Kuch Toh Hai Tere Mere Darmiyaan -- A ShraMan TS (Completed Pg 8)

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After the fantastic, emotionally brilliant, feeling wise enlightening Episode... I thought of penning this down. Do enjoy this emotional Three Shot! Please leave behind your valuable Love, as usual. Let's begin!!šŸ˜›šŸ˜‰


Kuch Toh Hai Tere Mere...
~~Darmiyaan~~



Part One



Suman sobbed , sitting in the Park. Her eyes were brimming with tears with loud, harsh words ringing - "Nikal Jao Yahan Se". She seriously felt life was harsh to her. First- she had the audacity to hurt, break and what not... To Shravan. He had loved her with all his heart.. And what did she do? Break it so casually in her ego, attitude, coolness and stupid school antics. She was the reason that Shravan no more trusted love. And he had " Moved On ". She deserved this. Deserved to be thrown out of the House for all that she had done. Her horrendous mistakes of the past couldn't be undone. But she felt, she deserved another chance to rectify them. Was it too much that she was asking for? Probably yes.


Flashback

Heartbroken, Sumo returned to her home. Her heart was swollen with guilt, frustration, anguish and sadness. Her melancholy was reaching new heights as her heart sank in all that she read today. So much he had felt for her. And she?
Thinking all this, she entered the house, all lost. It was Mami's cough that brought her out of her trance.

" Tum Kahan thi Suman?", she asked, displeased.
"Ji?", muttered Sumo.

" Maine Poocha tum kidhar thi ab tak?"
"Ji, Mamiji, woh main Shra...", she stopped, realising in what respect what she being asked.
She looked down, in shame.

" Yeh lo Ji! Dekha, aapki Laadli ka gul khilaa rahi hai"... Began the Drama.
"Ohh Ji sunnte Ho?! Dekhiye, yahan Aayiye Zara"

Then started the blame game. She blamed Sumo for bringing disgrace to their house. Her love was pointed at, again and again as she had to listen all sorts of crap from Mamiji, Mausiji. Nanu was hearing all this from the top balcony that overlooked the Hall. And what she saw in his eyes was disgrace and disgust upon her.

"Poocha thaa naa Humne, wahi din ki kya baat hai! Kya boli thi tum? Sirf dost hain", babbled Maami.

" Aree par main toh khaali uski packing mein...", explained Suman. But she was cut off .

"Dekho tum jhoot mat bolna! Kaminiji ka phone aaya tha. Sab bataaya unhone. Dost yoon hath mein haath pakadke nahi baithte. Ram! Ram! Kya Kaliyug hai! Dekha aapne Babuji?", she taunted him.

Sumo could not take it anymore. She had already betrayed his love once, not again.
" Haan main karti Hoon pyaar usse!", she freaked out.

"Kya kaha tumne? Sunn lo sab log! Bhai Besharmi ki bhi..."
"Maamiji! Bass!!"
She shouted. She had loved him, with all her heart. She always had. It wasn't that her love had cropped up today. It was a ten year old journey... Only if these people could understand.

Sumo didn't wish to argue more. So, she started walking towards her Room.
"Nikal jao yahan se!"said Mamiji. Initially, Sumo couldn't register the words. But when she shouted it again, she was all the more heartbroken.

" Suman, Nikal jao! Aur jab uska bhoot utar jaaye naa, tabhi iss Ghar mein aana"



So here she was, at the park bench, sobbing all alone.

She dialled Shravan but his cell was unavailable. Thrown out from her house, without money, food, clothes... Where could she go?
Only one thing played in her mind: Shravan was to leave the very next day and they needed to talk.





Love,
Mahiā¤ļø
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Mannmohanaa thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Index



Part One- Pg 1

Part Two- Pg 5

Part Three- Pg 8
Edited by Artist_Forever - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a tragic scene
But suman's realisation and her standing up for love was worth it
Hope they talk soon and confess their love
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one
waiting for next update
I can really imagine Mamaji creating such a scene.
Superb šŸ‘
Please update soon.šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautifully penned
Loved suman's repentance n thought
Argh!! I so much hate mami, masi n kameeni 🤢 😔
N so much disappointed by nanu šŸ˜•
Nw hoping that shravan picks the call or get to knw abt that n we get to see a mr shravan malhotra, the lawyer in action. So want to see him bajaoing mami, masi n kameeni's band n putting sme sense in nanu's head
N finally our shraman have their cnfession n happily ever after 😊 😳
Cntinue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ooh interesting start! Update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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An emotional start to the story. Very well written. I am glued to this. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I so so hate Kamini and Maamiji
I want to throttle them to death
Like seriously?
Anyways it was great
And i am so looking forward to their conversation
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Too gud yar šŸ‘ ...amazing start. Yay!! Sumo confessed her love in front of her whole family...hats off. That's like our sumo, standing strong in every condition. Kya ghuma k diya usne mami ko šŸ˜‰ ...how dare she insult her love . loving this story ā¤ļø . update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry for the delay Mahii 😃 Its beautiful dear ...do continue ...eagerly waiting for the next part. Thank you so much for the pm.

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