ViTharv OS- Agar Tum Saath Ho

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Hey I am back with another OS on ViTharv!😳

Congratulations for 150 episodes!🥳 This OS is a celebration of ViTharv's love!❤️

I am sure after watching today's episode and where the story is heading everyone is heartbroken😭 So I hope this OS cheers up you🤗

This was the scene I was expecting after ViTharv's 5th vachan. Even after the emotional, passionate moment shared between these two, I was hoping for a heart to heart talk. This is my interpretation of the scene I wished to see.😳

ViTharv OS- Agar Tum Saath Ho

It was well past midnight, when Atharv and Vividha returned home. As he was about to walk towards the cattle shed, she held his hand. They shared an intense eye lock.

Vividha: "Yeh seedi lao waha se aur hamesha ki tara lago do mere balcony ke yahan..."

Atharv silently followed her orders. He had seen her lioness version earlier in the night. And later she had turned into a puddle of love when she soothed away his pain.

Atharv: "Ye lijiye...laga diya. Ab aap jayiye..."

Vividha gave him a glare...she held his hand and clasped.

Vividha: "Tum bhi mere saath mere kamre main aa rahe ho...aur mujhe is baat pe koi argument nai chahiye. Mera sherni avatar dekh chuke ho naa...ab chup chap ke chalo..." she warned him.

Atharv: "Lekin Guddi? Uska kya?..."

Vividha: "Tumhe main pagal lagti hoon?"

Atharv: "Haan...aapke pagalpan ke karan aapse pyar karne laga."

Vividha: "Seriously?..."

He smiled first, and she saw his smile reaching his eyes and making them sparkling. It had been two days since the revelation of his father. All she had seen was his anger, his angst, his anguish and his pain. She had been a bit relived after their confrontation and the passion that they shared. She had tried everything, tried being angry with him, being stern with him, being sweet with him. Nothing relived his hurt, his pain and his anguish apart from her hug. There was no need for words to be exchanged. All her needed was a comfort, a shoulder to cry on. And she was that shoulder, who would wash his pain away.

She climbed first and he followed her later. She made him lie on the mattress that was kept in her balcony. She lied down next to him, gently patting his forehead. She covered them with a purple, silky duvet. She looked in his eyes, trying to decipher what hurt him more, the revelation of his father whom he loathed or the fact that the two women, whom he loved dearly, wholeheartedly betrayed him.

Vividha: "Tum theek ho na?..." she asked pain evident in her voice.

Atharv: "Haan...bilkul..." he smiled slightly.

Vividha: "Jhoot bolna aata nai hai to kyun bolte ho? Wo bhi mere saamne?" she asked sternly.

Atharv: "I am really very sorry..." he said tears clouding his vision.

Vividha: "Koi baat nai..." she gently wiped his tears.

Atharv: "Maine aapko bahut takleef di na?"

Vividha: "Nahi...tum gussa the...tumhe takleef ho rahi thi...main samajh sakti hoon...par tumhe Sujata chachi ke bare main bhi sochna chahiye na...tumne saara gussa unpe nikal diya."

Atharv closed in his eyes in pain. Yes, he had been hurt, been betrayed but that did not give him the license to hurt his mother, to make her go through the grief. He had been way out of line behaving with his mother. He remembered all the moments when she protected him from everything. He was supposed to protect her now, and what did he do? Snap back at her, for a man he cared about none, for a man whom he considered nothing, for a man he could never give the status of a father.

He gently clasped Vividha's hand. She held it closer and entwined their fingers. She pecked his forehead.

Vividha: "Atharv, jab takleef tumhe hoti hai to tadapti main hoon...itni choti si baat kyun nai samajhte tum?"

He realised what he put this woman through. He silently apologised for his behaviour.

Vividha: "Atharv, tumhe apni zindagi ko maaf karna hoga, meri liye nahi, Sujata chachi ke liye nai, sirf apne liye."

Atharv: "Kaise maaf karoon ek aise insaan jisne meri maa ko takleef di?"

Vividha gently smiled at this idiot. He can be so intelligent sometimes and so dense sometimes.

Vividha: "Atharv, jaise main tumse behad pyaar karti hoon, waise hi Sujata chachi unke pati se karti hai...aur koi patni apni pati ke liye itni nafrat nai dekh sakti..."

Atharv was slowly realising what she was trying to say. She finally knocked some sense into his head, which was much needed since he was going stray with his behaviour.

Vividha: "Atharv, main aisa nai keh rahi hoon ki tum sab kuch bhool kar unhe apna lo, bas Sujata chachi se aise mat baat karo...unhe bahut dard hota hai...tumhaare gusse ke saamne wo bhi bechari chup rahi...Sujata chachi ne itne dukh dekhe hai, tumhe akele sambhala hai, unke saath itna rukha bartav? Kyun Atharv? Sirf ek galti ki itni badi sazaa?...promise me, tum kal unse maafi mangoge..."

