Manan SS : Darling chapter 11 on pg 52 - Page 34

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chapter 11

N : kaha chala gaya tu ?
mey kitna pareshan hogayi you know ?
Manik is looking her with shocked face and by seeing him she realised what she did .
And she slightly turned the head towards others and saw them with the corner of her eyes .she observed everyone and shock was written on everyone's face.
So she composed herself and said guys why you are all standing quiet ?
Kuch bolo na guys you all were tensed now you all are quite.
Finally cabir spoke tune jo jatka diya na so don't know what to say ?
Finally cabir spoke kya yaar manik aisa koi atha hey kya ?
Agar tujhe tumhari laadli se baath karni hey tho baath kar jaana chahiye na ?
Fab 4 and abhi also waiting for his answer
Manik : aisa nahi hey yaar kuch log na bohot busy tha( taunting nandu) and I was feeling bore so suddenly phone agayi and you all were busy so isliye I didn't informed.
Waise cabir kuch log jab waha hotha tho Baav nahi detha par thapad deta hey all are listening these words and turn to see nandu face and she is looking here and there without meeting eye contact.
Suddenly nandini said sorry manik
I didn't mean to slap you but all were tensed isliye gussa ayyi and walked from there to the car and left the place to farm house.
Abhi : I think wo guilty feel kar rahi hey isliye she left sorry for her behavior.
Muklya koi baath nahi hey waise manik ko koi etraz nahi hey
Fab 4 : they gave a smrik and said hey na manik .
Manik gave a small smile and said lets go guys and all reached home.



All entered the house. saw all moms are sitting leisurely and chit chatting about something.( all are together no differences or fighting between parents of fab 5 all fab 5 lead happy childhood with great memories)
Aliya : hello everyone kya baathe horahi hey humare bina and sat between dhruv mom and cabirs mom.she kept her head on dhruvs mom shoulder.
Waise where are my munchkins ? (means raj,Vishnu,ram and all)
Niyonika : sab busy hey aapane kaam mey ( they are also partying ) suddenly niyo asked why nandu came early and left to the room without telling anything ? What happened ? You ppl did any thing kya ?? All looked each other faces
but cabir said aisa koi baath nahi hey aunty wo thak gayi hey . so rest karnke liye jaldi agayi.
And manik ,dhruv ,cabir ,mukti and abhi settled down .
Manik kept his head on niyonikaa lap and she is ruffling his hair.same with cabir,mukti and dhruv they kept head on theres mother's lap.
Abhi felt sad . Because he lost his parents so he is feeling sad but nandinis mom abhi Yaha mere pass.
By listening this manik thought omg ye meri honey ( nandus mom )ko bi patalia.
Niyonika : waise aap log kis kisko saathaya and cabirs mom also asked same question.
Cabir : mom what are you telling hum tho kitne acche hey . kyu jhoot bolthi ho humesha
Cabirs mom : chup kar I know about you all and especially you two evil twins pointing towards mukti.
Muktis mom : yes you both every time will cross your limits.
Mukti got pissed and said aliya come we will go upstairs Yaha tho logoki importance bi nahi patha and she dragged her from sofa and left. But boys were there only
Suddenly dhruvs mom said kal raksha bandan hey so kya plan sab ki ?
Dhruv : mom surprise plan kiya hey mukti and nandu keliye.
Cabir : wo aliya ke liye bi dhruv ??
Dhruv : you moron meri girlfriend hey wo not my sis
she is sis for you not for me and he left angrily from there.
All laughed at cabirs stupid joke
Barkha saxsena : kyu mera beta ko thang kartha hey tu huh and she pulled his ear .
Niyonika : chal manik ,cabir and abhi sab sojavo and all left from there.
Manik was going to his room . suddenly he observed that nandus room door is opened only.( he has to pass nandu room to reach his room )
I peeped to see what she is doing ?
I saw her sleeping peacefully like an angel with constant smile on her face. And her hairs are disturbing her face. I reached near the bed and tucked her hairs behind the ears to watch her angelic face.
Don't know when I got lost in her beauty. My trance got broken by the tap on my shoulder .
I turned to see who it is ? He is none another than cabir.
Manik : kya hey cabir ?
Cabir : kya kar raha hey tu meri behen ke saath ?
Manik : tujhe kya bey meri nandu hey wo tumhari behen se first ye meri motti hey he yelled some what loud .
Nandu got disturbed but still she didn't open her eyes
Cabir observed this and said easy bro kyu chilla raha ho jaag jayege wo . so manik saw her getting disturbed and said daffa hoja I will come. cabir left from there.
Manik was there for some more time and gave a small peck on her forehead and left her room.
Manik reached his room and slept peacefully.

Next morning :
Nandu woke up lazily and observed the calendar . she is shocked to see its raksha bandan . she is tensed what to do ?she got up with a jerk and got ready and went to meet abhi .
She went to abhis room and entered the room slowly by not making noise as abhi is sharing room with dhruv.
She went near abhi and tryed to wake him up but janab soraha hey.
Nan : abey utt aaj raksha bandan hey yaar
Abhi got disturbed and said loudly tho kya karu mey tujhe acche gift dunga sone do na mujhe .
She palmed his mouth and said dheere dhruv hey Yaha.
Abhi gave an irritated look and slept again.
Nandu gave up and left from there.
She is walking in the corridor blabbering about abhi and bumped into mukti she gave a smile and said easy girl .Kya hua nandu ? Kyu pareshaan ho ?
And aliya came from behind and ask mukti abhi tak jaga nahi dhruv ko kya ?
Mukti : ha jarahi hu par nandu ko dekha so baath kar rahi thi.
Aliya : hii nandu chalo neeche chalte hey aaj raksha bandan hey na and mukti tu sab ko Jaga kar aa ok ?
And nandu and aliya left from there and reached living room.
On other side mukti woke up all them and asked them to get ready except abhi.
And she reached the hall.
After sometime all boys reached the hall.
Niyonika : kitne late karthe hey tum sab log chalo mukti and aliya are waiting.
Manik : mom agaya na hum sab tho kyu chila rahi ho.
While talking he is looking around to search nandu.

