Imaginary Episode #11

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello EDKVians..aka shramanians.🤗

hope you remember its imaginary episode tonight ..

So lets start our imaginary episode #11 .

this episode will be based ob yesterday precap i.e, friday precap based..

So here is the glimpse of the precap :

Aditya blows into suman's eye as something was irritating her eye..shravan comes there and sees them together like that..

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Try to include the precap in the episode...

So its already 10 pm IST.

note :

1) this episode will end by 11 pm IST.

2) if you put a res for writing episode, then you will have only 5 min to write (unres) your part of story after previous res is unresed by other writer.

pps : puba has already written the beginning so first post will done by puba..after that you all have to continue

Edited by zindgidilse - 9 years ago

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Puja Bagchi

@puba

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Posted: 9 years ago

After witnessing admiman scene...Shravan walked out of the kitchen and then went to the living room...then Suman entered the hall to tell Mamiji that kheer for the brahmins was ready!

Shravan: Sumo I have to discuss something about the wedding hall arrangements...could I please talk to you?? In your room...it's too noisy here.

Sumo: Chalo.

They both enter Suman's room, he goes and sits on her bed and motions her to do the same. She obliges!

Sumo: Batao kya batana hai.

Shravan: I hope I am not disturbing you because you seemed very preoccupied with your coffee date cum kitchen mate!

Sumo: Shravan you are talking rubbish...I don't think you have anything to say.

Shravan: How many times have I told you that I wanted to meet you for a coffee because I had something important to tell you!!

Sumo: And how many times have I told you that I am not interested in that conversation?? I am leaving.

Saying this she got up to leave...but Shravan tugged at her hands and Sumo was back on the bed. Shravan slowly inched towards her...he pushed aside the strands of hair partially blocking her eyes and slid his hands slowly around her waist and pulled her towards him. Sumo sat still...his loving gaze not allowing her to flinch...her eyes looked in to his...and then came the question again...Sumo tum sunna nahi chahogi mein tumhe kya batane wale tha...his voice was teeming with depth, honesty and longing...in all this...Sumo could not dare to say no...as she said a feeble yes...a teardrop escaped her eyes...she knew the consequence of this yes! As the teardrop was traversing her cheeks...she closed her eyes...and she felt his lips on her.

Edited by puba - 9 years ago

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res
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It wasnt a passionate kiss. It was a way to tell her how much he had missed her, how much he craved for her company, how much he hated the sight of adi and sumo together.
"Sumo"
"Hmm"
"That day I wanted to tell you..." he couldnt complete his sentence as that idiot interrupted them.
"Arey sumo tum yha ho nihe mamiji kabse tumhara wait kar rhi hai. "Adi said looking at sumo.
As if shravan was invisible to him.
"Ahh..ahhmm" shravan cleared his throat
"Oh hi bro!! Sorry didnt notice you." He said with a smile which made him look more stupid.
He wanted to strangle him but didnt want to face a furious sumo so he returned the smile.
Sumo gave him an apologetic smile and left with adi.
This man was driving him insane.
"Iska jaldi se jaldi kuch karna pdega. Main ab ise aur sumo ke charo taraf mandarate ni dekh sakta." He muttered to himself.

Edited by sapphire3 - 9 years ago

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res

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Unress

"Sumo chale"? Asked Aditya

And Shravan's eyes immediately made it to her eyes,requesting her to not go and stay back.

"Sumo... agar tumhe koi important kaam hai inke saath toh I have no problem,I can goo"Aditya said realizing that there was something really important and serious as he saw the way both stared at each other with passion and pain.

Sumo came out of her trance and said smiling,"Haan Chalo..ummm..we were just talking about the wedding,nothing important"

Without giving a glance to Shravan she walked with a smiling Aditya leaving a broken Shravan behind..once again.

Edited by SleepyPsycho - 9 years ago

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Shivangee

@ShiViGot7NCTzen

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res
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Unres
Shravan leave Tiwari Killa Immediately Only To Return back There In Night,When Aditya is there at his place Dreaming About Sumo.

He Came in Sumo's Room only to Find The Girl was Lost in thoughts with Smile on her Face,She didn't notice he came there.
He Shut The Door behind.
No interruption This time.
He move towards Her Slowly
Sumo..
She didn't reply him back.
So he give peck on her cheek & She immediately come out From her bubble.

Sumo Plz Marry Me,He said Helplessly;with Hope in His Eyes.

Shravan I can't.

But this time He was determined To Make her say Yes.

Edited by .shivi396 - 9 years ago

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potterginny

@potterginny

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Posted: 9 years ago

Unressed.

"Shravan, I can't."
Okay, that hurt. A lot. He knew that she didn't mean it. But it still stung. He again felt rejected. Though the evidence said he wasn't. And this time he wasn't going to ignore these indications and give up.
He was going to fight back for his love.

"Achha toh sirf ek baat ka dilse sacha jawaab do, main tumhe is ke baad kabhi pareshan nahi karunga."

The intensity and the fervor behind those words sealed her brains. Yet she managed to feeble out. "Haan puchho. Dungi jawaab. Dilse."

"Kya tum mujhse pyaar karti ho?"

Edited by potterginny - 9 years ago

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Ameesha

@Ammiey

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Posted: 9 years ago

Unresed

"Shr... Shravan... Mai... Ye.. " she was stammering

It was a great blow for her and she was totally unware of it coming ... Wait or rather she somewhat knew it will come some day but this soon??!! She had no idea

"Mai ye kuch nai sumo seedha seedha dil se javaab aur SACH!!!! Please! " he said while she noticed the pleading feeling and the confused pain in his eyes...

She immediately, not able to bear the pain , looked down

"Nahi" was what a faint and feeble voice left her mouth almost whispering as if she wanted only she can hear and no one else this lie!!

"Sumo meri aakho mein dekh k bolo!! " he said determination evident in his voice and he made her face him

She looked at him teary eyed and nodded in a no

Shravan knew what he has to do and quickly grabbed har hand before placing it on top of his head

"Ab bolo sumo sach sach meri kasam kha kr kya tum sach mein mujhse pyaar nai krti?? " he threw intence daggers through his eyes ... Suman shocked by his action kept staring him with wide eyes... "Bolo sumo!!! " he jerked her still keeping her hand on his head

Realizing what he is compelling her to do she immediately snatched her hand away and shouted in a low tone so that no one else can come interrogating

"Shravan please jao yahan se please i beg u leave me alone!! " she folding hands and crying "thhik hai... Jaa rha hoon mujhe mera javaab mil gya... " he said with moist eyes and a small smile on his face while she confusingly stared at his gently smiling face..

Edited by Ammiey - 9 years ago

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

Unressed my part.
Puja your writeup is outstanding 👏
Amazing start!!!
@ yagneshri you are back 🤗
Sorry for the typos guys

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

Unressed.

Puja and Priyam Di you both rocked it 🤗

The kiss was ummm😳

Mindblowing.

I wanted to write more but I feel that it was a point at which I should have left.

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Ameesha

@Ammiey

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sapphire3
Unressed my part.
Puja your writeup is outstanding 👏
Amazing start!!!
@ yagneshri you are back 🤗
Sorry for the typos guys

Priyam di how u unres your part between the other replies in previous pages???

Btw your part was really awesome n so was mitali di's n puja did very well👏

Edited by Ammiey - 9 years ago