Liked the ending. The way you have given a redemption for Lakshya, him seeing the error of his ways, rebuilding his life in a purposeful manner and asking for forgiveness for his misdeeds: one hopes, we shall see a Lakshya coming to his senses like this, on the show also.
The way you have depicted SwaSan life of togetherness: very romantic and passionate, yet with a real sense of companionship and stability. How a married couple should be, supporting each other and being there for each other through thick and thin.
Pleasure to read! Looking forward to more from you.
 
 
 
  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
  
  
 
 
  
 
  
  
 
  
  
 
  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
        