AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 59

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

😆😆<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Done with 15! Writing A/N now. Pheww...I'm seeing stars now..IF was giving so much trouble it took me 3 hours to update! 😕Why? Copy paste if quote isn't working..IF is being troublesome I guess</font>

Such a dedicated writer
😆
i read half of the update and literaly crying for asad's pain
after getting update dil garden garden ho gaya 👏

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Such a dedicated writer
😆
i read half of the update and literaly crying for asad's pain
after getting update dil garden garden ho gaya 👏

Garden Garden Hi rehna Chahiye! I hope you enjoy the part! This part was reallly tough to write due to Asad's pain. I will admit I ACTUALLY cried a little as I envisioned the whole Kyun song sequence..maybe because I know what was ACTUALLY happening in his flashbacks. But I'm glad you can feel his pain..meri mehnat rang layee 😆 Baaki ka parke lamba sa comment do!

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

Garden Garden Hi rehna Chahiye! I hope you enjoy the part! This part was reallly tough to write due to Asad's pain. I will admit I ACTUALLY cried a little as I envisioned the whole Kyun song sequence..maybe because I know what was ACTUALLY happening in his flashbacks. But I'm glad you can feel his pain..meri mehnat rang layee 😆 Baaki ka parke lamba sa comment do!

Ofcourse i shall give a long comment to your hard work without any hesitance 😊

hey daisy update was nice

WOW...AMAZING UPDATE, JUST AWESOME
big hug nd more luv fr the long update dear...
u just nailed it ...more perfect.
LUVD LUVD the update to the core.
asad's stubborn nature nd zoya's bubbliness nd their emotions...no perfect words to describe, fantabulous.
its the QH, ours... with every emotions nd words i just can feel nd see through it.
really really luvd the whole update nd as ususual u rocked ASYA part ,
esp the way u mostly describe their emotions in silence...like poem WOW .
well i can talk about the update all day and read too nd honestly cant get enough , well its not my fault, its bz of ur amazng update.
so asad is stubborn nd more stubborn nd zoya...well cant wait to knw wat'll happen nxt
waiting very much eager...update soon as u can

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

THAT WAS SO FAST..I just finished updating! LOL! Glad you enjoyed though! LOL ABHI maine 5 ghante lagake update kiya..2 weeks of writing..already continue...for now go enjoy the pictures I uploaded for part 15 on page 70!

Wow what an awesome long update. So much revelation poor Zoya and asad. They both deserve each other. Hope Asad let her in and he finds himself. Love him.

Originally posted by: anopama

Res

Unres

Sorry so late

Wow the lion is furious and he roared

Poor zoya but dont matter how scared she was she stood her ground

In all his anger he still found her beautiful though

Loved the sisters bond in the haveli

Naina is so right azlan who but who is she kidding

Ayaan is funny though

Aww humeria he refuse ur fren request

So the elites dinner is terrorized

Our selfless zoya runs to help but was warned and sent home by her mysterious chocolate eyes

Zoya breaks down in dilshad arms the mothers love she always crave

She was ready to risk her son to find her daughter

Dont worry he did send her home safely and watched her tillnshe fot there

Asad at office how convenient

Azlan anger at asad is not justified he cant hate asad for being there for his daughter when he wasnt and cant blame the child for loving who was there for her

Asad would be totally broken if anything happens to pari

Aww zoya took her warning at heart she wore the chains back

How come it is 2 thought it was one chain

So she is hoping for a 3rd meeting

So Akdu came home she observed him

He dont smile dont worry u will make him smile

Dilshad and zoya convo on asad so sad

Smile laugh will he ever maybe one day dilshad wish will fulfil

He is insomniacs

So zoya learns he lost the contract

Say sorry would not be so easy a hand to silent and a foot in the face ...Oh boy

Ayaan puts royality to their place call them what no way they hurt the people he loves

So "S" saves the king but he didnt see the king he saw someone else when he looked at him ...his grandfather

So one morw confirmation the zoya mystery is Asad

Dillu and asad convo on love and family and his health ws so beautiful

She as a mother is worried for her son

He swore he will never ever fall in love

He dont want to see his ammi crying so he didnt kill the musibat

I want when asya get together for asad to just put his head in zoya lap and have a good night's sleep

Hurricane zoya

Cake Sauce un asad cup nice

Aww she wants to make phupi happy and make akdu smile

Dont worry zoya not impossible

Love malik a way to put azlan in his place

A prince as security for a nobody

Zain do enjoy azlan dilemma...haha

Malik has a special hatred for gaffur?

Hasena always a bitch

Zoya grandparents in regret good to let them grieve some more zoya

Shelia is a good fren

Honey singh tonite

Now i know how asya will have alot of moments at cafe bcuz she works there

Cant wait for them to get together

But guess we have to have friendship before lovers

Asya outburst with each other

God forbid he dont want to be her father or brother

Zoya considers him beautiful hope he acknowledge tht wgen he cools down

Concert ki dushman

Dream abt yo yo...haha zoya couldnt even say honey was better than asad

Off to the concert god help her

Ayan really y did u call asad and rat the girls

Asad memory so sad all his talent and ambitions got snatched away by fathers

Rogue cant wait for asya dances there but right now a dancing zoya who knows eyes r on her but whose is it S or asad how abt both the same...an angry and jealous one who will kill her when he got a hold of her

Also an angry and jealous azlan and humeria for ayan and naina

Fight fight fight

Azlan an ayaan asad a victim

Zain a pussy oh asad and azlan blow up

So their bond shattered over a girl

Who was she thought asad had no one in his life

Wow freedom asad gives up affter all the verbal vomit and tears he set thwm free he dont care

