IshVeer FF: La Douleur Exquise | Chapter 5 (Page 13) - Page 11

I am really liking this FF. Poor Ranveer, don't have both the ladies in his life. I liked him playing the Piano, how much he misses her. Can't wait to read more...thanks so much for the PM.

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Amba is no more! 😲

I was thinking of whether she was with Kailash in the village while the last update. But here the mystery gets solved.

And this >>> ❤️

"I don't have anything to lose," he always said, and that was supposed to be the only answer Puneet could stubbornly extract from his insanely stubborn boss.

Hey, Effulgent! Thank you.

Ah, yes. We decided to kill her for the obvious reasons. ;)

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Oh, I need to tell you two, Puneet is such a wonderful character. Beautifully scripted!

Thank you so much. Puneet is a character pleasure to write, too. Love the boy! 😛 😛

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

hey hi dear.
coming to the review well familiar lines😉
that sentences of sleep and tiredness was the best one in this whole chapter apart from the connection piano music and the pain in those notes.
Not even a single day is spared from his thoughts and like we all wanted that ishani should miss him terribly thats one thing is getting more than fulfilled.
But her pain is something to worry about because she wants to leave his presence in her life but his memories is attached to her every presence now. And how many times is she going to collapse now.😕
Really you warned of sadism and its getting more and more day by day.
Puneet poor boy is caught up big time with his boss leaving a mansion and now living on his toes with his boss and mysteries attached to his work and tours is riling him up further more. That one line from his boss of encouragement worked as a red bull for him.
RV seriously know how to do his work.
They are already in lonavala searching some files and he can't understand why his boss is so obssesed with every possession of HP as he knows very well that he is not going to get any answer from his boss. i just wanted to say that piano notes are really amazing and the way he plays with them pouring his feelings into it is something that makes it too much connected to his pain.
Ranveer and liquor are soulmates always together at the end.
Kailash is back to his son and was one among the two mysterious person at the building who was the other one they are mentioning to? well i know my queries will be solved eventually but still.
in last update i was this close to asking where is amba as kailash was all alone but thought of asking in next update and then came the bomb she is no more.( poor earth spared of loud speaker)
But there is a tragedy attached to her death and it is something related to them making him all the more guilty thats why kailash was happy as a driver because he had his companion with him.
Good kamba fans will protest for this untimely separation
but seriously thats something interesting now its getting all the more entangled.
thnx for pm
waiting for next

Hey, dv!

Haha. Coming to the review... yeah! Thank you so much! Tiredness and sleep one came from Physics. ⭐️ ⭐️

I agree. The show Ishani shutting him out of her thoughts completely annoyed me about her! After all that happened to them, how could she ever do that? Her pain... sighs. True. She's suffering a lot and so much that no one can understand. But still...

Haha. I'm glad you're tasting the sadism. We wanted that. xD

Puneet... Poor, poor Puneet! He must be going through so much and has absolutely no idea where to go and why! But all he can do is follow his boss since he knows his boss is a good man (Errr... no fangirling of Elvish! 😛 😛 ).

Thank you so much, dv! Piano scene was my favorite to write in this chapter as well (apart from the drunk Ranveer of course! 😳 😳). Liquor and Ranveer are soulmates. Perfect word for them! When Ranveer has no one, his BFF helps him out. 😛

The other man, you'll get to know of him soon. Just can't reveal the identity yet. :)

RE: "poor earth spared of loud speaker..." I love you!

True, that is another reason we had to kill Amba (I sound like a murderer with some gruesome thoughts, don't I? xD). God, don't talk about KamBa fans please! 😭 😭 Hehe.

Thank you so much, dv! And you are welcome! 😊

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Wee!

Sorry, I will not be able to give a longer review. But a short comment, yes! This is worth that!

So Amba's no more (A big shock for me.) And Ranveer's searching for the property files, playing the piano. Total bliss <33 And Kailash did see that! Gosh! Make RV meet IP soon. Can't wait!

Hi, Arushi! Thank you so much. And it's alright. Amba no more, a shock? I thought that'd be a good news. Uh, not as a fan of Ranveer's, though, but we all wished it only. No worries then. xD

Ishani will meet RV too. But when the right time comes. ;)

Thank you again! :)

Originally posted by: matsh1

Hello! I've been reading this story for a while now. It's something unique and would love to read more! This was good too! Really good! All the best both of you '

Hi, matsh1! Welcome to thread and the forum too. And thank you so much for your lovely words.

Looking forward to see you here more often. :)

Originally posted by: robal

I am really liking this FF. Poor Ranveer, don't have both the ladies in his life. I liked him playing the Piano, how much he misses her. Can't wait to read more...thanks so much for the PM.

HI, robal! Thanks a lot, and I'm glad to know you're liking the FF. :) And yes, him playing the piano was something about an old memory related to his love. He does miss her a lot... or say he never forgot her to do that.

Will try updating the chapter soon. Thank you again!