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Posted: 9 years ago
Shocking update!😲
They r trying to get her married!
Raman is not picking up his cell as well.
Waiting for the update.


Plz plz plz don't end the stories.😭
Plz don't stop writing.🥺
Hope u get well soon.🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shocking teaser.
Plz don't quit writing. Yhm is not related to ur stories. These stories r written by u not by them.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Author's note-many told me not to end my stories,so here I am to say that I will not give abrupt ending to anyone but yes will try to end as many as I can.coz I am facing severe trouble in updating as my hands r shivering too much and I couldn't update .so my updates will be less and will end my stories soon.till then enjoy the updates.

LAST SHOT

Toshiji- teri himmat kaise hui mujhe aunty bolne ki.main toh maa hoon naa.she said smiling making ishita sighed in relief.

Ishita- sorry aunty sorry mummy ji.

Toshiji- kaha naa no aunty ji or mummy ji,just maa.like Raman call.

Ishita smiled and said- OK maa.

Toshiji- kahan hai woh khote da puttar .

Ishita- yahin hai,rukiye main phone deti hoon.

Toshiji- no need,just tell him that ki ghar aa jaaye raat ko.meri kudi nu jyada pareshan na kare.saying so she hung the call leaving a confused ishita behind.

Raman- what,what maa said that u r making such faces.

Ishita-she said to tell u not to trouble her daughter.why u r troubling ur sister and moreover u never tell me that u have any sister.

Raman pulled her closer and said- buddhu she was telling about u that I shouldn't trouble her this daughter.tumhe beti bana liya aur puttar ko paraya kar diya.very bad maa.he said and start rolling the ball into chappati to make stuffed parantha.only to make ishita pleasantly surprised. He and his family how easily accepted her while those morons rejected her coz her father couldn't fulfill their demands. She was feeling herself as the most lucky girl in the world coz she got Raman in her life.a man who truly loves her,respect her and above all desire her to be in his life like his wife.she came to him and hugged him from back.she put her head on his back and said- I love u Raman.

Raman was surprised by her gesture,he turn and said- what happened jaan.why this all of a sudden.

Ishita- coz all of a sudden I realised how lucky I am to have u in my life.u know the feeling which I am feeling right now having u near me is so beautiful that I couldn't explain.

Raman smiled and said- it's my pleasure that I can make u feel special.coz u r special for me ,really.now let me concentrate warna saare parathe jal jayenge.

Ishita- aap hatiye,main banati hoon.

Raman- nahi main banaunga.I love to make u happy.

Ishita- aise rahenge toh duniya aapko joru ka gulam kahegi.

Raman- kehti hai toh kehne do.I don't care a bit.Bhai main toh bata deta hoon ki main full fledged joru ka gulam banne wala hoon.joru maiyya ki jai.he said smiling making her smile too.

They both prepare the food together and then had their meal together.both were happy having each other with them.

At ten toshiji called again and said Raman to come as it's getting late.if her neighbours will see ,they will think bad about ishita.

Raman hugged her tight and was about to go when ishita hugged him and said- kal bhi aayenge naa,phir se gayab toh nahin ho jayenge naa.she said almost crying.

Raman- no bachcha,I will surely come.and stop crying or else I will kiss u hard.phir tumhe koi nahi bacha payega mujhse.he said smiling.

Ishita- even I don't want to save myself from u.

Raman- oye hoye madrasan badi bold ho rahi hai.I think I should go before I loose my sati savitriness.

Ishita- kuch bhi raman.

Raman kissed her forehead and said- bye take care.saying so he was going when she again held his wrist and asked- aap pakka aaoge naa kal.

Raman- tujhe bharosha nahi,keh toh yahin ruk jaun.

Ishita- nahi maa ne aane ko kaha hai.aap jao.sambhal ke jaana.

Raman- uff madrasan itna khayal mat rakh,dil mein kuch hota hai.aur maa,not bad haan.I will be back soon.don't worry and yes don't u dare to cry warna main phir aa jaaunga tumhe dukhi karne.he said smiling and finally went .ishita ran to her balcony to wave him bye.he too smile and went giving a flying kiss to her.ishita smiled and went back to her bedroom ,soon she slept remembering their beautiful moments.

