Rosid Ts: THAKDEER(the destiny) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
just SUPERB dear...ROSID as friends and always staying together, is really nice...beautiful love confession...
but where is Roli...i think it's veeru again who took away her
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hai devika after a long time u updated.i loved the update hope sid find his roli very soon waiting for next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am so so so sorry guys...it got habituated for me to come late and update late...and I seriously deserve ur scoldings...but what to do busy with college life...hospital...college...
But guys I will try to give updates regularly here after...as my cultural sare nearing...ok now I am updating the last update...and after this we will meet at dip de do yaar...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part:5

Sid stopped the car near some jail..

Where outside of it amar was waiting...

Amar: yar..we got permission for 15mins...and cell no 17...

Sid: that's enough for me...thank u so much...

Sid went inside...went near cell 17

Constable opened lock...

Sid went inside...the prisoner inside turned out to be veeru...

Veeru: siddhant...!!

Sid: Haa..mein hi hun...

Veeru: how are u..? And how is roli..?

Sid: don't Act smart veeru...common tell me where is roli...?

Veeru: stop kidding yaar...how would I know..? What...what happened to her...?

With Sid lost his coolness and started beating veeru...but veeru didn't react anything...after few mins...sid stopped beating and asked again...

Sid: now tell me where is my roli... otherwise I will kill you...

Veeru: siddhant...if u want to beat me beat...want to kill me..? Then kill me...but I want to clear you something...I am not the one veeru who was in before...even u know about it...afterall roli is the one who is behind my changed behavior...

Sid left his collar and came out of jail...

Amar: siddhant...what happened...? Did he tell something...? Is he the one behind it...?

Sid: no...no...NO...

Sid left that place and went back to his car...he just became lifeless person...and was just driving the car...

Again went back to thoughts about roli...

During the time of their marriage functions...all heard news that veeru killed someone due to which veeru was sentenced to hanging punishment...all were happy to hear about it...except roli...

On the day of final hearing...roli went to court as witness and to support veeru...

The murder was not done by veeru...because on the day of murder case veeru was with roli...as he kidnapped roli that time...

Inspite of all these roli went to court to tell all the truth...and finally veeru was proved to be innocent for that murder case...

After the court hearing...veeru came to Rosid and asked forgiveness from them...as always roli has kind heart due to which she forgave veeru as he is changed now...and also made Sid to forgive veeru...

Sid back from his thoughts...

He is totally confused now...and it's almost night...only one hour left for his marriage..still he was not able to find his roli...Sid didn't know what to do...where to go...

His hands started shivering...he is feeling a big lump in his throat...

Finally he reached home...where every one are waiting for him and his dulhan...

As he entered inside the house...all were asking him where is his roli...
Sid was not at all answering...he was just mummed...

Finally rajender came and told about everything...

And told that roli's parents are out of danger and they have been given sedatives and it takes 2hours for them to come out of that effect...and about roli...every one says that she is no more...

Sid:No...NO...pappa...how dare u say like that...nothing happened to her...kuch nahi hua usse...she is fine...oh bhilkul teik hai...

Everyone tried to console siddhant...

Rajender: siddhant...try to accept the truth...u were searching for her from yesterday till now...did u get any clue...? No naa..?

Sid: but that doesn't mean that she is ...no she is totally fine...and there she is...

Sid showed pointing towards the entrance...

Everyone looked at that direction...

Yes...at entrance roli was standing...

Roli: siddhant...I am so sorry...I know you are angry with me...else what...will any bride come this late..? That too on the marriage day..? No naa...! But see me..I came this late...please forgive me siddhant...mamma pappa might have told you guys that I will reach here by this morning...ooh kya hua na...kal jab mamma pappa Mumbai se nikhli...my mobile got broke...and I was to settle the ngo which mamma was taking care of few years back...so I stayed back...but couldn't inform you...as soon as work got over I started...but on the way car got punctured...I know u all might be tensed and...

That's it...Sid ran to roli and hugged her...and didn't let her speak further...

He started crying on her shoulder...

Roli was not able to understand anything...

Roli: siddhant...I am sorry...I should have informed you...please don't cry...

Rajender: let him cry beta...from yesterday he was swallowing his tears..let him get them out...

Roli: kya pappa...kya hua..?

Rajender explained her everything...

Now siddhant was fine...he was normal...but what about roli...?

Yes your guess is right...now she is crying...and she is blaming herself for this..all started consoling her...

Rajender got call from hospital that roli's parents gained conscious...

One week later Rosid marriage happened grandly...and they lived happily together after realizing that destiny plays important role in lives...

So guys...lets bless Rosid to stay happy forever..,
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very different dear. Really like it the suspense is very different dear. Waiting next dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
ha ha it was different we thought roli is kidnapped awesome ts dear loved it waiting for updates on ur ff
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Awesome ts love this suspense great job
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
great job dear...very unique with awesome twists n suspense... really it's very impressive...poor Sid was horribly tensed...
nice concept..Rosid in college,their friendship,love,marriage is Superb...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
wow dear superb luvd it waiting for ur ff updates

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