On other side nandu is in kitchen helping other aunts .
And she is very tensed and fidgeting her fingers.
Dhruvs mom saw this and asked kya hua nandu.
Nan ; kuch nahi aunty and smiled at her and suddenly mukti and aliya said chalo nandu agaya wo log.

In hall :
Dhruv,cabir ,manik and rishab are sitting.
Manik : I'm missing my princess kash wo Yaha hoti.
Cabir : koi nai ajayegi wo bi
Dhruv : ha buddy Atleast wo raki bejegi tujhe don't worry.
And girls with their moms came from kitchen with thali.
Manik saw nandu and simply staring at her with so much love. Nandu felt strong gaze at her but she didn't looked at manik.
Manik pov
Aaj tho tumhari game katham hogi meri nandu ??
and gave a smrik to her.
Mukti tied rakhi to manbir and dhruv.
Aliya tied rakhi to manbir. Nandu tied rakhi to rishab ,cabir and dhruv .
Nandu pov
Aiyappa bachale mujhe mom sab ke samne abhi ko puchege tho kya kahu mey kuch samaj nahi aaraha hey and wo duffer abhi donkey ki tarah soraha hey.And aaj plan sab fail hogi urgh...
And suddenly abhi came downstairs. Even he don't know what to do.
Manik observed that abhi came and he was very happy that now everything will be out.
Cabir : why are you feeling happy ? Tumhari dushman agaya . jab dekho nandu jap kartha hey.
Manik : just chill ab dekho kya hota hey . ye log the manik malhotra ko fool bane chala.
Swara murthy: abhi beta agayi tu. Kyu itni dher thak
soya aaj festival hey na
Abhi : kuch nahi hey maa and sat on the sofa
Swara came near nandu and said rakhi bando abhi ko
kyu statue ki tarah kadi ho.

Wow nice update...
Nandu was soo sad after slapping Manik..
Raksha bandhan aww..
Waiting for next...
Thnx for pm..
Update soon..

Awesome update.loved it. Nandini's truth will be out. eagerly waiting to read further.continue soon. thanks for pm.

Hahaha... Nandu ki mom ne toh nandu ki choupsy ker di ...
Awesome update...

Amazing update..

Oh shit ! Ab kya karu mey ? If monster comes to know that I'm playing with him then he will play with me .
Other side
Abhi pov
(Looking at nandu with tensed face)
Aaj iske saath mey bi gayi . Agar manik ko gussa agaya na mujhe mardega yahi . I told that nandu we should not play games with monsters but sunti nahi . yeah ladki bi na mujhe marvayegi.
Swara : nandu chal bando rakhi abhi ko kya soch rahi hu ?
Nandu trance got broken and she went with thalli near abhi to tie rakhi and stood in front of abhi to tie rakhi.
All fab 4 were shocked by seeing this. All looked towards manik and fab 4 saw him smiling .mukti ,aliya and dhruv said to cabir pucho na usse patha hey kya ye sab ?
Cabir : manik tujhe patha hey kya ?
Manik : yeah kal he patha chala cabir ab dekho kya kya hota hey he said in stern tone with his famous smirk .
Cabir : chill bro ! Abhi ko marna math jaroor nandu ki idea hogi . you know na how shaitani she was in bachpan .
Manik : dekthe hey but abb enjoy the show.
Cabir showed thumbs up to fab 3 that everything is ok.
Manik is enjoying seeing their tensed faces and smiling that now everything will be fine . At the same time he is angry with nandu for playing with him.
Nandu took abhi's hand and closed her eyes and tied rakhi to him . Both abhi and nandu gave nervous smile to all the fab 5 members because of getting caught like this .
Suddenly niyonika said akuti hogi tho kitni acchi hoti hey na ?
By listening this manik felt bad because he is also missing her a lot . Everyone saw manik he has dull face .( everyone knows how much love he has for his sister)
Cabir to lighten manik mood akuti aagayi tho bohot satha thi hey tujhe and tumhe Chen se nahi chodti.
Manik baba a watch man entered and handed a gift covered wrap to him and said baba post man gave this cover and went .
Manik saw the cover and gave a small smile that her little sissy send rakhi to him .where ever she will be she will not forget to send rakhi to him. All know that what it is ? they know only akuti make him that much happy .
He happily opened the cover saw the rakhi and caressed it . A greeting card is also there he took and start readfacewith a peaceful smile on his face
Hello bro I know you are missing me a lot . Even same goes with me .Happy raksha bandan bucks bunny
I know you hate this name but phir bi my cute sa bunny bro . I know i will always make you irritate by fighting with you . And I will always do cribbing with you and i will make you to come with me for shopping wich you don't like but you will always come for me to make me happy .No matter the distances between us, my Rakhi will always reach on time, to be tied on the wrist of my loving brother and I wish you to have world's happiness. You never say no, you never say thats impossible and you never say you can't. That's my bro, a superman who makes me walk in a correct path when I was wrong and I love you so much.
By reading ,this tears formed in manik eyes and said kash my baby sis is here I would be happy . All were feeling sad by seeing manik like this but suddenly some one covered maniks eyes all were
surprised by seeing the person .