MANAN: TWO BEATS TO A HEART character sketch on 07/06/2016

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AN INSIGHT:


hey u all..

again thought that another new story right??


i know.. but kya karuu.. muje tho ideas pe ideas aa rahi hai.. lekin aap log phikarnaa mat.. mai meri sab stories ko insaaf duungi.. sab ke sab update karuungi daily.. and hope u guys too help me in building my passion in writing via helping me through ur wishes, comments, votes and what not..

u guys are so sweet and for that sweetness i have started another story and this too i will be updating after 16th i.e., day after tomorrow!! happy??


i just wanted to write all the chapters and wanted to know ur reaction..

and as i said i am not a professional writer and these are first ever writings so i can tell u that i am keeping so much of efforts in thinking of how to present my thoughts so that those are understandable to all of u.. and the result of it is by receiving comments or votes from u guys..

i will be continuing my works from tomorrow night or day after tomorrow morning.. but pucca i will give an update of every story to all my lovely frnds

LIFE.. A big illusion.. we think of one thing.. but another will be happened.. we never know what will happen until we face it.. and some stories are like these.. we never know what is stored for us.. likewise this is a general fiction story portrayed in my favorite characters of MaNan, where a boy a very reserved types will be falling for a girl who was loved by his chotu bro too.. lets see what will happen with him


INDEX:

PROLOGUE

NOTE

NOTE ON 03/06/2016

CHARACTER SKETCH

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PROLOGUE:
hey guys, prologue is out for u.. and please give me ur views on it.. and trust me.. i will give my best in all my works so please give me a mental and a moral support because i lack self confidence.. will u help me?

now coming to prologue


Girl: I LOVE U

Boy: But i don't (avoiding eye contact with her)

Girl: (chuckles by seeing his behaviour) oh really?? then do the honors of telling that by seeing into my eyes

Boy: (in mind, god why can't she understand my situation, agar mai uske aankhon me dekhaa tho meri control lose karuungi aur sach bataaungi, nahi mai esaa nai kar saktaa..)

Girl: (in mind, muje pataa hai... tum bhi mujse pyaar karte ho, khaair mujse bhi jyaada pyaar karte ho, lekin boltaa kyun nahi ho.. muje pataa hai problem kyaa hai.. aur mey vo pblm bi solve karduungi agar mei tumhaare muh se vo teen shabdh sununga tho.. please bataa dona)

Boy: can't tell by seeing her eyes as her eyes has the magnetic effect which makes him drown in her eyes and to avoid the topic he leaves from there by telling i have work i have to go..


Girl sighs by his behaviour because she is been seeing his behaviour since 1 month and she is trying her best to know his feelings and lastly she has lost it and confronted him and the result is this which is repeated 3rd time in that week..


so guys, socho, who the boy and the girl might be?

and why the boy is rejecting the girl's love eventhough he loves her?


life mein kuch aise situations b hotaa hai jo hum chahe b kuch bi nahi kar paavu.. jaise ki hamari love aur hamari family.. we can't go against anyone of them and if the situations comes where ur lover was not accepted by ur family tho? or u can't love her tho? what will happen.. then some people think that it is better to leave before it starts as it will be good to all people.. but they won't think about their heart which is suffering with every ounce of the decision which they are taking..

kyaa vaise log kabhi khush rahoge agar o uski true love ko chod diya tho??

kyaa sach mein aise log hoge jaise uski bhaai ya behan ke liye uske true love chod doge?

kyaa itni selfless log bhi hoge??


so guys, do you want to see manik in this style then u all are welcome to this story as here he will be having so many different shades..


NOTE:

GUYS, I AM NOT A PROFESSIONAL WRITER SO IF ANYWHERE IN THIS STORY OR IN ANY OTHER STORY U FIND A MISTAKE DO TELL ME, I WILL CORRECT IT.

AND I AM NOT GOOD AT HINDI AS IT IS NOT MY MOTHER TONGUE BUT I WILL TRY MY BEST TO PRESENT IT WELL. I WILL BE BLESSED IF U PEOPLE CORRECT ME SO THAT I CAN GET A VALUE ADDITION BY THIS..

AND I PROMISE U THAT I WILL GIVE U REGULAR UPDATES BUT THEY MIGHT NOT BE LARGE ENOUGH AS I HAVE TO WRITE SO MANY STORIES AND IF U PEOPLE DEMAND LARGE ONES THO.. I WILL GIVE U A LARGE UPDATE ONLY ONCE IN A WEEK SO U PEOPLE CHOOSE WHICH TYPE U WANT.

IF U FIND MY STORIES WORTH TO READ PLEASE SHARE WITH UR FRNDS TOO.. I WILL BE BLESSED IF MY WORKS WERE BEEN READ BY MANY PEOPLE BECAUSE THAT IS MY OBJECTIVE TO REACH A WIDE AREA WHERE I CAN EXPRESS MY THOUGHTS LIKE A FREE BIRD.

LOVE YOU FRNDS...

TAKE CARE..

GIVE ME UR VIEWS ON THIS..

PLEASEEE...

MY WORKS:

1. A VAMPIRE AND HUMAN LOVE STORY - A MANAN FF

2. MERE RANG MEIN RANGNE WALI - A MANAN FF

3. LOVE HATE MONEY - A MANAN FF

4. MANAN OS - MANIK.. MY HERO

5. MANAN OS - LOVE IS POWERFUL

6. MANAN: THE REVENGE HATE STORY

7. MANAN: THE DEMON AND THE HUMAN

8. MANAN: THAT MAGICAL VOICE

9. MANAN: HE HATES GIRLS, SHE HATES BOYS

10. MANAN OS: THE MISS SO ARROGANT

11. MANAN: TWO BEATS TO A HEART


Edited by StarFlies39 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's sooo interesting concept ...
I would love to read more ...
continue soon ...
All the best for you exams!!!
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Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

int...cont soon

plz pm me


sure dear😊
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Originally posted by: manan_eku

It's sooo interesting concept ...
I 3ould love yo read more ...
continue soon ...
All the best for you exams!!!


aww tqq chotii😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update loved it continues soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey frnd(u didnt told ur name yet)
nice
prolouge
for the first tym i guess a girl is proposing nd the boy is rejecting
intetesting thought
plzzz continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Etna sare diffrent idea.. How do u manage so much Yaar...
Just great. EVEN This concept is amazing .. And will love to read this story too :)
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Note:
Dear friends I am extremely sorry.. actually i had written all the stories and i don't know what happened. when opened the files to update them tho all the files got deleted..

it is really a big wala problem because not only the story files but also many of my books and files all got deleted yaar.. abhi tho mujhe utna strength b nahi hai.. phir type karne me..

so the decision is up to u..

if u ppl insist tho i will again start typing now, if u ppl are ok with it then i will start typing tomorrow morning..

please reply me frnds.. i am so sorry eventhough it is not my mistake but some virus in my system but i am an intermediary between u and my system na.. thats y i am taking the blame on me..

and frnds, i really liked ur response.. please be with me and please give me ur opinion.. i will wait for an hour.. and after that based on the opinion i will continue the work whether to sleep or to type..

please please reply me..

take care friends..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Of course u should continue the stories..
I really like them..

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