Tears of Love-Thahaan OS Part 2 updated on page 3 18-4-2016

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys, so this an OS , this is my first ever time doing writing something creative and posting it online. I just got inspired reading all those wonderful works on thahaan in this forum. So a big sorry to all as this is not that much good. But do read and tell me what you think...
So my story takes place after yesturdays incident. I haven't watched the epi, just read the analysis, great work KowsiπŸ‘, loved it. And while reading this forget serial wala thapki. This is what I think she ought to feel, just my thoughts...
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Tears of Love
It was really late butThapki was still standing there on the terrace looking at the moon.She didn't feel like going to the room.She didn't know why, she knew there was a part of her dying to see him, feel him but there was also another part of who was afraid to meet his eyes, his anger, his hatred... no he can't really hate her, can he? Why , why does it hurt her to accept that he hates her? Why is she afraid, is it her guilt or is it that he might read her feelings for him ,in her eyes? But what does she feel for him???She was not sure...
It was getting really cold out there. Thapki hugged herself for warmth but it only brought her train of thoughts back to him. A night like this ,when to keep her warm he gave her his jacket. How she felt his hands around her, how she felt warm and safe in his hands just like today. Just like today...how he saved her respect, how he still cares for, how content she felt with his hands around her, how complete she felt taking prasad with him, how lost she felt when after reaching their room he separated himself from her, how it broke her heart to see him walk away from her leaving her all alone, how much she wished to be with him, to have his hand in hers , always together...
She walked into the room with her heart full of questions she knew answers to but was not ready to answer. As she opened the door, the sight surpriced her, she wasn't expecting this, her lips widening into a smile. There he was sitting on the bed , all curled up, with his head tilted to the right and mobile in his hands. He was fast asleep. He must have fallen asleep while playing the games, she thought. How cute, he looked. His childlike innocence lingerering on his face, she could have stayed there at the doorstep all night lost in his cuteness.
Climbing on the bed without making any noise, she gently took the mobile from his hands and kept it aside.What next, she thought. She wanted to be only there, beside him. She was suddenly taken aback when he turned around pulling herself towards him. She couldn't move. He had locked her in a tight embrace. They were so close, she could hear his heartbeats and her's too racing ahead as in a marathon. She tried to get out of his hold, finding it impossible to resist her unspoken feelings but wrong idea, he pulled her even more closer to him. His soft breath fell on her lips senting chills all over her.'Bihaan' was all she could manage to to say.'Chuk chuk gadi',a soft whispher ,but she heard it, she also heard the pain, the love, the hurt ,the yearning in his voice. She looked up , he was still asleep but his face ,it broke her heart. 'Kyum,kyu kiya aisa' , he whisphered still asleep and a tear escaped from his eyes. She closed her eyes as his pain, his love-that tear made its way onto her face , into her heart. She no more could hold her tears. As they overflowed, the tears were no more his , no more hers, they were one, they were theirs , thier tears of love...
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So guys, please do comment, I want to know to what you think. Please be honest and feel free to say whatever you feel😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Why do you think it is not that good??
It is awesome...😊

Just what we expect & want to see in the show...Thapki & Bihaan...πŸ˜‰

It was nicely written, & the end part was too good...their tears becoming one...along with their hearts!!😳

PS: The imagination of Bihaan sleeping with a phone in his hand...πŸ˜†πŸ˜† too good, & cute...I am unable to get the picture out of my mind...

Thanks for writing this OS...It was a dull epi. today, so this was much needed...πŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanku so much for this... I was dying to read something like this... If you check the main forum you can see my request to the writers to write something romantic ... was really pissed off after todays epi..
Once again thanku so much.. Its awsome... 😊 πŸ‘ 😳 ...
Please keep writing moree...
And yes here we have one more talented writer for our forumm... 😳 πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: oceanbubble

Why do you think it is not that good??

It is awesome...😊

Just what we expect & want to see in the show...Thapki & Bihaan...πŸ˜‰

It was nicely written, & the end part was too good...their tears becoming one...along with their hearts!!😳

PS: The imagination of Bihaan sleeping with a phone in his hand...πŸ˜†πŸ˜† too good, & cute...I am unable to get the picture out of my mind...

Thanks for writing this OS...It was a dull epi. today, so this was much needed...πŸ‘

Thanks a lot Oceanbubble , happy you liked it. Its just that , I have never really wrote anything like this before.I was really afraid.
@bold I always wanted to see such a scene on the show, so I just made it come true in the os
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice! Really liked it! You should write more often!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Myu..

Thanku so much for this... I was dying to read something like this... If you check the main forum you can see my request to the writers to write something romantic ... was really pissed off after todays epi..
Once again thanku so much.. Its awsome... 😊 πŸ‘ 😳 ...
Please keep writing moree...
And yes here we have one more talented writer for our forumm... 😳 πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Thankyou so much. Yup I saw your post just after I posted my os. I read the wu of todays epi, good thing I didn't watchπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great piece of work anjo..πŸ‘πŸ‘
Totally loved it 😳😳
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Pls metion about this in the pinned OS link wala post...it will be helpful to dplee di to update πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow wow ! That was so good, so beautiful, so dreamy, so romanticafter today's dull episode, this os really made my dayπŸ‘awesome!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you thank you, and welcome to forum. And your os is superb, like most of our writers, and this is exactly what I carved for. So cute.
And plx plan to write another..
Once again your os is awsome.
Thapki thinking about bihaan on trace was may fav part, and bihaan embrace her and those lines too good..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Angel.. Thanks for writing this! It's so damn cute and emotional. I can still feel the lump in back of my throat.. It's so so good. Please write some more.

One thing, can you please comment this os's link in fan fiction index which is pinned on the main page? I need to update it there and as I am on vacation, I am not able to keep track.. You can also send me a pm.

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