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Iqra

@iQraaa

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: -Lachu-

currently I am reading only...started with PJO and HP AUs😆...now I read crime...never had the guts to write 😆

😆😆 its a very good place actually! 😉 i read Fanfics and Fantasies mostly and recently i am in to suspense and thrill! 😃 i wrote one SS, a Vampirish FF and a medieval one all for One direction ! but never completed them OMG i am a big procrastinator when it comes to writing. 😆

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

I liked it... Be it dark darker darkest whateverrr... But it was Bew for TPK...
But it was Balwinder... I was thinking its Dhruv... Bcz he looks like that ;)
Your writing is marvellous

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Karaali

@Karaali

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: sukanksha
I liked it... Be it dark darker darkest whateverrr... But it was Bew for TPK...
But it was Balwinder... I was thinking its Dhruv... Bcz he looks like that ;)
Your writing is marvellous

Thanks for reading and the compliment! Glad you liked it.

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Bauji...
Here I was thinking about Dhruv.
The title is apt to OS.
Poor Bihaan, what a crude way to kill someone.

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Its ballu😲 i was thinking him to be dhruv😆

I am commenting here to bring this OS on the main page.. people need to read this, those who have missed it..

Its brilliant.. I enjoyed it becoz its so different.. one need guts to write such an OS.. ur taste is so different.. and ur writing is different and exceptional too

Its a piece of excellence.. keep up ur great work👏👏

Edited by Barbie_KK9629 - 9 years ago

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Karaali

@Karaali

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629
Its ballu😲 i was thinking him to be dhruv😆
I am commenting here to bring this OS on the main page.. people need to read this, those who have missed it..
Its brilliant.. I enjoyed it becoz its so different.. one need guts to write such an OS.. ur taste is so different.. and ur writing is different and exceptional too
Its a piece of excellence.. keep up ur great work👏👏

Thanks! I put plenty of warnings upfront make sure that some gentle soul did not get exposed to such darkness. 😆😆

Readers were split - between Dhruv and Bauji 😊

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@.Preetii.

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

It was cruel, dark, really really dark. And made me think "Oh!! hell...whats this." But I liked it.😆 Not that I like such kind of killing and violence, but this is a really fine piece of writing.👏

But taking away the head with him was kind of...you know...🤢 but these things do happen...sometimes people fall to such extent..to being an obsessive, psycho kind of person.

It was so cruel.

Btw can we get an OS where thapki is killed?😆 or maybe thapki killing Bihaan?😆

If u have any such thing in mind, plz post it soon. If u dont want to post it here then plz PM me, i will like to read that.😆

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Karaali

@Karaali

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Spreeti98
It was cruel, dark, really really dark. And made me think "Oh!! hell...whats this." But I liked it.😆 Not that I like such kind of killing and violence, but this is a really fine piece of writing.👏
But taking away the head with him was kind of...you know...🤢but these things do happen...sometimes people fall to such extent..to being an obsessive, psycho kind of person.
It was so cruel.

Btw can we get an OS where thapki is killed?😆or maybe thapki killing Bihaan?😆
If u have any such thing in mind, plz post it soon. If u dont want to post it here then plz PM me, i will like to read that.😆

I am glad you liked it . Thanks for reading. I know it is little dark 😆

Please read the haunting for Thapki and let me know! 😉