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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow!!! What a story. You are a beautiful writer. Hope to read more stories penned by you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
A beautiful story. It's delight a reading your work. There is something in your style which draws everyone's attention towards it!
I enjoyed reading it. It is really lovely!!
You have immense talent in you.
You should write more!
I love your work and am eagerly looking forward to your future works :)
Thanks for spinning a fantabulous tale!

Love,
Salikaa :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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What I liked about your stories is a) that you always complete them and b) these are a total package of coordinated events, deep emotions, a little sweet, a little spice.

Your Arnavs and Khushis are very human in their errors as well.

This story was different from your previous stories not because Shyam wanted Khushi and it therefore resulted in ArHi to have issues but Shyam wanted Anjali and thereby ArHi had issues. Now that is a hatke thing for any ArHi story out there.

About Arnav's parents; it's sad but true. This world is made of all kinds of crap!
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello, hope you're doing well.

I don't know if you remember, but i had send you a PM long back about your stories. And have asked you if you're going to start a new one.
I am sorry, i haven't been active much around the time you were posting this story here, but i was thrilled when i found out that you have written a new story.
I searched for its blog and read all parts in one go and i guess its futile to say how beautiful this story is.
And was reading it again and thought to express my gratitude and appreciation for writing this wonderful story.

I really like your style of using different cities of Indian, how you wove the story around those areas makes me search for those areas on internet and see how they look in actual.

First, love the title ... Harvest Moon, very unique and apt for this story.
The topic was different and very rural type, but i have loved it nonetheless.
Arnav, being a farmer ... though he was turn out to be a successful business man in the end. Khushi was reluctant to marry him, but cannot avoid the pull she feels towards him. they both had met each other years ago but still remember that moment. And that moment had made Arnav agree to marry Khushi.

The misunderstanding leading to their anger & distance ... which soon diminished with time when they both have realized that no matter what the circumstances will be ... they will be drawn to each other ... like a moth to flame.

Love the way you write their intimate moments, makes me read them again and again 😳 ... not only that ... your way of telling character's emotions and feeling is also very very good.

Thanks you so much for writing this story, i know its not easy to take time out of your real life and write down stories, as i have been writing one FF myself. 😊

Hope to see another story from you soon ... and this time i will make sure that i will be here to share my views and comments whenever you post it.

Take care and God Bless You! 😳


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Posted: 9 years ago
Very beautiful story,
Read this one in one go...
Actually I loved all your stories.
Thanks for these wonderful stories.
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow! superb story...
read all parts in one go...
loved it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautifully said. I admire the way you took this negative comment in your stride. Love your grace Charlotte74. Fell totally for your stories and you!!!

Kudos...👏👏👏



Originally posted by: charlotte74


Each story is different. If you don't like it, you always have a choice not to read.

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Posted: 9 years ago
oh dear..what a story .. awesome..loved the way you write ...every emotions we can feel it..you are master of twist and turns ..perfect ..loved the different shades of arnav..thank god atlast all the misunderstanding got clear.. The way you described every shades of various state .loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Just came across this stry nd read it in one go...must say such a amazing stry read after so long...beautifully penned down..the way u potrayed each characters...just loved it..u r an amazing writer...kuddos t u...love to see different shades of arnav...nd among all MU thier love finally cross all the hurddle...beautiful ending with arshi forever...lovedevery bit of the stry...

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