ShraMan SS: Painful Revelations [A/N, Pg 29, Nov 1] (EDKV Continued)

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I Loved every bit of this Anjali!

Right from the first sentence I was hooked. It is everything I want to happen in this show. The pain, the hurt, the truths and the confessions all need to be out soon.

I like how you have tied all the loose ends and explained every single detail. It was just brilliant!!


I loved it even more because of the confession; tears and honesty in the moment. The need to be with each other, ignoring all other things, the anger, the hate but remembering the love that matters the most!

It was BEAUTIFUL!!!

P.S: Did you write the whole thing on your phone😲
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OMG!! I BLOODY LOOOVE THISSS!! ABSOLUTELY AMAZING 😃
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Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

I Loved every bit of this Anjali!


Right from the first sentence I was hooked. It is everything I want to happen in this show. The pain, the hurt, the truths and the confessions all need to be out soon.

I like how you have tied all the loose ends and explained every single detail. It was just brilliant!!


I loved it even more because of the confession; tears and honesty in the moment. The need to be with each other, ignoring all other things, the anger, the hate but remembering the love that matters the most!

It was BEAUTIFUL!!!

P.S: Did you write the whole thing on your phone😲


Awww, thanks girl! <3 I am glad you liked it. Ah, man I wish they'd just talk.

And yeah, I wrote most of it on my phone and then edited it on my laptop, the only time I have to write is usually while I am commuting or when I can't sleep and then I am too lazy to go get my laptop LOL.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautifully penned Anjali I truly hope the story unfolds just the way you have written


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You found some use for Preeti! That's an achievement, Anjali 😆
It was angsty, but lovely! Bring on all the angst in the world, if it leads to a culmination like in your story...



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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOw I wish CVS show us Sumos feelings so explicitly. Wonderful👏
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Superb...too good ...just loved it
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Wowww Hats off to u Anjali...this was amazing beautiful heart-touching fab as always..loved it hun!

Thank u..


Love,
Spandana
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😭 that was so so heart wrenching. Oooh wish they talk. This was one of d best of urs and one of d best i have ever read. Thank you for this piece.

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