NiBir SS- Love, Obsession and Crime (Chapter 8 on Page 41, complete) - Page 33

Originally posted by: mika17

Awesome story from beginning to end

Great job

Thanks Mika😃

amazing... fabulous concept... wonderful description of all characters... twins sister... one love... crime scene... <3

Originally posted by: Spruha1

amazing... fabulous concept... wonderful description of all characters... twins sister... one love... crime scene... <3

Thanks Spruha😃

Superb yaar just luved it...

Originally posted by: naucfan

Superb yaar just luved it...

Thanks Anu😃

Awesome update 😊
Navya is out😆
Awesome shayari

Originally posted by: Nibirlove_amu

Awesome update 😊
Navya is out😆
Awesome shayari

Thanks Amu😃
Navya is out and the story is ended😉

Read the wholeee story in one go😎...suspence story eksath padne ka maaza hi kuch aur hai😉

This is one of the best story of urs👏...{but still ONE MONTH... is my fav😳}

Jab CS main Vasu-Arjun ko dekha toh maine socha arrey ye Vasu ko tune change q kar dia🤔...but badme khyati ki entry hui toh samajh gai aisa q kia😆

NIBIR's 1st meeting was scene was superb😳...dono k hi dil main kuch kuch hua😉

Kabiraa ne call kia toh Navya ne call utha lia🤔...aur Nisha banke baat ki😡

But thank god n u k coffee shop main Kabiraa Nishu se hi mila

Then 5 months leap n NIBIR in a relationship❤️

But Navya...Navya ka obsessed love for Kabir

Vasu-Arjun & NIBIR scene was nice...chalo unhe pata chal gaya😆

Vasu-Arjun ne Ramesh-Laxmi se baat kar li🥳...now everyone is ok wid NIBIR😳...But but but Navya...arrrghhh I hate her😡

Ab iske baad jo bhi suru hua...my god Shibu u just rocked👏

Navya ki dead body...NIBIR pe doubt...oh god!!

But I knew it k kuch toh gadbad hai🤔...Navya planned everything becoz usse laga Kabiraa luved her but Nishu snached him from her😲...Navya k obsessed luv ne sab bigaar dia

Sumit is a jerk😡...aise logo ko maar daalna chahiye😡

Feeling bad for Rupan-Mohan😭

But through out all this mess one thing jo nahi change hua vo hai NIBIR's love😳

I just luv this story❤️...thanx for writing this Shibu🤗...luv u🤗

PS= Shibu not to forget all the shayaris were mindblowing👏👏

PPS= I'm very very sorry for late comment Shibu...late comment karne ka record tod dia maine...SORRY😭

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Read the wholeee story in one go😎...suspence story eksath padne ka maaza hi kuch aur hai😉

This is one of the best story of urs👏...{but still ONE MONTH... is my fav😳}

Jab CS main Vasu-Arjun ko dekha toh maine socha arrey ye Vasu ko tune change q kar dia🤔...but badme khyati ki entry hui toh samajh gai aisa q kia😆

NIBIR's 1st meeting was scene was superb😳...dono k hi dil main kuch kuch hua😉

Kabiraa ne call kia toh Navya ne call utha lia🤔...aur Nisha banke baat ki😡

But thank god n u k coffee shop main Kabiraa Nishu se hi mila

Then 5 months leap n NIBIR in a relationship❤️

But Navya...Navya ka obsessed love for Kabir

Vasu-Arjun & NIBIR scene was nice...chalo unhe pata chal gaya😆

Vasu-Arjun ne Ramesh-Laxmi se baat kar li🥳...now everyone is ok wid NIBIR😳...But but but Navya...arrrghhh I hate her😡

Ab iske baad jo bhi suru hua...my god Shibu u just rocked👏

Navya ki dead body...NIBIR pe doubt...oh god!!

But I knew it k kuch toh gadbad hai🤔...Navya planned everything becoz usse laga Kabiraa luved her but Nishu snached him from her😲...Navya k obsessed luv ne sab bigaar dia

Sumit is a jerk😡...aise logo ko maar daalna chahiye😡

Feeling bad for Rupan-Mohan😭

But through out all this mess one thing jo nahi change hua vo hai NIBIR's love😳

I just luv this story❤️...thanx for writing this Shibu🤗...luv u🤗

PS= Shibu not to forget all the shayaris were mindblowing👏👏

PPS= I'm very very sorry for late comment Shibu...late comment karne ka record tod dia maine...SORRY😭

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Chapter 1- Lovely update😃😆😆

Very intriguing👏

Love how Kabir was annnoyed when Vasu called him Jojo😆

Loved Vasu-Kabir's conversation😆 And Arjun too joining in😆

Vasundhara- (murmuring to herself) jaisa baap, waisa beta...🤣🤣

Love the girls' reactions on seeing Kabir😆

She wasn't wailing for help though, infact, she was firing the person who hit her- Love this fact😃😆

Loved Nisha's intro' 😉

She turned and the world stopped for Kabir. Dressed in blue jeans and white t-shirt, she looked as innocent as a baby, as beautiful as an angel and yet was strong enough to handle the situation.- hayee😳 pehli nazar mein hi Kabir ki duniya hil gayi😆

Loved how just a mere glance at each other was enough to melt their hearts for each other😳

Loved how Nisha wanted to hide about the accident to save her parents from worrying😳😃

She looked so cute. Hold on! Main raste pe khade rehkar ek ladki ko admire kar raha hoon? He face palmed mentally - This part was too cute and adorable

Loved how both of them couldnt stop thinking about each other😳

Navya spoke to Kabir😆 Uske dil mein bhi laddo phoota😆 She hated lying but now she is lying to meet Kabir. Iss situation mein mujhe ek hi gaana sujhta hai "Pyaar hume kis mod pe le aaya"😆😉

So now Navya madam has planned to meet Kabir as Nisha😎

I love how u have built up the suspense👏😆 The development of the story has been done well👏

All in all, an interesting and pleasant read😉

Thanks Mihu🤗...for the "not-so-early comment"🤣
anyways, baaki comments bhi jaldi dena🤣
the comment did bringa smile on my face😃