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Posted: 9 years ago

Closure

With Naina already risking her life across the border, it was now Aalekh on the same path, risking his career and life, only and only for their mentor, Captain, naa,...Col. Rajveer Singh Shekhawat.

And though Yudi, Huda, Ali and Pooja were not actively present in the picture, it were them only who would accomplish the tasks, as and when notified by those mysterious letters. They were all giving it back to their mentor, in the truest form. And Neelu too had become a integral part of Ahluwalia family, doing her part, and securing peace and sanity in the small world of Ahluwaliyas, Shekhawats and Sharmas.

This bunch of six cadets had grown into selfless individuals who would risk their anything and everything, not only for their country, but also for each other and their mentor, binded in a thread of love, trust, strength and honour for one and all, binded by the events of Captain Naveen Ahluwaliya's life,

and by the principles of Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat,

by the love of Captain Naina Ahluwaliya Shekhawat,

by the virtues of Captain Aalekh Sharma,

by the enthusiasm of Captain Yadhuvansh Sahani,

by the scarifices of Captain Amardeep Huda,

by the honesty of Captain Ali Beigh,

by the positivity of Captain Pooja Ghai Beigh.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Well done Annie! Applauds 👏👏👏
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RNpoint1857

Well done Annie! Applauds 👏👏👏

thank you di😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RNlove4life


Thanks kajal.
The letters were being sent by naina, to Rajveer, consisting details of illegal activities that usually rake place near border areas. For an instance, you may read about how the drugs are being sent to Punjab from Afghanistan through Pakistan. But i didnt wanted to stick to one particular thing, thats why i just wrote 'illegal activities'. Even in original LRL show, they had shown how weapons were being sent out of the academy illegaly, by major nair.
i hope you got a clear view now. Feel free to ask, if u still have any doubts😊😊

thank u fr clearing about it. i gt it m ssrly happy that u r countinuing ur stury..!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweetmoon

When r u updating nxt?


Sweetmoon, I guess the story needs to stop here. Didn't u read the Closure part?
And the reason why I wish to stop this fic is because I do not see many readers following it. So it's better to discontinue this fic as no one is interested in it. I'll come up with new RN ff in sometime.

Also, as the title of this ff suggests, it was to show how the cadets are dedicated to their mentor, so and I think that point has come, where everyone has proven it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all a big sorry dear
As I was not able to comment for so long on ur work
As I was busy in my exam so didnt able to read anything
Now m back dear
Read ur entire story till scene 27 in one from where I left it
Seriously m liking ur writing skill very much
Keep it up do PM me

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rkchandni

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">First of all a big sorry dear</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">As I was not able to comment for so long on ur work</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">As I was busy in my exam so didnt able to read anything</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Now m back dear</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Read ur entire story till scene 27 in one from where I left it</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Seriously m liking ur writing skill very much</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Keep it up do PM me</font>



It's okay dear, you don't have to be sorry for this. As of now, this ff remains complete, though I believe some parts of it remained unexplored. I will try to complete the story in my next ff, hopefully.
Thanks again for taking it out time to read my ff. Hope your exams went well :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
hiii...just read this story...n i really enjoyed while reading this ff...

i liked everything...😊

or sabse bdi or achi bat ye ki naveen bhi jinda h jo ki bahot km stories me dekhne ko milta h...

naina's childish behaviour...strong bonding b/w raj n naina..

naina ka court me capt salve k against case ladna...how beautifully n perfectly u described each n every little thing👏

RN's romantic moments were best...raj ka purposal itne romantic way me...oh my god y i'm blushing😆

ab naina missing h...😭raj naina ki life me hi itna pain ku h...i hope wo log jldi hi milenge...no hope nhi...i know wo log jldi milenge😊

bt wait...whts dis yar..u r not continueing this ff...atleast ek part to or hona chahiye na...pls give this story a happy ending...pls its a request😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice story beautifully written today i have read 18 parts in one go & just like it all 18 updates are superb 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
ineed a nice story but why does you end so abruptly? abhi to raj-naina ko milna tha ek proper & happy ending to banti hai na
take your own time but plz continue whenever you get time & some idea & plz complete the story

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