I really liked this chapter!!
I will be honest, the first time I read the chapter, I did not really like the first part (Shravan-Nirmala) but that was probably because I hated the Nirmala on the show and while reading I thought of her that way, having done all those things she did, ignoring him and continuously hurting him for her nanha shaitaan! I will not get back to that, just pisses me off! But I am glad I read it again (I had to, so I could comment) and I did not have a problem with their conversation like I did before. I think I was being extra angry on behalf of Shravan in the show😳. He expressed his hurt, gave her a chance to defend herself and did not forgive her completely in one go like it should have been.
Sumo the ever impatient one and Shravan the ever teasing one. Their arguments are just never ending and crazy! They are super cute though! I just love how he used to call her Mrs Malhotra in the show and I am so glad you use that! The whole surprise was so beautiful and well written! Sumo so overwhelmed with emotions! I could totally see it happening! And those back hugs!!!! And their whole conversation about the house especially him clarifying exactly why he got the house was perfect! Their discussion regarding the renovation which leads them to talk about their kids and their talk about how many they want and their feelings and emotions especially when they discuss what kind of parents they'll be and Sumo understanding Shravan's fears, are all so well expressed!
The whole closet scene was brilliant Anjali! The teasing, the playfulness, her frustration at being teased too much, the banter and the war of words in which the lawyer Mr Shravan Malhotra always wins! You've kept a balance of them being best friends where they can annoy the hell out of each other and lovers where their love is just so heartwarming! You've maintained the essence of ShraMan from the show!!
Sumo defending Shravan was AMAZING! There is only so much a loving caring wife can ignore when things are said against her husband and Sumo had reached that point! I loved Shravan's reaction to it though. Hehe!
Them decorating the house together!!! The thought only gives me feels!!! And it was super cute!!! Their bickering and then coming to an agreement! LOL!! Loved it!
The proposal was beautiful! It was romantic and emotional with a pinch of playfulness!! Heartfelt is probably how I can describe it!
Poor ShraMan sab peechche hi padgae! Why is everyone hell bent on separating them! And mami's reaction to Sumo whacking Shravan was hilarious!!! Let's see how ShraMan manage the distance and separation.
I loved this chapter Anjali! Hope you update soon!!! Thanks for the PM and really sorry for unresing so late.
Edited by PrincessAshVik - 9 years ago
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