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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

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-Anku-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Were you pretending not to imagine Raman's reaction? 😲 Because seriously, this was a stroke of genius. This was just like Raman playing out in front of my eyes. I could imagine him fumbling and going nuts, a scene from YHM similar to it totally flashed in front of me 😳

The dialogue leading up to it was hilarious 😆 I wish I could quote them, but it's safe to say that I've loved every bit of it. Do you sit in Raman's head, OR better talk with KP? Those one liners are SO HIM 🤣 The whole him going crazy mental asylum guys not knowing that the real help needed was for her, her brains being in her knees.. ACEEE 👏

His shock was so relatable 😆 And the way you've written it. Did you even have a writers block? THAT WAS AMAZING. And he cried. I swear I could imagine him getting overwhelmed. Raman and not get emotional? Impossible 😛

And then he did gloat, not minding to give others a lesson or two about what he masters in 🤣 Only for Ishita to smartly give all responsibility of telling everyone on him. I think he now knows why Ishita was so out of her mind.

There's everything in this story... in your descriptions one gets a picture of just how wonderful and adorable IshRa's relation is (also just how intense and passionate 😳) And their nok jhok just adds to the charm... you write is so well. You should actually script some scenes for the show.

You mastered in emotions, and intensity before... but now to comedy, light hearted and spoofs you've done it all and HOW..

I can't wait for the next part... So curious to see how Raman or Ishita tell the family and how they all react 😆

Will I sound nuts if I say this is your best work? I am not buttering you, but you do get better with every part you write 😆

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

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🤣 🤣🤣

This is by far the funniest and the best fic I have read on this forum and this update has to be the reason for it.

I love how you have written the monologues and the to and fro between IshRa and how eventually Biwi outsmarted Puttar into declaring the results of his accomplisment to one and all 🤣

Cant wait for the rest of this Nids hope you update soon

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-K.13-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Adorable update! Perfect mix of emotions & wit!

Thanks for a lovely break from real life with this story! ❤️

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apoo91

@apoo91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Superb!!!
Perfect break from the serial.. Ishra are such an adorable couple.. Loved their nok jhok, including their thoughts

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Raina

@Raina1234

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Haaayeee

IshRa banter

Can't wait for the next part already.

Please update soon.

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Balasri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Awe this was sooo cute yaar puttar was shocked and den he was soo happy and gng on blabering hahaha I so loved his actions re such a cutie he is and he scolded ishita for thinking negatively abt this and tried to make her understand dat this was their dream and all Awww sooo cute he was I jst loved it soo much

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Ashu344

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Sooo funny I am still laughing poor Raman tips dene tha na abb khud kabhi fuse trip ho Gaya plz update this one soon

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

This is amazing nidoo..
Witty raman is fun to watch...
Loved their bickering...n raman's reaction..
He ws speechless then going mad..
Scolded her..its THEIR baby..
Now RKB has to tell everyone..aahhha
Waiting for next