RVWC-3S- hard trap & willing sheep shot 3@1 on 25/10 ~COMPLETED~ - Page 16

part 3 -

so the boy was adopted, Maan is sooo nice awww👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 lovely heart, and Geet's the first to admit her feelings 😕 i'm more old fashioned i like the man to be the first but who cares i liked the confession bit

So Maan took it all the way home 😆😆😆😆😆😆 finally Geet fell for him even after 5 years but he deserves it, actually in this OS i'm happy Geet was first because i loved Maan's perseverance and him instilling to the baby boy that Geet his is mum even if she's unknown to that fact 😆😆😆😆


lovely story and beautifully written

thank you

Originally posted by: sophiexx

part 2 -

finally the kid and Geet meet, must say his quite cute and Maan is sure shot clever, shutting his boy up with the mummy threat 😆

Geet's falling for him even though she believes his married 😲 but kya kare 😉 Maan hai he aisa 😆

This trap thing is good, and willing sheep for sure fits Geet. Falling into teh trap as expected by Maan, although Maan did use the bad tricks, poor geet suffered the tension for no reason

I liked the part

thank you

glad u loved it dear... well in the three shots... i managed only this hard trap 😆😆

Originally posted by: sophiexx

part 3 -

so the boy was adopted, Maan is sooo nice awww👏 lovely heart, and Geet's the first to admit her feelings 😕 i'm more old fashioned i like the man to be the first but who cares i liked the confession bit

So Maan took it all the way home 😆 finally Geet fell for him even after 5 years but he deserves it, actually in this OS i'm happy Geet was first because i loved Maan's perseverance and him instilling to the baby boy that Geet his is mum even if she's unknown to that fact 😆


lovely story and beautifully written

thank you

well lets say Maan was planning something... but Geet started her rant so his work became easy so no more hard trap and she became the sheep lil bit early 😆😆

Sorry for the late response!😛

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Sorry for the late response!😛

Nice plot n a well written story. ..

But the intro would always remain my favourite. .. it's one of the best given prologue😃

Thanks for attempting😊 n do keep writing!

yo! thanks for the comment... even intro is my favorite... cuz when i wrote them i never think of the rest... but writing chapters i have to take everything into consideration 😆😆

Originally posted by: kabslocks

Fabulous TS

thnk u 😳

Aww... Sanmaan is cho cute...

Originally posted by: sapnapari

Aww... Sanmaan is cho cute...

Maan in love wid Get frm d start.. That's fab...

It's soo beautifully penned down...

I always knew u r just superb shona... ye le huggie... 🤗

awww thnks darlz...

nice story loved reading it...😊

Cute one
Maan waited for GEET that too 7 yrs
Choo cheewt