Ishra FF:Tu humnava mera shot 6 pg 117 sep 26

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello lovelies...
well I know I had said that I will not bore you with my stories till my exams are over but what to do can't help writing when I have some new concepts doing all the dance forms of the world in my head

ok I want to dedicate this to someone who did something for me last night but didn't take my thankyou
so here I am thanking you with a story Ashmi n Sapna Di😊
I hope you like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PROLOGUE😊
A college campus...four handsome guys standing in the corridor three of them were drooling over the girls passing by n sometimes flirting with them too but his focus was on the end of the corridor...he was waiting for her but she was taking forever to come
Mihir-kya raman abhi bhi wait kar raha hai
(oh raman you are still waiting)
n the much awaited moment came she was dressed in a simple green saree with gold border walking towards him all greeting her
R-there she is...haaye maar daala
Ashok-have some shame yrr...she's our teacher...how can you
raman got angry n held his collar
R-teacher hogi tumhari...meri to jaanemann hai...meri ishu jaan
(she must be your teacher but for me she's my sweetheart my ishu my love my life)
he said with a dreamy smile
Prateek-ye marvayega hume kisi din
(he'll surely get up beaten up some day)
R-we'll see one day you all will call her bhabhi n not mam
ishita just passed by them n all wish her a good morning except raman
who just wispered "i love you jaanemann...good morning" which ishu heard n gave him a deadly glare

ok that's all for now
waiting for your responses...
Edited by akriti154 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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INDEX

SHOT 1

SHOT 2

TEASER

SHOT 3

SHOT 4

SHOT 5

TEASER

SHOT 6

THREAD 2
Edited by akriti154 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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updated a prologue
hav a look
Edited by akriti154 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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main bhi res

unres


oh my god
this is such a sweet surprise akku
I love u re

n coming to the prologue
shameless bhalla apni Tr pe line maar rahi hai
mihir, bala aur ashok aap log kuch sambalke rehna unki saath
nahin toh ek din sach mein marwaayegi JKR ki haathon se aap donom ko

aur madam toh aise glare karke chali gayi ki bechara dar gayi
main bhi na?
yeh toh Raman bhalla hai Jo kisise darta nahin
n the gdmrng wish was too awesome re
I truly loved it

update soon
Edited by Roohachu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice prologue..
update full story asap..
im liking this rkb..
i want to know ishu reaction for his actions..
Edited by abhisree - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow .
Superb start Dr.
Raman is ishu's student
Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb start
Plz continue soon
Plz pm me ur stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
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faabulaous
teacher-student love story...
u know what
the besst part was that dialogue
"i love u meri janemann"
hayye
Akku yaar tere dimaag m aise ideas kaha se aate hai yaar..
awesome
continue soon
but padhai p dhyaan de yaar
i know i know tu kaheegi tanu yaar mera fav subject that
revisonn to ho gyi thi and all
but phir bhi studies aere more imp
PS:waise m bhi wahi kar rahi hoon😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Armor_ishra..

faabulaous

teacher-student love story...
u know what
the besst part was that dialogue
"i love u meri janemann"
hayye
Akku yaar tere dimaag m aise ideas kaha se aate hai yaar..
awesome
continue soon
but padhai p dhyaan de yaar
i know i know tu kaheegi tanu yaar mera fav subject that
revisonn to ho gyi thi and all
but phir bhi studies aere more imp
PS:waise m bhi wahi kar rahi hoon😆


thnxx tanu
m glad u lykd d concept
well is baar its nt d case
jo mra nxt xam h dats d mst boring subject n to be honest abhi maine ek chapter b complete ni kiya h
mann e ni lg ra

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