New OS : Dhoop Ke Makaan Sa... updated on page 5! - Page 8

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

Amreen... I have fallen in love with you n your OS😳

I have no words to tell you how well you write..

The small nok jhoks... The frank behaviour.. The comfort.. Were pleasure to read

I loved every bit of it.. Right from raghav giving his review about the guys in the pics..

Then Neha stirring some jealousy into Trisha😆

Their unspoken thoughts...

The cute flight scene... Raghav getting possessive about his 'boss' and asking to switch seats😳

And then the girl sleeping... Miss sleeping beauty being adorned😳

Loved every single bit... Thanks a ton girl..

Keep writing😳

Thank u ishu... Thank u very much 😊
My god... itni tareef 😳
I have no words to express my gratitude to u dear...
just that I love u too... loads 😳 ❤️
Thank you
Amreen..

I just don't have words to say. Awesome, fabulous, fantastic, amazing etc all are small for it. I love the this line "Raghav lemme guess..." and scanning her from top to bottom she continued in her chirpy voice, "Okay... so this beauty with brains looks like... she is your girlfriend or may be your fiancee... Right Raghav???". 😉 Trisha was totally shocked at the moment but was glad from inside. And last scene was inexpressible, It shows the feelings and care of raghav towards trisha. 😳

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

I just don't have words to say. Awesome, fabulous, fantastic, amazing etc all are small for it. I love the this line"Raghav lemme guess..." and scanning her from top to bottom she continued in her chirpy voice, "Okay... so this beauty with brains looks like... she is your girlfriend or may be your fiancee... Right Raghav???".😉Trisha was totally shocked at the moment but was glad from inside. And last scene was inexpressible, It shows the feelings and care of raghav towards trisha.😳

Thanks deepak bro!!
I am sorry for being so late but I have no words for what all u have said to me!! 😳
Thank u very much n do have a read of Kuch Khaas Hain on dis forum penned by me... hope u will like that one too 😊

Originally posted by: Desaitara1234

Awesome amreen

Thank u 😳

Awesome, loved it soo much