Is there anything you can't write? This piece was so damn hilarious!
With the way you write the scene plays in front of your eyes, and you stay so well to characterisation right down to the dialogues! The things they were saying would actually come out of their mouths in a episode!
The EDKV team needs to read this and implement it. Honestly, you blow me away!
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