Atharv: "I promise..."

Vividha: "Good boy..." she took his lips in a passionate kiss.

She rested her head on his chest, and snuggled close to feel his love, his presence, his warmth and his masculine cologne.

After a few glances at each other, he finally broke the silence.

Atharv: "I am sorry, maine aapko ab tak engagement ring...wo factory ka loan chuka doonga na, phir pakka laaonga..."

Vividha had tears by the end of his words. He had given her so much in life, yet he was feeling incomplete that he hadn't yet given her the engagement ring.

Vividha: "Atharv, tumne mujhe zindagi bhar bhi engagement ring nai di to chalegi...mujhe koi farak nai padega...aur ye to logon ko dikhane ke liye hai na...aur hamara rishta is sab se bahut aage jaa chuka hai..."

She saw him smile, and those eyes twinkling. They shared an intense eyelock.

Vividha: "Aur tumne mujhe bahut kuch diya hai Atharv, tumhara pyaar, tumhara saath, tumhari haasin, tumhari hasratein, tumhari muskurahat, tumhara dard, tumhara junoon! Is sab se jyaada mujhe aur kuch nai chahiye..."

Atharv: "Par mujhe aapse kuch chahiye...dengi?"

Vividha: "Bolo na..."

Atharv: "Aapka saath chahiye...aur kuch nai"

She nodded in affirmative. He laid all his thoughts to rest, knowing she will be with him to take care of him, to wash away his pain, to soothe his pain and to ultimately comfort him in his troubled times. She gently pulled over the blanket over him, and slept in his arms. Her fingers entwined with his, her one palm gently patting his chest.

Vividha: "Atharv main jaanti hoon ki hamara pyaar hamari kamzori hai, par main chahti hoon ki hamara pyaar hamari takat bane..."

She knew he heard this even in his sleep, as his lips gently touched her forehead. They snuggled closer to each other, to feel the love they had for each other and the promise they had given each other, to stay together in health and sickness, in sadness and happiness.

They had promised each other, a relation of equality, a relation of respect and a relation of love.

I hope I have lived upto the expectations of ViTharv fans!😳

Positive criticism welcome!😳

Love,

Mayu

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Shweta13 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mayu this is beautiful ! Vitharv and this scene is so much of love and I so wish If anytime I can see something like this in the show, it will be breath taking with their chemistry and intense emotions.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So heartwarming, Mayu!
Intense emotional dialogues are your forte and they make ViTharv's love so pure and beautiful!!

Thank u for entertaining us.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful OS Mayu!!
This heart-to-heart conversation is so beautifully written by you!!
Loved it!!!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mayu..my dearie, this was Superlative!!! Every single bit of this OS made me happy, my heart fill with warmth. Love you, girl!🤗

The best part of Vitharv has always been their conversations...the reason there have never been any misunderstanding between them is because they always have talked it out, be it any issue. This conversation, and the entire setting of it was perfect.

I don't understand how anyone can find the physical aspect of a couple like Vitharv bad in any way...if anything, they are the most natural couple I've ever seen. The kisses, the cuddling..it was all so natural, so Vitharv!
I could imagine the whole scene playing out in my head.❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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mayu,
this OS was much needed

i could imagine vividha and atharv rendering these words

as i said earlier to sunjiv it has become a habit to imagine his lines with our leads

u have written an intense, soulful write up and i like reading stories

and they aptly suited atharv and vividha

u know the beauty of their relationship is they can share and talk about anything and everything in the world including physical intimacy


their love is beyond physical and their commitment towards each other is not to be questioned


thks once again for lovely OS
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mayu this is beyond beautiful I loved how made emphasis not only on dialogue but also on surroundings! As it is equally important like a simple dialogue lovelY AND continue soon

Thank you [>:<]
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a beautiful os,Mayu
Loved their heart-to-heart conversation. And the title is just so apt to the os...Atharv didn't want anything else from Vividha... Just her love...I want to cry now...I hate the makers for they separated the soulmates..I understood all the dialogues... But it took time to figure out the seedi bit...I thought it meant straight and got confused. Then I guessed it means ladder...Thanks for the pm...means a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mayu when you are posting the next chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shweta13

Mayu this is beautiful ! Vitharv and this scene is so much of love and I so wish If anytime I can see something like this in the show, it will be breath taking with their chemistry and intense emotions.


Thankyou so much Shweta🤗

I was so expecting this scene. It would have been made more beautiful by ViTharv!❤️

I am expecting the Reunion of these two beautiful souls in such an emotional manner😳

Love,
Mayu

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