SuKor OS-Bas itna hai tumse kehna(Epilogue - pg 3)

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Chakor came to their room and told him, "I'm leaving mumbai this friday night"

This wasn't something he expected. He looked at her shocked.

"My sponsers want me to do an Ad there so that they can provide me the amount for training" she said going to bed to sleep. Suraj lied on the couch looking at her.


Main rahoon ya na rahoon

Tum mujh mein kahin baaki rehna

Mujhe neend aaye jo aakhri

Tum khwabon mein aate rehna


Little did she know that he had feelings for her.


The next morning, he promised himself that he ll express his feelings for her.

"You can Suraj" he patted himself. He went in search of her and found her making breakfast.

"Chakor" he called her and she looked at him.

"I have to tell u something" he said and she looked at him with curiousness.

"Woh.. actually.. actually.. " he stammered.

"Chakor didi" Imli called coming.

"I'm in kitchen Imli" she shouted back.

"So, tell me" Chakor asked Suraj.

"No, I actually wanted to ask you if you need any help" he said looking worried.

"I can manage" she said when Imli came to kitchen and dragged Chakor with her. Chakor kept looking at Suraj and went away with Imli.


Bas itna hai tumse kehna

Bas itna hai tumse kehna

Bas itna hai tumse kehna

Bas itna hai tumse kehna


"I love you Chakor. Wish I have courage to tell you directly." he said to himself and left the place.


He came home in the evening buying a ring for her. He thought to propose her somewhere outside.

"Can we go out for dinner?" he asked her and she nodded happily.

"I will get ready in few minutes" she said going to change. He took the ring out of his pockets and looked at it lovingly.


They reached the venue. It was a beautiful garden hotel decorated with flowers and hearts.

"Wow.. This place is so beautiful" Chakor said going in.

He was glad she liked it. They both sat on the table.

"So are we on a date?" she said with a smirk.

"Kind of" he said ruffling his hair.

Chakor was looking around and Suraj was about to take the ring when it started to drizzle. They both looked upwards and in no time the rain started to pour heavily. Suraj stood up and held Chakor's arms pulling her to the shelter but she didn't move. He looked towards her and found her enjoying the rain.

"Come, let's go there" he said pointing to a shelter.

"Let's be here, Suraj. This might be my last rain here" she said looking at him and he left her hands smiling.


Kisi roz baarish jo aaye

Samajh lena boondon mein main hoon

She hugged him taking him by surprise, breaking his dreams.

"I will miss you Suraj" she said hugging and he hugged back kissing her head.

"I will miss everything here. But sometimes we have leave something we love to move on in life, right?" she said and he stood frozen.

"I have to let her move on" he thought to himself.

(But she wanted him to stop her saying her not to move on.)


She moved away from him and he looked away. His tears got washed away by the rain. They both ordered dinner. Suraj didn't say a word.

"Are you alright?" she asked him.

"Yeah, I'm fine" he said eating.

"So, what is the need for sudden dinner plan?" she asked hoping he would say what he feels about her.

"I just want to fill happy memories in your life" he said.

"Every moment with you is a happy memory for me" both thought to themselves.

They finished their dinner and left silently.


Suraj couldn't sleep that night coz the next day she is leaving. A part of him wants to stop her while the other part want to let her go.. He saw her sleeping peacefully. The next day Chakor woke up and felt sad as she has to leave.


She expected him to stop but he didn't. She was sure that she will leave if he didn't stop her. She moved the curtains feeling the sunrays over her. A smile appeared on her face. She looked towards Suraj and found him looking at her.


Subah dhoop tumko sataaye

Samajh lena kirno mein main hoon


"You are awake so early?" she asked surprised.

"Bus yuhi" he said smiling. She smiled back and left.


Around afternoon, she came to her room to pack things. She was mad and angry at him for not trying to stop her.

"Atleast he could have asked me to stay if not confess his feelings" she said to herself.

"If I was a guy and he was girl, I would have never let him go" she said folding her clothes angrily.

"Duffer Suraj Rajvanshi" she said and he entered.

"Why are you scolding me?" he asked and she dropped her clothes shocked.

"Oh, actually, haan, you messed our cupboard and it was difficult for me to find things" she said patting herself for covering.

"Oh, Sorry about that" he said and she looked away with tears.


Everyone was gathered outside the haveli crying about missing Chakor. But her eyes searched for only one. He wasn't there. She felt bad as he didn't even care for her. Her car drove out of the haveli when Suraj drove in.

He got down and asked ImVaan for Chakor who told him that she left. He immediately rushed to his car and drove off to see her, stop her.


Chakor kept her luggage inside and came to talk to Bhuvan and Kasturi.

"Chakor " Suraj shouted and she looked back at him running towards her. He came near her and was breathing heavily. She smiled at him and hugged him forgetting everything. She was happy that he came to see her atlast. He smiled hugging her back. They both moved away after sometime.

"So?" she asked.

"I just wanted to give you these and " he said giving her the bouquet. She got it happily.

"And?" she asked with a hope of twinkle in her eyes.


Bas itna hai tumse kehna

Bas itna hai tumse kehna

Bas itna hai tumse kehna

Bas itna hai tumse kehna


"And I wanted to say I love you. I cannot live without you. Stay here with me" he said those words finally. She stood there with tears.

"Will u be mine forever?" he asked kneeling front of her forgetting the entire station looking at them.

"Yes" she nodded with tears and he placed the ring on her finger kissing her hand.

"Finally you said" she said hugging him.

"Thanks to you. If I didn't hear you scolding me, I could have never gathered the courage" he said grinning and she hit on his chest playfully.



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Awww😳 my babies fit perfectly into the song
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I didn't realized how much I missed your work🥺 until I read this🤗
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awwyyy...
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Hiii sandy!!
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Hi sandy. ..I was missing ur OS and ff..
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So Sweet cute lovely os. Both sukor loves each other but waiting for confess. Love the suraj sacrifies his love so chakor can achives her dream. And his sweetest confession. Love whole os so much. I know these os but can you gave us one more part as epilog please.
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Thanks Sandhya. It was so beautiful.
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Originally posted by: Immaturebookie

Awww😳 my babies fit perfectly into the song

Thank you sooo much for the pm👍🏼 darling.
I didn't realized how much I missed your work🥺 until I read this🤗
Even I wrote an OS yesterday😎 ya ya I know I'm shamelessly promoting myself
Please write more and more and more 👏.
Tata for now❤️


Hey dear, Thank you for loving it.. 😳 Just now commented on your OS. It was really awesome and cute.. 😳
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Originally posted by: Isha_201

awwyyy...
loved sukor and the song.
thanks for d PM.
each & every word made me feel abt sukor.


Thank you so loving it dear..😳
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Originally posted by: Radhika_r

Hiii sandy!!

welcome back!!

loved this oS!!!
it was super cutee!!

expecting more sandy


Thank you so much dear for liking it.. 😳

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