~Revenge~ Thread-6 (THREAD CLOSED)

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#691

Oye..update na sweety...
Its more than 20 pages...

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Neetu

@NSKay

Rocker

+ 11

Posted: 9 years ago

#692

Teaser

"I want an answer Jalal!" She exclaimed with finality in her tone...
"No! I don't! Happy now?" he replied, pearls brimming at the verge of completion of formation of his eyes, ready to roll down his rough cheeks any moment... But his self can't gather the courage to turn around and neglect the strong sense of plea brimming from those chocolate brown orbs...

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He was shocked! No, an understatement... He was bowled, tongue tied and... Yeah speechless!! Unbelievable!!

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He pouted cutely and watched the two five rupee coins in his hand, this dadi gave him every morning to buy chocolates... From two days he'd saved them to give his sister on this festival, suppressing the urge to buy and eat his favorite candies...

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These sentences, accusations to be more precise are reverberating in his brains, racking his soul up, churning his heart with the heaviness they held...
Gazing into oblivion for sometime, then shuffling hurtful thoughts numbed his brains and he, very determinedly took an solid decision...

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Ok! This the teaser...
So people enjoy it... Will update today itself...
Happy Birthday to Lord Krishna😆
Happy Janmashtmi😃

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priyanka

@Priyankaakdha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#693

Confusing teaser ...
I think u will show flashback scenes of childhood ..

Dont tell me jalal will take any decision in haste ...

What about jodha ...

Dimag khrab kr dala h jalal k mood swings ne ..

Update soon
Waiting

Edited by Priyankaakdha - 9 years ago

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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#694

Kuch samajh nhi aaya, except for Jodha n Sujamal's childhood memories!!! 😒

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#695

Thanks for teaser re...
Sweety its confusing re..
Itna toh samaj main aaya ki tu ja ka flasback dikha rahi thi...

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#696

Teasing teaser... waiting for more.

Update soon!!

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#697

confusing and brain twisting teaser...😆 update soon...😃

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Neetu

@NSKay

Rocker

+ 11

Posted: 9 years ago

#698

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal
Fantabulous update neetu
Poor jo!! I think she's confused...too many emotions are dancing in her mind!
Thanku for pm
continue soon

Thank you kaju di😃