VaVa FF: I love you..... (updated ch 6 at pg 17)

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heya guys...mai vapis himmat karke ek ff likhne jaa rahi hu...on our cute vava. plz pasand aaye to support karna Aur apne suggestion dete rehna...character sketch 1st ch k baad update karungi...plz read...

Hc 8110 : they've been released! Move your family to a safer place asap!
Hc 1610: my only family is my 1721...and those beasts want her...they are released by my enemies so that they can harm my daughter...oh...wait...where is 1721?
Hc 8110: what?? 1721 is out?? It will certainly prove to be very dangerous...

On the other hand...

1721 is walking alone through the streets. Suddenly she senses someone behind her. She remembered that her enemies whom she captured has been freed. But she doesn't look back as she know it will be dangerous. She started to combine her powers while walking and turned back suddenly and used the power on the person behind.
Person: Aaah! What did u just do.. Are you mad?
1721 suddenly realised that it was not those terrorists. It was some other young handsome gentleman.
1721: ohh...I'm really so sorry...I thought it was...nothing... I'm so sorry... I didn't do it purposely... Sorry

9211 saw a royal sign on her upper hand. It was the sign of being hc's child. Boys had it on back but girls had it on visible part as they may be safe and no one would harm her...

9211(thinking); is this 1721? Jiske bare me papa ne bataya tha ki northern hemisphere ke hc ki beti hai...kya papa ne kal isse shaadi karne ki baat ki thi? Jo bhi ho ladki powerful fighter hai...powers use karna aata hai... I'm impressed...
1721: aap kya soch rahe ho? Jyada zor se lagi kya...oh my god...ye Maine kya kardiya...I'm really so sorry...
And tears started to form in her eyes...
9211: Hey tum ro mat...I'm ok...don't cry...mai thik hu...(thinking)arre yaar aadhi raat ko yeh ladki bich raaste me ro rhi h. Isko kisi ne dekhliya to mai badnam ho jaunga...

1721 wipes her tears and tells sorry once again.
9211: its ok..
1721: thank you
1721 starts to walk towards her home...after she disappeared 9211 also started to walk...on the way home he saw 2 people...he immediately recognised them as terrorists who were caught by 1721 2 years back...he went there silently and hid behind an alien tree..he was listening

T1: kal vo 1721 haath se nahi nikalni chahiye...par yaad rakhna ki use marna nahi hai...uspe attack karke usko acchi vali saza nhi deni hai...vo bhi apne style me...kyu ki us hoshiyar ki wajah se aaj hum is halat me hai...
T2: kal wo jab apne space station se aayegi to hum roop badlenge Aur uski best frietc-
1622 ban jayenge Aur use chaal se apne den tak le jayenge Aur waha...uske saare powers lelenge and saari abilities destroy kar denge phir 2 machine tak usko Severe torture karenge...hahahaha

9211 was shocked to hear this. He decided to save her...he wanted to meet her again and wanted to talk with her about them. Now he wanted to save her...

What will 9211 do to save her?
Has both hc decided their marriage?
Will something happen to 1721?

Precap: Hc thanks 9211 for saving 1721. Both hcs decide their children's marriage will be the next day

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Note:- character sketch coming soon
Stay tuned to VaVa I love you

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey it's mmm waiting for next part...

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Character sketches..



9211, Vasant Ghotala : he is the son of hc of southern hemisphere of planet eupherile. He is very powerful and intelligent alien. He is a scientist. He has many more powers than shown in the show. A very good person by heart he is married to 1721.


1721, Varsha Ghotala: she is the daughter of hc of northern hemisphere of planet eupherile. She is a very intelligent alien. She is the most popular spaceship and weapon designer. She is also known for her kindness and politeness. She is also an expert in plan making and is now married to 9211.


87 sq., Sharad Ghotala: He is the younger brother of
9211. He is also very powerful. He falls in love with 1620. He always wanted 1721 as his
Sister in law(bhabhi).he is very romantic and very sensitive. He loves his bhaiya n bhabhi. He is a best friend of his brother


1620 : 1620 is the best friend of 1721. She is very good by nature. She is not much intelligent but powerful. She falls in love with 87 sq. She has the special power to extract energy from any living organism. She is a very emotional girl.


Anna D'Souza: Anna is a human sweet girl.she loves his big brother Ronnie and loves his wife Liza and respects them. She is beautiful and has no proud of it. She is half engaged to Manav.


Ronnie and Liza are same as in the show.
Bhatt family is also same.
Ojha family is also the same as in the show.



Manav: manav is also a human very kind hearted and very courageous army man. He loves Anna very much. He is now on a mission. He also loves his family very much and is a good person with values.



Hc 8110 and Hc 1610: they are the hcs of planet eupherile southern and northern hemisphere and fathers of 9211 and 1721 respectively. They love their children very much and can do anything for them.




So here ends the character sketches. Next chapter coming soon. I'm in 10th so has to study also but will only continue if u like this story...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Krish58

Hey it's mmm waiting for next part...


thanks but I know its not that good...thanks for reading...will update tmrw
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yupp... inspired from u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Vava meet was superb😳


thanks ...just like you...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I read it somewhere and got inspired from it...thanks u liked it
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Awwwieee itna mast character sketch diya. Ab 1620ko konsa roop diya I.e. Hum usse konse actress mein imagine kare...and ya jaldi update dena I m waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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New entry 1620... That too 87sq lover...
Very excited...
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Originally posted by: krishnasree001


yupp... inspired from u

Aww.. really...😳

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