His trust- Swasan os part 2b pg 6 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Akanksha...

Liked the ending. The way you have given a redemption for Lakshya, him seeing the error of his ways, rebuilding his life in a purposeful manner and asking for forgiveness for his misdeeds: one hopes, we shall see a Lakshya coming to his senses like this, on the show also.

The way you have depicted SwaSan life of togetherness: very romantic and passionate, yet with a real sense of companionship and stability. How a married couple should be, supporting each other and being there for each other through thick and thin.

Pleasure to read! Looking forward to more from you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
super duper update
jst loved it
damn gud..
Swasan became one
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome ending.
Glad Lucky is finding his own way now and Rags is getting help. 😊
Swasan are just
Sanskaar imitating Swara omd 🤣 ☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read all the parts in one go...
So beautiful OS. ...
Loved it dear. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read all the parts together. Awesome updates Akanksha.👏
Loved it so much!!!😃

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