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UV_Arshi

@UV_Arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

Hey there...recently read this story. It's really good.

Khushi's past, all her pain and suffering has been written so well. Poor thing...such a difficult life she has had, It's nice that she found good friends like Sneha and then Arnav. He's so caring and loving. Very adorable! I like how their relationship gradually builds up. And their past connection was quite a surprise albeit a pleasant one.

The ending was very cute! I really enjoyed reading the story. Thanks for sharing :)

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chilukuripuri

@chilukuripuri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#272

NICE STORY...

READ ALL IN ONE GO...

KEEP SMILING...

PURNI..

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dreamgirlrus23

@dreamgirlrus23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#273

I LOVED IT...IT'S A REAL MASTERPIECE...SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY...SO WONDERFULLY WRITTEN

I'M UR FAN

KEEP WRITIN MORE ON ARSHI PLZ

LOVED IT SERIOUSLY

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sanjuarshi

@sanjuarshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#274

this is really so so beautiful story dear 😊👏 i came to know abt this one from aamir18's post and I really cant thank enough for getting to read this one. write more ARSHI stories dear...u r a very very good writer.

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pran28671

@pran28671

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Posted: 10 years ago

#275

Awesome story beautiful concept well written

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#276

Just one single word for this beautiful piece of writing

FABULOUS!!!!

Great Work!!!!

Take Care!!!!

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

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Posted: 9 years ago

#277

loved reading this beautiful ff very fabulousky written.

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Aakanksha

@ina_saahil

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Posted: 9 years ago

#278

Came across your index recently and this one was the first of the lot that I picked up to read and I must say it kept me hooked from start till the end.

Well this story had shown different phases of Arnav and Khushi's life as to how they met each other, what was their first reaction on seeing each other, how they turned friends, how Arnav became Khushi's confidante.. They were many unsaid things between them but still there was never a need to actually put them in words..

The story gradually took a turn towards the love which Arnav and Khushi shared and then it was blissful to read that as well..😊

You have a way with words and how you narrate the story is your game. You make sure that the reader is hooked to you till the end and I really admire that about you.

Looking forward to reading more of your stuffs..

And please do keep writing..

Lots Of Love...😊😊

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gprs

@gprs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#279

wow..that was fantastic ..loved the concept..he tried with wholeheart to heal her and succeeded with his love..Actually I thought Shrey was an evil connected to khushi 's past..but you gave me a whole different beautiful concept and love..from the beginning he cared for her..he took care of her every need..loved the bond between arnav-sneha..they bonded very well inspite being strangers..nk, anjali and nani are so sweet..the siblings bonding is so cute..Arnav is entirely different here..feeling sad for what khushi made to go through for other's greedy..
she took it very well when he explained the past..their kiss is so dreamy and magical..yet you decided to make me worry the next second by his ignorance..but finally you made them clear things ..the way he took care and her complaints about him being babysitter and his proposal and her acceptance everything is so good..

Thank you for this beautiful story..I gonna read your other works too..