'DARAMIYAN' - A SHRAMAN OS - Page 4

wow awesome...very well written plz continue😊

Wohooo

Hello!

Originally posted by: TheTVAficionado

Hello!

I got around to reading the first story!

So, so good :D

You've perfectly captured Shravan's emotions. Why he feels the way he feels about Suman, his distrust of women, his pain at her betrayal. You were bang on in characterizing Shravan!

I loved reading this one. :')

Also, my fav line - Yes, there was something between them. Some unfinished business. ❤️

Wow amazing beautiful Mandy..I have read so many of your OSs/SSs in one go & I must say I loved them all!

Thank you so much.

These are what I have read so far & hope to read more of your works in the future! Keep up the wonderful work!!

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4618057

"DO YOU THINK I'M SEXY?"-THE SEQUEL-"THIS KISS"PG8

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4624615

"IS THIS LOVE? " A SHARMAN TWO SHOT - COMPLETED

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4587734

"DARAMIYAN" - A SHRAMAN OS

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4589047

"THE DISTANCE" - A SHRAMAN OS

Lots of Love,

Spandana

Mandy, it's raining in my part of the world and enjoyed reading it.

You've captured the early days Shravan so well.This gives an insight into his struggle to be cynical & get even with Sumo for the hurt she had heaped on him innocently.👏

Are you tracing their journey thr' different OS' ?

Hope you'll find the time to keep writing.