SS: MAN OF STEEL ch 3 , pg 5 3/6 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good start. So waiting to read more about man of steel, Raizada! 😳

And why does Khushi have this deep attraction to danger? Certainly will be a good plot, I am guessing!

Best,
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woah!! A sci-fic!! This is awesomeee!!
A brilliant prologue with a flawless write-up, you've certainly made my day!
I'm in love with the concept already.
Having said that, I demand the chapter one of the story as soon as possible.
And yup! Thanks for the PM as well.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome! CK (Superman) and LL are my fav couple...loved to see them as Arnav and Khushi :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mother of the FALLEN STAR

[rasina (vill.) karnal 1990]

"I think you should marry another girl , mother-in-law is right you deserve to have a child which I cannot give to you " kepping a big rock on my heart , I finally let these words out to my husband of eight years , I know that I will never be able to give him a child . devastation , heart break and finally realization has come to me .i look at him but he still remains silent just like the earlier times . I resume my work of reaping wheat , we own a small piece of land ,our only means of earning . but this earning is quite sufficient as we two live alone ,being thrown out of our joint family to strive at our own .

My eyes suddenly caught something in the sky , I stand up immediately so do my husband (rakesh) . our eyes still at the new morning sky which is still engulfed in darkness at 3:30 am. It looked like a comet or falling star . I tightly clutch my husband's arm scared ,as this star come in much clear view , it fly over us still illuminating blue and falls into the water canal around 500 meters away from us. For a second I felt the earth beneath us tremble . my husband ran to the canal , I follow him scared to be left alone . thankfully , canal is low in water level , since it is the harvesting season . blue light is still illuminating from the star , making everything around it shine in blue . my husband takes careful step towards it , when his hands come near , its light goes off . we are astonished to see some kind of machine , for a second I think it to be a missile or something .

It looked like a full metallic spherical ball , with a big S written on its right . I have never been a curious child but I feel as if this thing is calling me near it . I take some steps near it , while my husband is still trying to figure out what this thing is . I put both my hands on the glass window and bring my eyes closer to see what lays inside . suddenly I felt a red light scan my eyes , I back off scared . I took deep breath to calm my nerves down , my husband pulls my hand telling me to go away and call sarpanch but ignoring him I still stand there looking at the star . I don't remember from where I got the strength to go back to the machine , but I did and I ran my hand throw its window again .

To our surprise , it opened sliding down its panel made of glass , leaving us to look at a small child of few months sleeping without a care of the world . his little body covered in red cloth , tears leaves my eyes on their own accord as I lift this mesmerizing child in my arms , he snuggles more into my arms as a response to my sweet kisses . I have never felt so complete as , I did holding that child in my arms . he felt a piece of me who have been lost for so long and have finally retuned back to his mother .

[One week later ]

my wishes to great almighty has been finally answered , he have gifted me my son . I smile still looking at him . from past one week he had been asleep, lying on our bed , I have tried waking him up but to no use , my heart had cried thinking that he might leave alone again ,making me motherless . my husband had requested me to take him to a hospital , but call it mother instinct of something , I have never obliged fearing the question they will ask .

I took my little star son in my arms, bringing his head near my chest , kissing his forehead. Tear of sadness leave my eyes afraid to loss him , they fell on his cheeks , his eyes , I am too sad to wipe them off . I look at his lovely face again ,taking it all inside my memories one last time . just then he open his eyes for the first time and I look at them mesmerized, blue as ocean , million of star twinkling in his little eyes .his eyes are something that I have never seen before .

ARNAV , my son . .

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[raisina (vill.) 2005]

"I wanted to hurt him back dad ! . I hate him . he always bully everyone . what if he is the son of village head . "

"arnav , I have told you control your anger . both your ma and me wants protect you , why don't you understand "

"I am much more stronger than him , I could have thrown him with little finger "

"arnav! You wont do anything like that , do you understand ?"

"but why dad ?"

"they will hurt you , son ?"

"why ?"

"because they are scared of things that they don't understand , you are different from them , they will fell threatened and will want you to kill "

"arnav beta ! no more argument with dad , have your dinner "

"but mom ! "

"shh.. I am still angry from you because of your little stunt of crushing , mr. talwar s

tractor . "

"haaa..."

"haaa..."

" oho ! now why both father and son are laughing . don't you two high five like that . no matter how bad they treat us , revenge is not the answer understood arnav "

"understood mother , no more crushing tractors . "

"no more throwing , crushing , hitting anything "

"hmm..."

"haaa..."

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Rakesh (arnav's dad )

Arnav

Radha( arnav's mom)

Hope you like , a very small update . next chapter would be all meeting of arnav khushi .

Edited by bloodyeyes - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow...Arnav as superman and Khushi as Lois Lane...would be awesome to read...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Superb update
Loved it
Well written
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg arnav is not like any other normal children...he posses superpowers... awesome concept...waiting for arshi meeting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow! The story is similar to that of Superman's and so I'm more eager than ever to know whats gonna happen next!
Again a flawless chapter with a beautiful description of maternal emotions. That was overwhelming one.
Now that certainly answers why Arnav didn't punch the bully in the first chapter. It was his parents teachings that held him back. Good, every good!
Please update the next chapter soonish!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting updates
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome parts
Plz add me to ur PM list

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