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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

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Posted: 9 years ago

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

Hahahaa. Nervous?

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Pyaar humein kis mod pey le aaya... 😛. I too hate rains for the same reasons that Arnav does. Unlike Khushi of IPK, I wont wait for stars and glitter around me to prove I have fallen in love. I will check if I can tolerate rain just because my significant other likes rains 😉

I really really liked the story. It was on the arranged marriage and love theme which I am very fond of.

Apart from that you have made it very heart warming. Mera dil went all a-flutter and me to wants a cute love story like this abhi isi waqt! I want such an Arnav who would bear the rains for me, gift me an exhibition and yes of course, kiss me senseless 😳😆

Btw, it is not every day we get to read of an Arnav who has insecurities. So that was a great angle to the otherwise sweet love story. And come on izhaar karlo already! Khushi, perfection itself according to Arnav has already expressed her feelings. He shouldnt take too long. Bas!

Keep writing 😊

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Nivedita137

@Nivedita137

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

Hey Avanti, this was really nice. :)

Arnav who's isn't comfortable in his own skin is a first I guess. But a little happiness took care of that, right?

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 42

Posted: 9 years ago

Wow that was simply mesmerising story.

Loved it so much.

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 9 years ago

There is beauty in simplicity and to learn to love the mundane everyday things in life and take pleasure in them is what makes for a love that endures.

Such a lovely OS, like a gentle, soothing summer breeze.

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

Why were you ever unsure of posting this?!

It is simple and very nice. The way you've beautifully written the story of their arranged marriage and falling in love after marriage is very touching. I really liked what he told her when they first met - to make a decision based only on what she wanted and her response when he had been unsure whether to believe she had actually agreed. Both of them fell in love wholeheartedly and unconditionally. I mean, neither had any great expectations from each other and learned to love each other for what they really were by caring for the other's interest and through the little things in life and that was the mos beautiful part of this OS.

He has shown her in actions that he loves her, hope he doesn't delay anymore and confesses his love on her birthday. That would be the best gift for her ❤️

This was different too. Reading about an ordinary, average looking, not-so-confident Arnav Singh Raizada is new (though difficult to imagine 😛).

And I love rains. Rain and romance and love go hand in hand.

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shruti

@shruti46

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

I so love these arranged marriage based O.S's/stories.
Here it has realistic feeling too.like they are normal couple .
No ice cream in rain ..umm thet can have corn .Better option 😆

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Zania

@zaniax

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

Awww...tht was beautiful! ❤️

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

OH MY GOD...

AVANTI...I want a banner...

This was absolutely amazing...where should I start from...what a great scene you painted, I could almost hear the rain, see Khushi enjoying herself and Arnav sitting and trying to working but mainly focussing on her...the sound of her payals...her infectious smile and her facial expressions when she made that request to go for a drive...to him knowing and sensing her disappointment...it was all wonderful...

I loved the theme of arranged marriages and this was so different...an insecure Arnav...such a contrast...just goes to show that even though he had money and a great career...he needed more...and with this story, their relationship that develops in to love one sees hope ...

I am like Arnav too by the way I don't like rains for the same reasons I don't mind if I just need to sit at home but to actually go out for a drive,...no way...

I like how she realised what was important and how she judged him as a life partner a man who is genuinely interested in you will ask you what you want...and I liked how she took her decision...it was also interesting to read about his lack of confidence and then his surprise when he found out she said yes...

Such a sweet story...the way their relationship grows, her saying Muskan's eyes look like him...him being honest about his health...them consummating their marriage after they were comfortable and ready...her verbalising her feelings and him not yet able to ...and even though he had not it was like she knows he does...I got that feelIing...given she was happy and content...and had no complains...and I liked that he knew that he should said it and that he loved her and given his insecurities it was tough but he was making an effort...the whole art exhibition planning and then his confession...now I want to read that too...the night of her birthday and hid confession and her reaction...

I loved how with her smile...his world was perfect...truly loved this story...please do write more...it was perfect...

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#10

Firstly I would like to congratulate you on your debut as a writer. I believe everyone has stories stored in their mind. But to put those into words and share them is a big leap. That you took it is commendable (I shall pat myself on the back too, for that😉)

Coming to the OS, I liked it for its simplicity. Arranged marriages are a norm in India; even so every arranged marriage is different. The dynamics of the marriage are defined after the husband and wife are better acquainted with each other, and there's a sort of thrill in the experience that comes with it. That aspect was very well depicted through this OS.

You have made a fine start and I hope this is the start to many more stories from you.😊

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