Now it was like a routine,everyday after there work Raman came to her place and they spent time together,make food together ,having meals together. Ishita was too happy having Raman in her life but sometimes she fear that what if her parents won't allow as he is Punjabi not tamilian.Raman always use to console her and never leave any chance to love and pamper her.

It was a week since they met,one day ishita was sleeping in morning when the door bell rang .she woke up and went to open the door only to see her parents standing there.

Ishita- amma appa,aap dono itni subah subah.aaiye naa.she said welcoming them in.

Amma- yes we got a call from soumya,mihika ko dekhne ladke wale aa rahe hai ,so we r here.waise we all want ur wedding first but kya kare ,mihika ki tay ho rahi hai.she said coming in.

Appa- chodo yeh sab baatein.ishu u take today's off and get ready we have to go to soumya's house.ladle wale 11 at sharp aayenge.

Ishita nodded saying OK and went to her room to get ready.ishita tried to call Raman but he didn't picked the phone.ishita got ready wearing a white salwar suit when amma came and give her a white kanjivaram with golden border.

Ishita- what's the need amma,woh miku ko dekhne aa rahe hai mujhe nahi.

Amma- still I want my girl to look beautiful. Get ready wearing this saree along with some jewelleries.

Ishita nodded and soon she get ready.after that they went to mihika's house.ishita went to meet mihika while appa amma were talking with soumya and checking the arrangements.

At sharp 11,a lady entered with a boy in black tux.ishita saw him and said- miku he is so handsome yaar.tu toh badi lucky nikli.

Mihika- not more then u.she said under her breathe .

Ishita- did u said something .

Mihika- no,just ki u r looking so beautiful today.jarur kisi ki nazarein lagegi aaj.

Ishita smiled hearing this and start thinking about Raman.soon ishita took mihika to them and the lady agreed for the marriage.

Toshiji- but I will agree for marriage on one condition only that u have to agree for marriage of ur elder daughter with my elder son.

Ishita heard this and her face turned pale.

Amma- ur son??what he did.

Toshiji- bahut badi company mein kaam karta hai,he earn well.aapki beti bahut khush rahegi.I have his pic,u can see if u want.

Ishita- sorry aunty ji,ho sakta hai aapke bete bahut achche ho.but I can't marry him.sorry aunty ji.saying so she went inside and tried calling Raman.but he didn't picked up.

Her parents come to her and said what's this ishu,why u r denying for marriage.ladka achcha hai,humne photo dekhi hai.achcha kamata hai.we want u to say yes for the marriage.

Ishita- but amma.

Amma- no but we r agreeing for the marriage and u too have to agree for marriage.

Appa- aur nahi toh kya,tumhari wajah se mihika ka bhi rishta nahi hoga.

Ishita- please amma.

Amma- no please ,we r going.saying so they went.ishita tried to call Raman again but he didn't pick the call.she throw the phone in sheer anger and said- aap kaam karte raho,someone will snatch ur ishita from u .saying so she hide her face in between her legs and start sobbing.she felt someone's hand on her shoulder.she raise her head only to see toshiji sitting beside her.

Toshiji- what happened puttar.

Ishita- aunty aapke bte bahut achche honge but I can't marry him.main kisi aur se pyaar karti hoon.

Toshiji- toh kya hua,mere bete se shaadi ho jayegi then u will start loving him.she said making her wear bangles.

Ishita- what do u mean by this.I love him only aur woh bhi mujhse pyaar karte hai.aap please shaadi ke liye mana kar dijiye.

Toshiji- shaadi toh tumhari mere hi bete se hogi.come with me.she said and took her outside.she make her sit and start the ceremony of roka.

Toshiji was about to cover her head with a heavy dupatta when ishita stand up and said- aren't u people getting.main kisi aur se pyaar karti hoon and will not marry anyone else.aap log samajh kyun nahi rahe.I will not marry anyone else other then Raman and that's all.saying so she was going inside when someone held her wrist.she turn to shrug the hold and saw him standing near to her.within wasting a second she engulf herself in his arms and start crying.while all other start laughing .

