long breaks. It helps them put things into perspective and improve on their writing. I took a break from writing because the stories I wrote at ages 12-13 had great concepts, but my writing sucked ass. I finished grade nine, and then I came back to writing because sometimes a crucial point in your life helps you grow up a little, and then you have a different outlook on life, and that can be a good thing for your writing. I mean, you're in your freshman year at college, and that's a crucial point in your life, so coming back to writing now is a good thing.

Now coming to your stories, I think that you should really continue Married to Mr. Arrogant first since you're already so far along and you've worked really hard on it, so I think that should really be your main priority.

Of The Stars should be next because fantasy is an interesting genre to play around with, but it's also a lot of work if you keep getting comments like, "but in this book." Those comments aren't fun, but I'd love love love to read Of The Stars because one, fantasy. Two, band of misfits. And do I really need a third point, it's 11PM.

After that, The Queen's Keeper. I don't know about other people, but I actually like the concept of this one because to me, Aubree does seem a little bit like a lot of your previous main characters, but she has this fun, spirited element to her, and pranksters rule so YAAASSS!

Then you might as well continue Fire & Ice and The Karma Cafe. Ooo, and your new story concept is really nice too!

Yes! You post those poems on here! Trust me, posting small things like poems and drabbles and stuff, especially when you have writer's block or you don't feel like updating, it's actually such a great stress reliever, and you're much more into the writing zone after that.

Anyways... I'm so effing happy you're back! I will be reading everything you post, and I will not be gentle with criticism. Girl, don't ever take creative writing, it's my worst and hardest class like... HOW?!


Girl, I know. I know.
Tbh, I am leaning more towards Queens Keeper & Karma Cafe. Idk why but I seem to like those two a lot. LiLake's story will def continue..! And the new story, gosh girl it will make you love this girl! This one is meant to be published so the first draft will be here!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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U r finally here😲...Plz update married to Mr arrogant...plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: DivineBlessings

U r finally here😲...Plz update married to Mr arrogant...plzzz

yes i am and yes i will <3
anything else you would want me to continue?
top 3?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow you are back
please continue Mr Arrogant
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Elysian-


Girl, I know. I know.
Tbh, I am leaning more towards Queens Keeper & Karma Cafe. Idk why but I seem to like those two a lot. LiLake's story will def continue..! And the new story, gosh girl it will make you love this girl! This one is meant to be published so the first draft will be here!!!


Aburee makes my heart melt, like just from her description, she is actually my girl crush right now. In my head, I'm just like, "oh my god, she's writing about Audrey Whitby."

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