Asad the audacity how xan u throw away the girls world best creation something she only makes for special people

So r we gonna see a changed zoya she is genuinely sorry Ns wants to learn more abt him

Naina and kajol plan may work but in the end ayan may be hurt bcuz I think he do like naina

Dilshad pain at being the cost of her son broken dreams heartbreaking

Love the respect aisha has for her younger bro

Plz too much tears in KM we need happiness in tht house

Omg hymeria rude much ayaan got girls fighting for him

Rolls Royce nice ...asad hates the sight of his abbu and family

Yes yes yes zoya is asad faceless girl from years ago bcuz he gor tht feeling of hwr being near and it was zoya in the other room dancing the song

Asad needs food and azlan needs to get it

His speech touch my heart

AAK for mayor never happening

Zoya jealousy at the behayad girls

So she talked to him and he lashed out

She is not impressed by his looks really and he wants her to be bcuz she is the only one who rurned his head

So slimey sameer has slezy friends too sohail

I hope asad would have seen her distress but he wad raged with jealousy

But glad he stuck around the School for he protection

But he needs to pay more attention to her but hopefully soon he will figure out everyrhing

Asad protectiveness and worry foe zoya is admirable at rhis early stage but when he realizes her life and what she does how will he heal her how will they heal eaxh other

Omg zoya is a cutter so so sad to see tht immense hurt and pain and her way ro ease it

So zoya is the reason her jiju die $ameer killed him he tried molesting zoya at thw age of 15 such a bas***d

And now he has her back after 7 yrs and he will claimed her as his this time no one to stop him

So they threaten asas life tht is y zoya went quietly.

Sameer Anand so he is the big criminal of kausali remember the name Anand at the beginning

Love asad and ayaan convo he is his brother by choice not his brother by blood

So he is more important

Love tht bond and friendship

Well I finished this chap still has 14 to go

Hope I catch up before 15 uploads

Originally posted by: preetiasya

IT WAS AWESOME YAAR

I LOVED IT

I WAS SO SO SO SO FABULOUS

SO COMING TO UPDATE

FIRST i thaught i will get asya scene but asad came its ok no problem

so i loved the attitude of asad wen he is near cops i just loved it

ahh zoya i feel really bad wen i see zoya dull

i like more if she be happy

hey i am really missing anwar & zoya bonding yaar

wow asad let zoya sit in his sports car where he doesnt allow his family also

nice improvement

i loved conversation between zoya & malik

it seems tey both r of same type

zoya praying to allah was really heart touching

she is facing a lot

poor soul

zoya was trying to knnow about son of kausali

zoya dance in rain and asad is mesmeraised seeing her

zoya lecture on cigarate is nice

i thaught tat atleast asad follows hr suggestion in hr absence

bt nothing of tat sort has happened

i am little disappointed

wen he will stop those bad habits? only u & god know.

and he deliberately drinks infront of zoya

oh zoya thinks tat aahil loves aisha !smart girl!

i loved their talking

ayyan knew zoya took his credit card

eventhough he didnt ask hr

niceto see tese brotherly seen

i loved asad & pari bonding

asad is hr superhero

i loved the scene of asya in ada designs

i loved zoya remark tat was so nice

"AGAR KISSI NE APP KE LIYE JAAN DE DO THO APP KAHENGE KI APP TEEK SE NAHI DIYA" tat was so nice so listen

conversation of aisha and zoya in aisha room was so nice

so zoya wanna do something fr asad

aisha wanna go to party with aahil

&zoya is helping hr

ahhh iam hell angry on asad wen tere is no mistake of zoya

he scolded hr and bought hr parents also in middle of tat

i dont understand if he cant see tears in hr eyes ten wat is the need to hurt hr to tat extent

in this update tere is a bit nice scenes tat i remembered the show

like rashid& zoya scene

fighting scene

zoya saw the nightmare tat is haunting her

she got so feared

zoya saying to dil & aisha abt goons was so nice

again i remembered show

asad really loved to be IN IMA i thinnk

he really desires fr tat

tat magzine seen was so nice

zoya asking ayaan to join fr icecream is nice

she asked asad also to join

so zoya know faridabi

she meets pari also

i really want zoya & pari have good relation

and asad & zoya meet eachother unknowingly through pari

by seeing asad attitude i thaught tat he dont have any frnds bt he has a big gang

wow asad sang again

i know zoya was the one who asked ayaan to help in in making asad sing

i want asad to know tat

anwar zeenat coming wow

both teasers was nice

akram fiasco oh no

asad & zoya in race

bt why?

and s i wanna ask abt dance asya in rogue

i want it to come fast

update sooon

eagerly waiting

u took two weeks gap it should worth the wait

weekend is nearing update sooon

this is ur long comment

toook so much time to write

cont sooon

Originally posted by: anuv6

WOW...AMAZING UPDATE, JUST AWESOME
big hug nd more luv fr the long update dear...
u just nailed it ...more perfect.
LUVD LUVD the update to the core.
asad's stubborn nature nd zoya's bubbliness nd their emotions...no perfect words to describe, fantabulous.
its the QH, ours... with every emotions nd words i just can feel nd see through it.
really really luvd the whole update nd as ususual u rocked ASYA part ,
esp the way u mostly describe their emotions in silence...like poem WOW .
well i can talk about the update all day and read too nd honestly cant get enough , well its not my fault, its bz of ur amazng update.
so asad is stubborn nd more stubborn nd zoya...well cant wait to knw wat'll happen nxt
waiting very much eager...update soon as u can