Ishita look around and then look at toshiji .

Toshiji- yahin mera beta hai,tera Raman.

Ishita look at Raman.he was just looking at her.

Ishita- aap sab ne milkar mujhe buddhu banaya naa.Raman aapne bhi.

Raman- sorry jaan but Maine kuch nahi kiya,this was all planned by ur saas and my saas along with this shaitan miku.

Ishita look at all with accusing eyes while miku hold her ears saying sorry akka.but we all were fed up hearing how much Bhai loves u,so we planned to confess ur love for bhai.isiliye mihir ,aunty ji,periamma,periappa sabne drama kiya.sorry akka.

Ishita- main baat nahi karungi kissi se.sab gande hai.she said snuggling more into Raman.

Raman-mujhse bhi nahi.

Ishita- nahi kissi se nahi.she said snuggling more into him.

Raman smiled and hugged her more while all went leaving them alone.

Raman- achcha baat nahi karogi.shaadi toh karogi naa.

Ishita- aap gande hai.mujhe kitna rulaya,I hate u.

Raman- I love u too.and I promise u I will pay for every year.meri rotudu madrasan. Kitna royi.

Ishita- they were asking me to marry someone else.

Raman- aise hi teri shaadi kisi se ho jaane dunga.tu meri hai aur hamesha meri hi rahegi.tujhe kissi aur ki hone nahi dunga.

Ishita- I love u Raman.she said snuggling into him as much as she can.

Raman- aww my baby,I love u too pagal.meri pagal madrasan.he laughed and hugged her tight never to let her go.

That's all,here I am ending it.hope u all like it.enjoy and do comment and hit like.will wait for it.
Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Updated last shot,enjoy .
Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
last part 😲 😭
nice convo b/w sas n bahu
toshi ji ne jb kha rat ko jldi aana meri kudi ko preshan na kre hooo toshi ji ki double meaning batein 😳 😆
ishu ko smajh hi ni aaya mummiji ki beti kon h 😳
aaye haye itna pyar joru ka gulam award bhi lene ko tyaar h
aww ja rha h raman n ishu is crying thinking wil he come tommorow or not
ishu ka bold avataar dont want to save herself from raman noty girl
ya raman go before u loose ur sati savitriness🤣
ishu sachchi mein tere man mein kuch aur h bta de mujhe main kisi ko ni btaun okkk😆
amma n mummiji r bst mils 😎
dono ne kya drama kiya
ishu bechari ka ro ro k bura hal ho gya
ishu hugged raman tight
awww ishu tu kitni cute h raman ko tight hug kr ri h or kh ri she will not talk to anyone even raman se bhi ni my cute cute ishu
diii khatam ho gyi update correction story bhi khatam hi gyi 😭
diii i'll missed it kitni achchi thi ye story
i'm confused should i ask u for epilogue or not after knowing ur problem
okkk it is upto u if u want to post epilogue or not
i'll respect ur decision

I M GOING TO MISS U N UR BEAUTIFUL STORIES SIOOO MUCHHH😔
Edited by lonelyyyy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww so cute
Ishu confessed her love for Raman to everyone
Thank you for this lovely story.. sorry to see it end
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Posted: 9 years ago
Love the update.
sab ne milke budhu bnaya ishita ko. She said main kisi se baat nhi karunge. Atlast dono ek ho gye.
Update epiloge soom
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely part...it's all elders plan wow...really love this part superb last part...ur writing r awesome I love ur all writing...get well soon di...
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow its awesme and beautiful loved it thnks for writting this and its requst if u could update its epilouge also if its possible for u.. Once again thnks for this story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice ending
ishitas parnets accepted raman
loved the way mrs.bhalla talked with ishita
they gave her surprise
poor ishita she cried so much thinking she is geeting merried with someone else
how cutely she said she will not talk with anyone
pls give prolouge
pls dont end all ur stories take mini break

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