Coming Home : One Shot - Page 2

Originally posted by: abhiya_12

Nikki only one thing 👏
This was the best thing read about the brothers till now.
Don't know why but I see this coming in future or maybe am wrong too
Please write some more
-Rev

Originally posted by: iqra.rudra

Woaahhh this just blew me away well done 👏

Originally posted by: suhaaana

beautiful
loved it

Originally posted by: dhruvika1991

beautifully written i really liked the way you described the leaving of a one brother and shivaay turning cold after anika and the Om's coming home and explaining i really like the way Om snaps and puled the trigger their fight was OMG and the Rudra coming between and his comment was hillarious are we playing bull fighting then bvoth brothers ganged up on him...

I liked the way you described jhanvi's appearence i was confuse first then when you describe her drinking i was awiie you stole my heart seeing her smile i feel like i should cry or laugh both...

Jhanvi is the character i sympathies the most...

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

Wow amazing dear...you wrote so well👏 I really loved it especially the moment rudra entered ...awesome, do write more😛

Originally posted by: crushcrushed

This was marvellous 👏 *claps* best thing i have read about the brother's till now. You explained everything so perfectly 👏 dilemma of shivaay, pain of omkara and of course our cute little binding glue rudra 😳 very well written please write more 😊

Originally posted by: Priya.

OMG this is just so amazingly written...*hugs*

Please do write more

Originally posted by: --peehu--

Amazing piece

Somewhere down the future I think this is bound to happen

Loved the bond you described with the brothers

Loved it :)