Aaoge jab tum...-AM FanFic!(Ch.12,Pg.28)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hello every1..

I'm here with my first ever ''JUST'' AM Fanfic!

I'm tryin sumthin different,this tym..Plz,even if the Fanfic turns out to b horrible,dont beat me up with ur dandas...😆...

This FF is called ''Aaoge jab tum...''

I'll post the first part soon.....😃

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Index:

Part:1,Page:1.

Part:2,Page:3.

Part:3,Page:4.

Part:4,Page:7.

Part:5,Page:8.(Updated).

Part:6,Page:11.

Part:7,Page:13.

Part:8,Page:16.

Part:9,Page:18.

Part:10,Page:20.

Part:11,Page:22.

Part:12,Pge:28.

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Note:

Ppl,i've updated the 5th part,plz read it again...if u havent read the updated 1.....😳

Edited by ~*~A~*~ - 17 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-1

Maithilli is sittin on the bed,as ''Adi's'' bride!Adi enters the room,with a sweet smile on his face and a special feeling for Maithilli,in his heart.He sits near Maithili....

Adi:Maithilli,main ne kabhi nahin socha tha ke mein tum se yeh kahoonga...Maithilli,I love u!!(and hugs her)..

Maithili doesnt say a word...

Adi:Maithili,tum kuch...

Maithilli:Adi,mein Pranay se pyaar karti hoon....

Adi is shocked to hear this...his heart is unable to belive this..

Adi:Par yeh shadi..

Maithilli:Adi,yeh shaadi maine sirf Parvati mama ki wajah se ki hai..mein tumse pyaar nahin karti..aur main nahin jaanti ke tum meri dosti ko mera pyaar kaise samajh bethe...

Adi:Par Maithilli tum to Pranay se nafrat karti thi...

Maithilli:Karti thi..lekin kab woh nafrat pyaar mein badal gaye,pata i nahin chala..

Adi:(holds her face in his hands):Mere liye tumhari nafrat ek din pyaar mein badal jayegi Maithilli..tum hamari shaadi ko ek mauqa to do...

Maithilli(gets up from the bed):Plz,Adi..

Adi:Theek hai..jaisa tum chahti ho,waisa hi hoga...

Maithilli looks at him....

Adi leaves the room...

~*~Part-1 ends~*~

Edited by ~*~A~*~ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey great part...just one question are the already married or does the wedding still have to take place !?! 😕 😕 lol...continue

*Armaan* 😳

Edited by *Armaan* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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^^Thnx dear,and they're already married.... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great 👏 , continue asap please (and make the parts longer because can't wait anymore 😉 )
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Posted: 18 years ago
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^^Thnx dear...will try to write longer parts...... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow im soooo glad your writting a ff dear, and that too on AM! it was a very catchy first part! not what i was expecting, but i really am excited for more! please do continue!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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^^Thnx,dear... 😳 ...i hope i wont disappoint u ,next tym.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ohhh exiting 😃 ...mets duzn't luv adi 😡 ..how is tht possible...he's too cute 😳 ..lol..i had a question tho...is this like afta the whole rape track n all?...but really great start..do continue soon 😊
Edited by mbenjamin - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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^^Thnx dear...and there's no rape track and all! 😃

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